Date: 11/02/10 12:14 pm Title: Believe
Oooh, I'm intrigued over what Tom almost told Bill there. This is so very good! I'm glad Tom did go back without Bill having to think of a way to bring him back. :D Andi sounds nice, too. I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I think Andi is pretty awesome, but Tom doesn't always think so. =P I'm so very happy that you're enjoying it so far! Can't wait for Tuesday. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 11/02/10 11:30 am Title: Believe
I bet they aren't supposed to let their charge know they exist xD ♥
Author's Response: I bet Tom is accustomed to doing things that he shouldn't. ;) ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 11/02/10 10:57 am Title: Believe
I really like reading 2 chapters a week :D This is all so intriguing! I wonder what they aren't allow to tell Bill! It's good to have Tom back, and to meet Andy too! I can't wait for the next update and to know what this big answer is!
Author's Response: I really like posting two chapters a week. Here's to hoping I can get the last few chapters written quickly so I can post more. =)
Date: 11/02/10 10:54 am Title: Believe
Andi and Tom are precious. I love how Andi reveals that Tom is breaking rules... uh-oh. :D And Bill is beginning to accept Tom! Yay! :D
Jane
Author's Response: Awww, I'm so happy you like Tom and Andi! I like them, too. =D And yes, Bill definitely needs to get to accepting Tom so that they can move forward...in whatever it is they move forward with. ;)
Date: 10/31/10 09:23 pm Title: Back to School
Poor Bill, he's so confused, he's just kind of feeling his way through it all. I'm so intrigued by Bill's state of mind here. I wonder why Tom appeared in the hallway for him? Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Poor Bill is going through a lot right now. And more tomorrow. =)
Date: 10/31/10 11:56 am Title: Back to School
I don't like this Clara girl. She seems... hmm. I don't know. Like he has ulterior motives. :( But it was a good chapter! I love how Tom can appear anywhere. He always proves Bill wrong. :D
Jane
Author's Response: Aww. Well she becomes important later in the story, so you can hate her or love her more, then. I can't say anything more. =)
Date: 10/31/10 04:14 am Title: Back to School
hmmm, thanks for the update, looking forward to more. =)
Author's Response: You're welcome. And update tomorrow! <333
Date: 10/31/10 01:18 am Title: Back to School
Hm, so now I wonder what role Clara is going to have in this! And Tom is always watching him, of course, but it makes me wonder if guardian angels can feel jealousy, whether they're supposed to or not.
Author's Response: No worries, she'll have an impact. And whether they're supposed to or not, I don't think Tom is normal by any means. ;)
Author's Response: No worries, she'll have an impact. And whether they're supposed to or not, I don't think Tom is normal by any means. ;)
Date: 10/30/10 10:34 pm Title: Back to School
Hmm....*ponders*
Author's Response: lol Come up with anything?
Date: 10/30/10 02:51 pm Title: Back to School
Haha the last part made me laugh :D
Author's Response: haha Yay! <333
Date: 10/30/10 12:57 pm Title: Back to School
Woot woot! What an awesome surprise !! Congratz for finishing your remix! I can’t wait to read it :D
I really like how Tom is all Bill can think about. It's so cute and so unfair at the same time that they can't feel each other :( I really enjoyed this chapter, first time we see Bill in school and it was interesting to learn more about his character! I particularly enjoyed the part where you described how he doesn't feel like he fit in anywhere, but that with Tom he feels good about himself :P Can't wait for the update on Tuesday!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're enjoying it. And I think, despite all the obvious issues, Tom will be good for Bill in the long run. <333
Date: 10/30/10 12:46 pm Title: Back to School
So glad Bill is getting new friends...I hope she knows he's off-limits! :o
YOU ARE AN AWESOME, AMAZING WRITER. ♥
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! And I think if she doesn't know now, she'll figure it out soon enough. ;)
Date: 10/27/10 11:05 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
This is really interesting so far. I don't see how Bill is going to get his perfect love, but I hope he does. It seems like it would be a sad ending at this point. But I'll just trust you and keep reading. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: He'll get it, I promise. Have a little faith in me and we'll get there. =)
Date: 10/27/10 05:54 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
Oh, it must be a hell for not been able to touch the person you want to be close - in any way. This is so cute, yet a bit sad, funny and still sweet.
Bill warms up slowly, but he clearly starts to miss some kind of connection.
And how bad did I feel for Tom, when he realised that Bill really can't feel him. He is so determined and excited of his first "job". So adorable... Yup, I still have a crush on angel!Tom :D
Author's Response: I definitely think it would be hell. I'm sorry there's a tinge of sadness to it, but I'm happy that you think it's funny and sweet! ♥ [And I still have a crush on angel!Tom, too. =D]
Date: 10/27/10 01:35 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
Poor Tom! He is just a little overprotective, considering Bill's his first assignment it is undertandable.
Bill was a little harsh, hopefully he will reconsider and give their friendship another chance.
Nice chapter, see you in the 4th.
Bye
Author's Response: Oh, they're definitely not over. They've got some things to take care of. =D
Date: 10/27/10 12:20 am Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
They've got a cute friendship forming (when Bill isn't being a brat) but the touch thing makes me really curious how they can be anything else. Yeah, yeah, I know I gotta wait and see. Dangit.
Author's Response: Well, at least you know how the waiting game works. Sorrrrrry, but I promise things will start to fall into place. ;)
Date: 10/26/10 11:52 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
I really really like this story!
Can't wait to read more!
XD
Author's Response: I'm really really glad that you do! I'm excited to post more on Tuesday! =D
Date: 10/26/10 10:49 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
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Author's Response: ............ ♥ .......... !
Date: 10/26/10 05:44 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
That must be so weird O_O
Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely think it would be, lol.
Date: 10/26/10 03:07 pm Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
well well, this is interesting..... :) keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. <333