Date: 11/19/10 08:09 am Title: The Warning Call
Even though I read this chapter on my mobile phone last night, I decided to take some time today to leave a review for your amazing story. :)
This chapter saddened me a lot. I feel terribly sorry for Tom. I can see he has already fallen for the clumsy Bill he has to protect. In a way I hope he won't pull away from him, because that would make Bill sad, but I also don't want HP to reassign Tom. That would break both of their hearts... :/
Oh, and I nominated this story for THF awards the other day. x3 I hope you liked that :)
Author's Response: Liked it? I LOVED it. I ended up spilling my squee all over twitter. Thank you so much for the nomination. It's still so early in the story that I hadn't even considered it. <333 As far as Bill, and Tom, and HP, where there's a will there's a way. And there's definitely a will from two very determined young men. ;)
Date: 11/18/10 09:20 pm Title: The Warning Call
Hmmm. I think I can kind of understand where 'HP' is coming from. Tom is, after all, his guardian angel. I guess he doesn't want Tom to get attatched because it won't work out so well for either of them in the long run. It still sucks that he told Tom to back off or he'd reassign him ._.
But they're already too attatched to one another. I know Tom will try and find a way around it ;)
Author's Response: Yes. HP has his reasons, and they're not just to be mean. It does suck, but you're right; there's an entire story left for Tom to try and get around it. ;)
Date: 11/18/10 06:22 pm Title: The Warning Call
HP is a bit of a jerk. Isn't he supposed to be understanding o.O
Author's Response: Well yes, to an extent. But there are rules in place for a reason. =S
Date: 11/18/10 04:36 pm Title: The Warning Call
i love seeing things from Tom's point of view, and the HP seems really stern. great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like seeing it from Tom's perspective, because it's fun to write it that way. And yes, "stern" is a good word to describe HP. =)
Date: 11/18/10 03:10 pm Title: The Warning Call
Dude, HP is kind of a dick. Poor Tom. Don't make friends with the job. I had the problem and it sucks.
Author's Response: Yeah, it sucks, but the situation is a little...well, unconventional.
Date: 11/18/10 02:53 pm Title: The Warning Call
Hi
Thank you for letting me know this chapter was up. It brighten my day =)
That HP is a bitch, how can he ask for no attachments, when it is painfully obvious that Bill needs someone at his side as a part of his whole well-being.
What will Tom do? Will he do as he was told and pull back? I can only think of the suffering that will cause to them both.
Maybe, if Bill feels depressed that may count as an emergency as well?
I'll be waiting for the next chapter,
Hugs!
Author's Response: HP is a very business-minded, straight forward man. But Tom has some fight in him. ;) Thank you so much for your review. <333
Date: 11/18/10 01:29 pm Title: The Warning Call
I'm so glad you updated!
I don't understand why Tom can't be Bill's friend. Isn't "HP" supposed to encourage love and friendship?
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Well yeah, but it would cause some problems if everyone was able to befriend their guardian angel, you know? Bill's not really even supposed to know that Tom exists, let alone have a name with a face. I'm so excited that you're loving it, though, and I'm excited to post more. =D
Date: 11/18/10 12:38 pm Title: The Warning Call
Poor Tom, that wasn't a fun meeting, at all :( I really hope he'll find a solution cause I agree with him, Bill needs him as a friend right now. He can't just stop seeing him :( I really liked the interaction between Tom and Andi in this chapter. Can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response: Nope, not a fun meeting. =( But there's still over 20 chapters left, so I guarantee the story must go on. =D
Date: 11/18/10 12:36 pm Title: The Warning Call
Awwww, poor Tom! *hugs him* It won't be easy to find a way to get around those rules, but I hope he finds a way. Loving this!
Author's Response: Where there's a will, there's a way. ;) So happy to see you enjoying it! <333
Date: 11/18/10 11:46 am Title: The Warning Call
He could send Andi to send Bill messages xD Or he could "accidentally" bump into Bill >.>
Or maybe he can be reassigned and Bill can throw a fit to get him back xD
Author's Response: I love your theories! Unfortunately, I cannot confirm or deny any of them. =P
Date: 11/18/10 11:38 am Title: The Warning Call
Your chapter cuts off mid-sentence. D: *paws*
Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry. That's what I get for trying to do things too quickly. But it's fixed now. =D
Date: 11/15/10 02:43 am Title: Still Breathing
thanks for the great update. this was very emotional, i loved it.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. =D
Date: 11/14/10 02:50 am Title: Still Breathing
Hi! Again today.
So Tom has a sot of beeper that tells him when Bill is in need? Like the one of legally blondy for her dog??? Sorry but I just could picture a chiviBill with a 911 in that device.
Is it possible that Bill is starting to really learn something about Tom, like he is living just not in the same plane, so to speak.
Great chap, I'm going to be waiting for the next one... when you have the time of course.
Hugs!
Author's Response: LOL. Yes, Tom has a beeper so that he knows when Bill really needs him (not just when Bill WANTS him around). I think Bill is starting to slowly learn a lot of things about Tom (and Tom about Bill). Thank you so much for another review. The next chapter is up now. ;)
Date: 11/14/10 02:17 am Title: Defining the Indefinable
Hi!!
It was a sweet chapter, how Bill is letting himself fell for Tom is cute. And Tom being a compasionate supernatural crature just takes care and tries to not disturb his new friend.
Bill's blushing, at least Tom does not have super legimerens powers.
Thank you for the chapter, I'm going to read the next!
Author's Response: Awwww. Tom is a compassionate supernatural creature -- I like that description. *thumbs up* I'm so happy that you're reading and enjoying it as much as I am. =)
Date: 11/13/10 07:25 pm Title: Still Breathing
Awwww, poor Bill. It must be awful to realize how close you were to losing your life. Good thing that Tom was nearby to save him. I'm really enjoying this story, the interactions between Tom and Bill always leave me wanting more. :)
Author's Response: Of course Tom was nearby to save him. He's Bill's guardian angel; it's his job. ;) I'm so happy that you're enjoying each chapter, though. It definitely makes the weekly updates worth it for me knowing that even just one person is waiting for it. =) Thank you for your review!
Date: 11/13/10 05:49 pm Title: Still Breathing
I am immediately suspicious of Tom's state when he showed up. ._. And Bill's realization that Tom saved him, coupled with the fact that he doesn't really have any friends, breaks my heart. I so wanted Bill to be able to hug Tom. ;_;
Author's Response: What? You're suspicious of Tom being out of breath and smoothing down his clotheses? =P I'm really, really, really sorry that this chapter broke your heart. I honestly didn't mean to. But I can assure you that he has Tom now, and things will get better (even if it may not seem like it at times). *huggles you
Date: 11/13/10 02:14 pm Title: Still Breathing
I want to know what the rules are, and I also want to know how much in trouble Tom is for blatently having the hots for Bill. 'Cause I'm guessing that's not really allowed because you might try and stop them from dying even when it's 'their time' etc.
I'm guessing here, as you can probably tell, please ignore my questions though! I don't want spoilers even if I speculate. :3
Author's Response: We'll slowly learn the rules. ;) And the chapter with Tom getting in trouble is up now, so you don't have to wait much longer. But yeah, falling for your charge is probably not on the list of "things that are okay." ;) I won't give any spoilers, but I'm so happy that you're interested enough to ask questions! <333
Date: 11/13/10 01:47 pm Title: Still Breathing
Really, I shouldn't be reading this update (I have assignments due Tuesday)But I couldn't help myself when I saw it :[
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Aww, man. I'm sorry for being so enticing, but thank you for reading it anyway? I hope you got all of your stuff done! =S
Date: 11/13/10 01:20 pm Title: Still Breathing
I just love this story. But I think I haven't reviewed it yet... (I usually read on my mobile phone, but I don't like reviewing from there - typing takes way too long :D) Although I have followed it since the beginning and it's just such an awesome story! I think it's really cute how their relationship is developing.
But at the same time I can't help but wonder how is it all going to end. Bill can't feel Tom yet, but I hope he will feel him soon! And I hope they're able to share their first hugs/kisses soon as well. Can't wait for another update! ;)
Author's Response: Ahh, man. I totally understand about reading on the mobile phone. That's pretty much the only time I'm ever online anymore, except when I'm updating. So I forgive you for not reviewing (because I rarely review, myself, even when I know I should). BUT I'm so happy that you're reviewing it now and letting me know that you're enjoying it. It means a lot. I know, right now, the ending seems so up in the air because nothing really seems like it's going to work out, but I promise you that love will find a way. =)
Date: 11/13/10 01:20 pm Title: Still Breathing
It takes some time for that kind of realization, poor Bill. I wonder why Tom can't even talk about saving his life?
That moment where Bill woke up to a decorated cast really made me smile. Having Tom just sit there in the dark, or sit beside him while Bill falls asleep - when he's really not supposed to be there, it not being an emergency - just really makes me smile. Tom's sweet on him.
And Bill is thinking of dating his "imaginary" boyfriend. ;D Yay for surprise Saturday updates!
Author's Response: Eee! I'm glad you liked that little doodling detail, because it's one of my favorites. I just randomly picture them doing all these weird (ie cute?) things together, and as soon as I thought of that one, I knew I had to put it in somewhere. =) But yessss. Tom is sweet on him, and the feeling is definitely mutual.