Date: 01/27/11 10:55 am Title: Final Chance
Oooh! i live for updates!
Author's Response: Well, it's a good thing they're coming twice a week now, huh? ;)
Date: 01/26/11 06:20 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship
Oooooh I caught up .-. Now I have to wait patiently... xD But I'm good at that, so I will! Of course I will xD
I had no IDEA that Tom had managed to get in contact with Bill's father, I honestly didn't see that one coming at all! So it was a beautiful beautiful suprise. I was so smiley and a little watery eyed when I read through that part. It was just gorgeous. And when Tom came down for breakfast, I was kinda wondering if Simone would see him, because he's becoming more and more human I guess. Alas, twas not the case, but it made me laugh that scene xD
This whole fic is one big ball of gorgeousness and I really can't tell you how much I love it! Although hopefully the reviews give you a bit of an idea xD
OH OH and I did the thing I always forget to do until a fic REALLY gets to me, and favourited ^_^ I always review and rarely favourite and I don't know WHY. A fic has to be really super duper special to favourite, I guess :) And this fic earned THAT status like, during chapter one, quite possibly 4 lines in xD Your writing is stunning, I'm really excited to be reading more from you! I might start on "Started With a Kiss" next, I've been tracking that forEVER.
Wow, thank you for writing this, what a journey it's already been, so I'm really looking forward to what's coming o/ You're a goddess with the words, forrealz.
I think I'm bursting with love for you and your writing right now, sorry this is such a gushy review *___* *loveheart*
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and reviweing every chapter. I'm so excited that you like it so much and that I can still manage to squeeze out some surprises. =D <333
Date: 01/26/11 04:58 pm Title: Do-Over
Tom went back in time?! I SO DID NOT SEE THAT ONE COMING! And I'm sort of *ohmigosh scared* about what the HP is gonna say/do. It's been a few chapters since we last encountered him so... sort of dreading it. I know it goes without saying, but I don't want Tom and Bill to be separated! o__O
You write BEAUTifully :3 I hope Tom time-turning did Bill all the good Tom hoped for, God I would hate hate hate for poor Bill to go through all that trauma again, even if he knows he only experienced it once. Tom would have to see him suffer again though :(
OH OH OH and I'm curious about the little pieve of paper of Tom's, I really have no idea what it might be... maybe his number? Dunno how that would work but hey, let's see :D
*one more chapter left* o__O
Author's Response: Awwwwh. How cute would it be for Tom to pass Bill his phone number like that? *loves*
Date: 01/26/11 04:38 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Ooooh no! So someone DID here them, I thought they'd made it without going noticed :( I hope Tom is able to fix it, or Bill will forgive him, or somehow everyone at school will stop being dicks.
Bill is too precious to be pushed around like that verbally. Well, SO GLAD he's got a Guardian Angel even if said Guardian Angel is the root cause of the hurty this time ;___;
And holyshit, I've only got two more chpater to read!! *reads really slowly*
Author's Response: I hate thinking that Tom is the root of Bill's hurty, but it's totally true. =((( And holyshit, you read so fast. haha
Date: 01/26/11 03:02 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Oooh repurcussions?! Like whaaat? o__O HP isn't gonna be happy if he finds out. Man and the whole time I was like "please no one walk in please no one walk in" *PHEW*
But Tom had to leave again :( That's not cool, I wish they could be together 24/7 with no consequences. Daamn this fic is magic! In more than one respect :D
Author's Response: I wish the same thing for them. Maybe one day it'll happen. =)))
Date: 01/26/11 01:23 pm Title: Safe and Scared
Ooooh Bill said it too Bill said it too :D All this declarative love is making me melt xD I was shocked and surprised and pleased when Bill could feel Tom again. I wasn't expecting it so soon, but definitely not complaining there ^__^
Guuuh and your writing, woman you are some sort magician with the words. I'm sort of writing in between reading and feeling completely inadequate compared to this xD And it's for jellypencil! Double *needs to do good* ness! Man talk about high standards.
Anyway, point is you're so talented! And I love your writing even if it belittles mine in a major way xD
Author's Response: Oh noooo, don't feel inadequate. I totally get what you're saying -- there are authors who make me feel the same way -- but as everyone tells me, different isn't worse. Different is better. =)
Date: 01/26/11 12:55 pm Title: A Glitch In The Logic
Tom loves Bill! *dances* Awwwwwwah ^_^ I'm looking forward to when Tom can tell Bill to his face that he loves him. Aw, and poor babies, I hope Bill can feel Tom again soon, it's always a shock to the sytem for me let alone the two of them ;___; Hehe I'm such a fool for your writing, I've been looking forward to this all day xD And man, I'm actually catching up pretty fast .-.
Author's Response: I do feel bad for them, too. Their relationship is so complicated. And you did catch up rather fast, even with my frequent updates.
Date: 01/25/11 10:10 pm Title: Lucky to be Alive
yesh! *gives u a bucket of popcorn*
Author's Response: *noms* Thanks!
Date: 01/25/11 07:34 pm Title: A Taste of Perfection and the Morning After
I hope they DO have time for later! Aw so so much touchy feely Bill and Tom! I have hearts for eyes right now, as I think I've developed over the course of your writing. I really can't tell you enough how gorgeous it is.
Oh, one thing I've been meaning to say about your writing for aaaages is that your dialogue is fantastic! It's so believable and so nice to read because it just flows so wonderfully. Dialogue is one of the hardest things to perfect when writing, and I think it's the most obvious if it goes wrong. But you honestly manage it beautifully. I feel like I'm right there in the story! Hm, glad I told you that, it's definitely one of my favourite aspects of your writing.
Ah fuck! Internet connection is about to go offff :( I wanted to read on into the wee hours of the morning! I might open like 20 tabs.... xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the dialogue compliment! You know, it's kind of funny. I hear that a lot, that dialogue is the hardest aspect to master, but it's actually the easiest for me, for some reason. It's the exposition that gets me all snagged up. haha I'm all sorts of backwards, I guess. But I'm really glad it works for you. =)
Date: 01/25/11 07:11 pm Title: Proving Points and Defying Logic
Oooooh, oh *__* Bill, I'm all big-eyed and *doesn't know how to feel* there was so much going on in this chapter! Iin a good way, just to clarify :3 But Bill turned up looking gorge, yay, then Georg came along and Bill was all hurty and then Tom (most importantly!) joined in th crowds and THERE WAS MORE TOUCHY *___* So yeah, what a battlefield of emotions I'm experiencing. I'm mostly excite for the Bill and Tom togetherness.
Was Bill a virigin? Earlier you mentioned he'd done stuff but to what extent? Or is it meant to be ambiguous at this point?
Oh also, on a side note, I read on LJ just now on someone's post that you're writing something tragic, is this the tragic fic? I'm all ;___: now and I don't even know if it's thi fic xD If I'm not meant to know shut me up :3 Just know, I'll read this regardless. I wouldn't abandon you!
Author's Response: Bill was a virgin, yes. That "done stuff" was meant to imply things not including sex, and then there's a line (can't remember if it's this chap or another) that says something about him giving up something precious - which would be his virginity. Sorry if that wasn't clear. =/ And, as I already told you on twitter, this isn't the tragic story she was talking about. That comes later. =D
Date: 01/25/11 06:53 pm Title: Power Struggle
Okaaaay so Andi's not feeling the love much... I guess he's just trying to look out for Tom though. You can't blame him. I CAN blame HP though .-.
So Bill's going out to a party, and what will happen the, hm? I have mixed feelings about the party, part of me thinks it's a good idea for Bill to branch out a bit, as much as I want him to be Tom's exclusively, I don't feel his social withdrawel will be so good in the long run. But at the same time I have a feeling something might happen. I don't know what exactly, but I don't want Bill hurt in anyway ;__;
Oh jeez that was a bit analytical of me xD sorry!
Author's Response: Andi's just trying to be a good friend. And he may be smart, but he's got some social skills to pin dow. haha And don't apologize for getting analytical. I like seeing people analyze it. =D
Date: 01/25/11 06:18 pm Title: Sweet Talking and Fancy Footwork
Aw Tomi, there's nothing wrong with you, it's the lovebug *heart*
I am disliking HP more and more T__T But it's okay, because I'm liking this fic more and more which definitely counteracts the HP annoyingness. I really really don't want Tom and Bill to be separated. That's what I was so terrified of during this chapter; that HP would just turn round and forbid Tom from seeing Bill fullstop. Oh this fic has consumed me xD I can't stop thinking about it!
Oh and again, thanks for autho reponeses! And you're welcome for all the reviews, it's the least I can give an author when they write something so incredible *__*
Author's Response: I'm all =DDD because you're consumed in it. That's a lot like how I felt while writing it, so I'm happy I'm not the only one. <333
Date: 01/25/11 01:31 am Title: The Gift of Friendship
I'm SO glad Tom was able to change Bill's day for the better! And Tom looking for Bill's father to make Bill happy--that is so sweet :3
I'm loving the way you're building this up x]... Hope to see the next chapter up soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you're happy with it so far. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 01/25/11 12:18 am Title: The Gift of Friendship
Right about the time Tom was holding the paper and thinking that it wasn't his to read, I knew what it was. What an amazing and beautiful thing to do! It's too bad Bill couldn't read it, but what Tom told him was so wonderful. Lovely, lovely chapter. ♥
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 01/24/11 11:59 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship
I hope this ends well!
Author's Response: haha, me too! *crossing fingers and toes*
Date: 01/24/11 11:00 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship
oh, boy, i cant WAIT to see what kind of crap tom gets into for this... is that kid incapable of staying out trouble???? lol anyway, this is TOO CUTE!!! i love it, keep up the great work!!!!!!!
Author's Response: hahah It almost seems like, no, he isn't capable of staying out of trouble. But it makes life interesting, right? Thank you so much. <333333
Date: 01/24/11 08:45 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship
Well, I certainly didn't know about the paper's content before this chapters, but the first paragraphs really gave it away. It was a tremendous idea. I loved it!
Poor Tom. All that effort. But in the end, it wasn't even that bad.
I'm really worried about next chapter now. Someone is going to be really really angry. Thanks for the update.
See ya.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you could pick up on the clues in this chapter (but not in the last one, leaving it a mystery). I don't mean to worry you, but I promise another update is on the horizon. =D
Date: 01/24/11 08:27 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship
That was such a nice gesture from TOm! I love his character so much, he really is a good guy =) I'm kinda nervous now but of course he can't avoid it forever... can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: I love his character, too. I tend to really like his character in all of the stories I write. Maybe I should try writing him as an asshole? .....nah. =P
Date: 01/24/11 07:26 pm Title: The Complications of Lying
Whoa whoa WHOA! That was... WHOA! I was kind of hoping but not really expecting Tom to turn up during Bill's little escapade but oooh it was so fabulous when he did turn out :D *flutterclaps*
And hehe, Tom is Bill's boyfiend :3 I'm kinda wondering how that's going to work out, buuuut I'm hoping the little skin to skin contact we saw last chapter might make a bit more of a substantial appearance :D
Author's Response: I love that I get to relive these chapters as you're reading. I forgot some of the surprises I added in along the way as soon as I finished writing the last chapter. haha And awww, the thought of Tom being Bill's boyfriend is adorable. =D
Date: 01/24/11 07:13 pm Title: A Whispered Touch of Hope
lja;kjsa;kjdsa;d GUUHH Bill touched Tom! This is what I was hoping would happen all along, and oh my it was wonderful to see it actually happening ^_^ You write so so gooood.
I'm really hoping they'll be more touchy feely Bill and Tom in upcoming chapters :D
Author's Response: a;lskdjfaswdlj LOL I love a good keysmash!