Date: 07/07/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 12 - Three's A Crowd
I could feel the Andreas relationship coming on. It's not a real relationship for Bill just a means for him to try and get over Tom. What a shity thing to do to a friend.
Date: 07/07/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - Klarheit
Why? You just keep saying the same thing over and over. But what is different what has changed for Tom?
Date: 07/07/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 10 - Green (or Deal)
What a sad little mess they're in.
Date: 07/07/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 9 - ...Is Paved With Good Intentions (or Homecoming)
I wonder what good Bill thinks will.come of this talk. I wonder how long it will take Bill to wear down Tom. I wonder what will eventually break him down?
Date: 07/06/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Road To Hell...
Lol I wonder if they think Tom masterbated in there? Lol
Date: 07/06/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Cannes
And there's the problem Bill says he wants one thing and Tom.says he wants another. But I'm darn sure Tom wants the same thing as Bill. Bill just has more courage to fight for it.
Date: 07/06/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Allein (or Pretend To Carry On)
Oh lord what a mess!
Date: 07/06/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - In Die Nacht (or Fuck To Forget)
They are so sad. I wish Tom could figure out that hey are better together then apart and he's not doing Bill any favors.
Date: 07/06/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Narcissism In A Minor
Poor Tom trying to do the right thing instead of the thing that feels right. And this last bit is only going to confuse Bill.
Date: 07/06/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Best Friends Means...
Bill needs a solid why Tom has rejected him to be able.to get some closure.
Date: 07/06/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Pitfalls of Soundproofing
Well that was totally out of the blue. Why does Tom really want to stop? Because he wants to protect Bill? That's what it feels like.
Date: 07/06/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Tomorrow
What a list. Pretty short for how old they are. I guess the little stuff doesn't count.
Date: 06/08/10 08:31 pm Title: Epilogue - Ready
...Neverending Stoooorrrryyyyy...
Author's Response: I was going to finish the song for you, but then I realized there was no way you would probably get the implied tune behind my "Ah ah ah"s. But know I was gonna. <_< I need those music notes they have on closed captions.
Date: 05/09/10 12:42 pm Title: Epilogue - Ready
*thunderous applause* ohmigod, fantastic!!! Toms feeling were just amazing in this. I josting LOVE YOU.
Date: 05/05/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1 - Tomorrow
Plz forgive me about my horrible English ;__;
I don't even count how many time I read this fic. Again and again, and the feeling still the same: a little hurt, somewhat happy, sometimes I think I'm insane, i don'n know *lol*
The first time I read it, I cry at Tom's sentence"I know you didn't. So I did it for you".
The second time, when Bill pick Tom's guitar.
The third time, chapter about Narcissus.
The fourth time, Bill and the goodbye kiss.
Everytime after, everything clench my heart, hurtly.
I really love Tom in this fic. The 'Strong One', the Older Brother fight against himself for his Love, his Most Important person. I don't know how to express it. And now, when I write those words, my eyes are brimming.
Well~ I wonder if this story could be real?
Date: 04/20/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 17 - The Strong One
That's so sad. I'm nearly crying. God, Tom is so strong. That's pure love.
Date: 04/13/10 01:07 pm Title: Epilogue - Ready
Hey!
just wanna say that i think this story =BRILLIANT
so good that i sat here and read it all in one go when i should be revising...
This story is very well written and it seems so real...
i loved the character of tom u created..and it is so good that i will re-read it again xo
Date: 02/02/10 01:14 am Title: Epilogue - Ready
Oh, God! I love it!
I found this fic first in Spanish, the translation... so, I decided to read it in English... My English is good enought to understand, hahaha, but I'm bad translator!
I really love the entire story! It's such a beautiful fic!
I like this Tom, so strong, so jelaus, so hot... but, he loves his brother as long as I love chocolate! And Bill... God, how a tender boy! But he's stronger!
Do you know what I like the most of this fic? That you can say "This could be in real life"
Well, now I'm gonna wait for the Spanish version, 'cause it's pretty good too!
Kisses!
Date: 01/25/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 4 - Narcissism In A Minor
Wow...
That was a seriously amazing chapter.
The story of nacrissus and Echo has always been a great favourite of mine. But I know the one where he sees Artemis naked and she curses him to fall in love with his reflection and then he kisses it and drowns and Echo falls in with him
Sad :(
Date: 09/27/09 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Tomorrow
This was an amazing story. I read it last night and was at no point sure how it would end, so I was so gloriously happy Tom decided to stick with his heart's decision. Lovely work and gooood angst :)
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Maria