Date: 12/15/10 06:50 pm Title: Power Struggle
Hi!!
So Tom is being trying to behave according to the master HP's plan?? I feel sorry for both boys, but maybe a little more for Bill, he's been left in the dark with no explanation as to why he'd been abandoned.
I have this feeling that the party will prove to be something near of a disaster.
Hugs for you, thank you for updating!
See you next chapter
Velia
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom is TRYING to behave himself, but he's alreadsy formed an attachment, so it's hard. And the party definitely won't go off without a hitch. ;)
Date: 12/14/10 09:38 pm Title: Power Struggle
Oh my. Well, can't blame Bill for being upset, thinking it was his fault Tom stayed away. Shitty that Tom can't tell him why. Andi surprised me a bit in this. He sounded jealous. ._.
Author's Response: Surprised you? You have no idea how much this pleases me. =DDD But no, I don't blame Bill for being upset either.
Date: 12/14/10 09:16 pm Title: Power Struggle
man, you keep getting better and better!!! and i love the last line here, it's sounds so much like what Bill would say in reality.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying each chapter. <333
Date: 12/14/10 08:20 pm Title: Power Struggle
Bill should have gone with Tom's explanation about English class, lolz.
I have a bad feeling about this party.
I don't blame Andi for coming to Bill, but he took the wrong approach. Why is it so hard for people to understand that you can't always help who you fall for?
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Eh, yeah. Andi doesn't have a whole lot of tact, but he has a good heart, and he's a good friend. =) But the party! *so excited for it* (Oh, and thank you for the review!)
Date: 12/14/10 06:37 pm Title: Power Struggle
Aw :( I agree about the line Ghostie quoted. So sad.
I masochistically love heart-wrenching situations like this.
Yeah, if I were in Bill's shoes I would want to do something to hurt Tom for never being around...
Author's Response: I masochistically love heart-wrenching situations like this, too. XD I can't say what Bill does, but something's coming! =D
Date: 12/14/10 05:27 pm Title: Lucky to be Alive
DDDDDDD: As much as I know Andi is telling the truth, it sure didn't stop my heart from absolutely breaking for Bill. It's so clear they love each other. Awww man, I have never wanted Tom to be a real (in the flesh) boy so badly in my life.
And once a week updates??? I object! Unless of course, you plan to have HP do a bippity-boppity-boo, wave a magic wand and make them a real couple. ;o)
I believe in magic, fairies, mermaids, santa claus and the easter bunny. That's gotta count for something!!!!! :o)
*wibbles in the corner anxiously awaiting the next update*
Author's Response: Yes, once a week updates, but not for much longer. I went from 6 more chapters to write to 2 in a single day. XD. I can't say what HP does but I promise ~something will happen. *believes in magical thing with you*
Date: 12/14/10 05:21 pm Title: Power Struggle
i just love this!
Author's Response: I love YOU! Thank you so much! <333
Date: 12/14/10 05:20 pm Title: Power Struggle
So good as usual! I know Andi was just trying to protect Tom in his way but I felt so sad for Bill... Andi has no right to say those tings =( I'm glad Bill spoke up for himself and told Tom how he feels about not being in control of anything... even if it's not really Tom's fault at all. I can't wait to read about Bill trying to be normal!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know hearing Andi say all of those things was hard for Bill, but he was just being honest and trying to help a friend. I'd do it, too, if it were in the best interest of a friend. =( Anyway...Bill trying to be normal is something to look forward to! I'm happy to hear you're excited about it. =D
Date: 12/14/10 04:32 pm Title: Power Struggle
Hee, Bill is very stubborn, but in this case, I'm siding with him. Tom does have the advantage of being able to see him everyday, whereas Bill has no clue when he's around or not. Really enjoying this story. I'll be looking forward to finding out what'll happen at the party. :D
Author's Response: Tom does have the advantage, yes. But he also deals with his fair share of crap, so I still feel bad for him, too. And the party. I'm so excited to post it. >:)
Date: 12/14/10 04:16 pm Title: Power Struggle
"Do you have any idea what it feels like to be stuck here every day, just waiting for you to reappear?"
This line made me so sad. I just want to cuddle Bill; it seems like things are only getting worse. :(
The confrontations with Andi, Tom and his mother were all painful, especially when his mother brought up how different Bill's been acting. I feel like Tom is doing Bill a lot more harm than good, at this point. I'm really interested to see what happens at the party; I feel like the story is approaching a climax, but at the same time, I know it's probably not even halfway over. In any case, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It all got so much sadder than I had ever anticipated when I was first planning it. I think it's maybe because I have a penchant for angst. That, and things just couldn't go easily in a situation like this. You're so perceptive though. There's still over half a story left, but there will soon be changes. ;) I'm so excited that you're reading. =D
Date: 12/14/10 04:00 pm Title: Power Struggle
Ouch >_< I like how Tom tried to help him lie to his mom, though ^^
Annndddd I wish they had gone up to Bill's room to talk, but I'm sure that would have led to...other things xD
Author's Response: Yeah, ouch. But Tom's got his back. =) Maybe NEXT time they can fight in Bill's bedroom. ;)
Date: 12/12/10 11:23 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
ooo looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Good! It's up now! <333
Date: 12/12/10 07:23 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
thanks for the updates, i cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the reviews. <333
Date: 12/12/10 06:25 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
i love this! the plot is amazing, the writing is amazing and all of it really is amazing! can't wait to read more, and i hope you'll update soon^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 12/12/10 12:04 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
What a silly boy, there's nothing wrong with Tom, he's just falling in love, that's all!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Falling in love, he is. XD Thank you so much. <333
Date: 12/12/10 08:17 am Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
hahaah Isn't the cat already out of the bag? :P
Author's Response: Well, yes, but maybe there are many cats. A whole litter of them! XD
Date: 12/12/10 03:02 am Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
Aw, the poor guy. Look how Bill reacted last time, too, talking about putting himself in dangerous situations, just to get to see Tom. Though...I think I see HP softening a little, with the realization that Tom is really working to keep watching Bill. You'd think he realizes how Tom feels. Anyway, as always, I'm anxious for more! :D
Author's Response: Yes! Things are very complicated right now. But I think you're onto something with HP. ;) You'll have to wait and see what happensssss.
Date: 12/12/10 12:15 am Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
wow. just, wow.....keep up the amazing job, this story is beautiful.
Author's Response: Awww. Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 12/11/10 11:35 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
*huggles the O_7*
Author's Response: *huggles the TSOA*
Date: 12/11/10 10:53 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
YAYyy New chapter =D
I think that Tom has some very stong arguments! He’s definitely helping Bill by keeping him company... poor Bill is so alone otherwise. Of course Bill needs him! I really like your Tom in this fic... in fact, I love everything of this story =P
Awww! I love this part: ``He had to stay away from Bill, but at least Bill was still his to stay away from.``
Can't wait to see who's gonna visit Bill =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm always excited to hear what you think about the new chapter. =DDDD