Date: 01/18/11 09:49 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Oh wow, that was so hot, even if I suppose the repercussions to this won't be all that good for either of them. I felt so sorry for them when Bill couldn't feel Tom again and I'm really intrigued over what it is that triggers that Bill can feel him. Off to more, since I fell slightly behind. ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, their relationship is a bit complicated (I mean, really lol). But I'm glad you're intrigued because it means I'm doing something right. =)
Date: 01/18/11 09:35 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
oh...bill
Author's Response: =(((
Date: 01/18/11 08:07 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Hi!
I didn't expect that Tom's visit at school would have such a terrible outcome. It's bad for Bill now, but it is worst if he just snaps at Tom like that.
Anyway.
I'm dying to know what was on the paper Tom was holding in Bill's bedroom. It looked quite important.
Great chapter.
I'm so in love with this story.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: It may have been important, and now Bill may.never know. D= But thank you! <3
Date: 01/18/11 07:50 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
That's not good. Oh, that is so not good. I am worried. This is bad. Bill should not have said that. Tom should not have left. This is very, very bad.
Author's Response: *wrings hands* It's definitely not good....
Date: 01/18/11 07:24 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Thanks for another great update, i love this story!
Author's Response: Thank YOU! <333
Date: 01/18/11 07:08 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
No! Bill, you bitch! Poor Tom!! I wonder what was in the letter.... I bet it was something good if Tom was so excited and happy over it... and then Bill just had to ruin what could have made his day better instead of going with the other option and wollowing in self-pitty :P Stupid, stupid, Bill. *shakes head* But this chapter was great, as is all the rest. I really wish Bill would stop being on his decimal already. His mood swings must make Tom frustrated... I know I would be if I was on Tom's end of the deal. But then again, if the whole school thought you were jacking off in the bathroom... yeah I'd be humiliated and angry. But I wouldn't aim it torwards Tom because, HELLO, Tom gave him PLEASURE. Dude, I would have made Tom feel guilty so then I'd get snuggles... I'm evil that way >:D And whats up with Bill being able to touch Tom and NOT take full advantage of that?! I would have pushed Tom onto that bed the moment I found out that he was still... touchable. hahaha
Great update! Keep it coming:)
Author's Response: Hahaha I like the way you think - playing the guilt card to get more of what you want. Genius, really. Unfortunately, Bill didn't see it that way. =P But maybe snuggles will come later? Maybe? Hehe Thank you for the review. <3333
Date: 01/18/11 06:57 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
No, please! Don't tell me Bill was such a jerk.. yes, I know you wrote it, I read it, but, somehow I was wishing I had a bad episode of mixing words...
What does Bill have in his head, these teenagers! They don't know what they want, and he doesn't know how much Tom is missed until he sees him no more. (did I made sense with that?)
What is Tom going to do? And what was the gift Tom had for him? Which will be the perks in Tom's spirit of this rejection?
Thank you for the chapter, it left my mind full of questions as usual.
Hugs!
Author's Response: I'm so excited to see you with questions (even if I can't answer them without giving spoilers). All I can say is boysboysboys. =P
Date: 01/18/11 06:16 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
What did Tom have for Bill? Damn it you stubborn prick... Bill I mean, obviously. This was absolutely fantastic, I can't wait for more (:
Author's Response: It was a piece of paper and that's all I can saaaaay. <3 Thank you so much - more on Friday!
Date: 01/18/11 04:51 pm Title: Lucky to be Alive
omg i don't know what just happened...i left a long ,nice review and all i see is "I" ,sorry
so let's begin again : i cried at your story,i really love it and i'm going to keep an eye on it
I like Tom,he's so sweet and brave, breaking all the rules for Bill
i wish that this Tom exist in real life
keep up the good work,kisses
Author's Response: Oh man, that's happened to me before. I wonder why it does that sometimes. Anyway, I definitely didn't mean to make you cry, but I'm undeniably pleased that you're loving the story. I love it, myself, but it's always nice to hear that other people are enjoying it, too. So thank you. <333
Date: 01/18/11 02:47 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
okay, so i totally suspected that people would hear and think he was alone xD but now im really curious about that happy piece of paper....and this, something tom rarely does...could it have anything to do with time? my hope
Author's Response: Ah, yes, the paper. =D And time? What Tom rarely does? Can't say, can't say. I guess we'll find out Friday. XD
Date: 01/18/11 01:56 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
I know I shouldnt laugh, but the mental image is just so funny!
thank you for the update :)
Author's Response: Hahahaha <333
Date: 01/18/11 01:53 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Haha how awkward poor Bill!
Author's Response: I knowwww. D=
Date: 01/18/11 01:38 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
What was the paper about! The more I read the more questions I have and I want the kids to stop being sucky to Bibi already...
Author's Response: What WAS that paper about? ^__^ (And I want the kids to stop being sucky to Bibi, too. =/)
Date: 01/18/11 01:31 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
i
Author's Response: You? lol
Date: 01/18/11 01:24 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
*flails* What is that piece of paper?! O_O
Author's Response: xD I was wondering if anyone would question that.
Date: 01/18/11 01:14 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
oh god.....Bill. i feel bad for him. the torment he's getting would just make me die of embarrasment!!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Ugh, right? It's awful. =/ I'd probably want to die.
Date: 01/18/11 12:44 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Omg, poor Bill, that was so humiliating! Awww he shouldn't take it on Tom tho... :( I love your updates so much that i took my lunch break to run to a café to use their wi fi! Couldnt even wait until tonight! Lol
Author's Response: Aw, no, you're right. He shouldn't take it out on Tom, but he is definitely humiliated. =( And LOL at the idea of you taking your lunch break and going to find wifi. That's totally something I would do, myself. haha ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 01/18/11 12:26 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
:( Billaaa :(
Great update!
Author's Response: I know. =((( But thank you! <333
Date: 01/18/11 11:11 am Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
noo, stupid bill! he can't send tom away like that :'(
Author's Response: =*(
Date: 01/17/11 07:14 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Gosh! I've had a really bad weekend... can't my G.Angel come here and make it better??? No? well, a girl could wish...
Nice chap! So, how does it work? is it really willing so much to be there for Bill what makes the trick?
Just at the middle of the chapter I was thinking that Tom's ability to feel Bill was the punishment of HP for Tom. So as an example of the devastation it may cause to be too attached to their assignment. But, nobosy coul be so cruel, right?
This chapter was great, as the priors had been. I'll see you next chapter.
Velia
Author's Response: I like that you're thinking of punishments as a factor. I won't say much more than that, but I do like that you're considering. Also, I'd like to have my own G.Angel come and make everything better for me, sometimes, too. If I had one like Tom, man. I'd never let go. xD Thank you so much, bb. <333