Date: 06/18/14 02:51 am Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
;-; oh jesus... i cant stop smirking i loved it :3
Date: 06/14/14 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
I just read this in one go and will probably be a wreck in the morning when my daughter wakes me up... But dammit, it was worth it. :-) What a lovely story! I love how you took Bill and Tom's characters and twisted them up a notch or two. Stayed away from making them caricatures of themselves, but just barely. And it works. Wonderfully. Mostly because you have a OC, Scout, and Gustav to balance them out. (And I usually don't like OC's, but I really like Scout I will admit!) The whole thing has a good flow to it, even if the first chapter was mostly a list of characters with just a little barely there story thrown in. It was enough to make me curious though, enough for me to finish it all. :-) Loved it. And I will pimp it at TokioHotelSlash on Livejournal in the future! Thank you for the read!
Date: 04/22/14 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
I know I'm late but I loved how this story went. It was the perfect ending, and this won't be the last time I read it. You can count on that! Thank you for writing and sharing! This bought out so many different emotions in me, but I've loved every step of the way. Thank you.
Date: 04/02/14 12:11 am Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
Yes please...a one shot of B & Gs wedding would be great!
I had my doubts about their relationship and was really glad to see they've gotten their bond back and they feel & act like brothers!
Date: 04/01/14 07:24 am Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
Cutest ending ever!!!!!
Date: 04/01/14 02:02 am Title: Chapter 10- And They All Lived Happily Ever After
Very cute ending! I would love to see a one-shot about their wedding! Great story :D
Date: 03/23/14 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Do
For once, i am reviewing on my phone and dont have the energy to write ĺ long review right now. I will do it later, i promise! :) this chapter was absolutely perfect! I loved it with all my heart! I was so touched by it all! I might even have shed ĺ tear or two. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Long or short, I appreciate all of your wonderful reviews! And I'm so happy that you liked this. I was a little unsure of these last few chapters, I just wanted to get them written so badly that at times I feel I rushed it too much. But knowing you liked it definitely gives me confidence in it! I hope you enjoy the epilogue, which is up now! :)
Date: 03/23/14 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Do
Love this!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 03/21/14 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Do
OMG I FUCKING LOVED IT SO MUCH I CRIED! I'm so glad they made up and I knew that he was going to ask that. I hope someone answers that phone because I fucking called it.
Author's Response: Lol! I'm so happy that you liked this!
Date: 03/21/14 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Do
Awww! How sweet!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 03/14/14 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 8- Saying Sorry At Last
I'm so happy they forgave him! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 03/10/14 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 8- Saying Sorry At Last
awww
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/10/14 10:08 am Title: Chapter 8- Saying Sorry At Last
I'm so glad it all worked out, and that Bill accepted Tom's apology. Maybe he didn't accept it as much as he should, but maybe it'll come in time? I'm sure he's glad to have his brother back after all those years. And I guess it makes him happy to know that he's finally got Tom's approval. Not that he wouldn't do great without it - cause if someone can't accept you for who you are then they are not worth it at all. But it must be good for him nonetheless to have his twin back.
It's good that Tom realized that he's been a coward. I love that seeing Gustav and Bill kiss doesn't bother him, anymore. :) That's a great step. And yes, I understand that he doesn't want to them going at it.. since they are brothers and all. But I sure as well wouldn't mind seeing that. Uhm. Yeah so... anyway.
Very glad that it all worked out with Scout as well ^^ I really like her. and it's rare that I enjoy an OFC, or another girl being with Tom... But I have to admit that she is perfect for him, and so kind to Bill. Usually, in stories like this, the fiance are so cruel to Bill -- so I'm glad she's not.
Now, I'm just hoping that Tom can confront his friends as well. I mean, they have been making fun of BIll, and hurt Tom's feelings as well, and made him insecure, so they should apologize or at least stop it -- otherwise I don't think Tom should be friends with them anymore. I know that's how I feel -- I can make fun of my siblings as much as I please, but if someone else does it, be it my friends or random people - it fucking hurts. No one is allowed to insult them but me.
I can't wait for the wedding! I'm sure it's going to be wonderful. oooooh, I can't wait to find out what Tom's going to ask Bill ;) I think I know, but I'm not too sure so I'll just wait and see. :) I love this ^^
Author's Response: I always love reading your reviews, they always put a smile on my face :DrnrnI agree with you on the part about not minding seeing Bill and Gustav go at it, lol. I've always loved that pairing, it's probably my favourite (aside from Bill/Tom of course). And all I have to do is close my eyes to see them going at it, haha. Okay, I'm going to stop being a perv now.rnrnI also agree about finding it hard to enjoy OFC's most of the time, but for me, I don't really like when there is more than one slash pairing in a story…I don't know, its sort of a pet peeve I guess, I find when every pairing in a story is slash that it makes it unrealistic and takes away from the main pairing. So usually if there is one slash pairing in a story, I am much more likely to like any OFC's that might be with the other characters. Anyway, I'm getting off topic, lol. I'm glad you liked Scout!rnrnAnd I never really thought about Tom confronting his friends. I've been so focused on Tom and Bill and their relationship, I didn't even think to include that. I definitely should of though!rnrnThank you so much for your reviews!!! <333
Date: 03/10/14 02:09 am Title: Chapter 8- Saying Sorry At Last
Loved this chapter! I think I know what Toms going to ask!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I bet you your right about the question XD
Date: 03/09/14 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 8- Saying Sorry At Last
This is so cute! I love that they are working on their issues. That ending scene was so cute I squealed. I am also super happy that Tom and Scout and getting married. I would've been a little mad if they didn't. And I know what the question is....
Author's Response: Yeah, I would never be so cruel as to end it without a wedding. Bill simply worked too hard! haha. THank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/08/14 09:19 am Title: Chapter 7-Mother Knows Best
Jorg....Jorg....Jorg!!!! I hate him with every fiber in my being! How can you hurt your child for wanting to be different?! Forcing him to be something he's not is like making a dog eat cat food, stay in the house like a cat and meow like a cat. You can't force your ideals on someone. I honestly think that growing up in this environment is why Tom treats Bill that way. Had he seen that he should be protecting him he would not treat Bill the way he does. He wouldn't even be embarrassed.
On to Simone, I love her. She just sat there and let Tom figure it out for himself which is the right thing to do and not tell him what he should do. Had she just told him he wouldn't have discovered why he acted that way.
It;s also really nice to see some of his past and get a bit of an explanation on why he behaves the way he does. Now it doesn't seem like unexplained bull.
Overall, I fucking loved this chapter and I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I appreciate hearing your thoughts! And I'm glad the explanation seemed to work, I was afraid I didn't do a good job explaining it. Thank you again! Next chapter is now up!
Date: 03/07/14 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 7-Mother Knows Best
Yay, finally a little Tom POV. I can understand him a little better now. Its not an excuse, but its understandable. He can't stand people hurting Bill and he hasn't come to terms with everythig yet... And since he was a little child when their parents divorced, i dont blame him for thinking it was Bill's fault.. kids dont know any better. I guess its because this whole... Thing with Bill is something he cant control and he cant do anything to stop Bill from being hurt.. thats why its been so hard on him. I still feel sorry for Bill as well cause he hasn't done anything wrong yet no one has ever asked Tom how he feels about everything. I just hope Tom can fix it and realize that even though he cant always protect Bill, he cant at least accept him and support him. :) i hope it all works out -- between the twins and between tom and scout :) she's lovely! I absolutely love this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love your reviews, they always make me smile :)
Date: 03/07/14 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 7-Mother Knows Best
Yes it does makes sense. I cried reading this. Such a wonderful story, please update :,)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews, I appreciate them all! And I'm so glad that you thought this chapter made sense haha. Thank you again!! <33333
Date: 03/07/14 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 6-Bachelor Party Disaster
Tom needed to hear that, and oh man. I will NOT feel sorry for Tom, he definitely needs to sort out the issues he has with Bill.
Date: 03/07/14 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
While i was certainly lol-ing at Bills change and the beers and all the 'manly' stuff he pointed out. I just still can't help but feel sad for him, he shouldn't have to change. And I agree with Gustav I hope he doesn't end up getting hurt.