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Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 02:06 pm Title: The Gift of Friendship

Awww, I adored Tom's attempt to deliver the little gift to Bill and I felt so sorry for them for it failing. It's understandable, but still... You wrote them so lovely way, so in love and tender. I love this couple so much!

And Tom appearing in his boxers to a kitchen? Bahaha! Typical.

Now quickly to the next chapter and I'm very nervbous of HP's reactions. *bites her nails*

Author's Response: Haha I loved the image of Tom appearing in the kitchen half naked, too. And Bill's response was fun to write. I'm glad to see you liking it, too. =) <333

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 11:42 pm Title: Final Chance

Oh, beloved girl! You almost gave me a heart attack when I read "Final chance," and recover only when readin that there'll be thirteen more chapters.
What is it Tom wants to give Bill? Is it something physical? Like having sex for real? Will Tom be transfered and got depressed and sick? Could an angel get sick anyway?

So many questions!!!
I'm ery happy you updated, I love to come to THF and see there's a new chapter!

Send you hugs!

Velia

Author's Response: So many questions and I can't give you any answers just yet! I'm very happy to see you enjoying each chapter and asking these questions. I'm excited to slowly reveal the answers. =))l

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 06:55 pm Title: Final Chance

Ooh Tom o___O I have a few ideas about what this last thing he wants to give to Bill is, but so far you've managed to surprise me so I'm most likely waaaay off xD Guh, Tom, GUH please don't throw away what you have with Bill though. I'm all fluttery and *__*

I'm glad HP is giving Tom one more chance, but at the same time I wish he wouldn't have to give him chances and just let him and Bill be. AND even HP didn't know why Tom was becoming more human, so that makes it about 231983 times more confusing xD

I'm really looking forward to your next post! I'm glad we still have a way to go, I'm not up for this fic finishing just yet, AT ALL *love*

Author's Response: Ohhh, I want to know what your idea is! And we definitely have a ways to go. There's a lot to come. =)))

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 07:17 am Title: Lucky to be Alive

HP flinched when Tom said he was hungry and sleepy. *clings to that* It's anomaly...it's highly unusual. It's gotta be a way for Tom to be with Bill for real. *bites nails* Cannot wait until the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: It IS unusual, but what does it mean, exactly? hehe

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 12:51 am Title: Final Chance

I think what Tom's experiencing is WAYYYYYYY more crucial than HP recognizes.

LOVE IS ALWAYS WORTH IT. But yeah, to have doubt is simply to be human...or, well, angel as well. >_>

Author's Response: You just might be right...on all accounts. ;)

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 11:36 pm Title: Final Chance

I always feel like I need a drink after these updates...

Author's Response: Haa Oh man. O7: perpetuating alcoholism one update at a time. =P

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 08:55 pm Title: Final Chance

One last chance... this is very worrying. Tom already knows he's going to end up getting transferred, so I guess there's not a lot of hope... I can't wait to read the rest and I'm very happy to know that there is a lot more chapters to come!

Author's Response: There is definitely a lot to come! The story kept going and going while I was writing it. lol Hopefully I won't leave you worrying for long.

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 07:44 pm Title: Final Chance

Tom is playing with fire; he'd better be careful. i'm compltely nervous for him... i hope he doesn't get transferred (although i think he will >__

Author's Response: He's definitely playing with fire and he has so much on the line.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 07:00 pm Title: Final Chance

Aw man, I knew it wasn't gonna be good, but at least HP looked nonplussed about the feeling thing and hunger and tiredness. And now I'm really nervous what Tom wants to do! O_o

Author's Response: Awww, don't be nervous. I'll take care of them. =)))

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 05:52 pm Title: Final Chance

Theory: Celia is someone Tom knew in his past life. Possibly someone who was close to him, possibly the person he died saving.

I'm really glad Tom told HP about what's been happening to him. I think it might have cleared his name a bit, in a way, because obviously if he's feeling things that he shouldn't, it could be the cause for his attachment to Bill. He's not just acting deviantly for the hell of it; he feels as much attachment to Bill as Bill does to him, and I think maybe HP assumed otherwise?

Also, Tom's mention of how the other angels would react to his relationship with Bill seems awfully similar to how people would react to the twins having a relationship irl. I imagine, if the twins were together, they would want to be able to boast it to the world, but of course they would be rejected and thought to be disgusting. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose, but I found it interesting nonetheless. :)

Another theory: Maybe something isn't wrong with Tom…maybe it's Bill? idk I'm just throwing around ideas.

I'm really eager to see what Tom wants to do with Bill, although I hope it doesn't separate them D8

Author's Response: I love hearing your theories! And your insight into the comparison between Tom's realization of how people would treat them vs the real life situation if they were to come out with their relationship is very perceptive. I didn't do it on purpose, but that thought did cross my mind once when I read through it. And I'm very eager to post more. =)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 03:55 pm Title: Final Chance

to put it indelicately, seems like he's interested in going out with a bang...literally. i'd love to read it, but he just CANT be transferred!! i'll cry. bill will cry. and probably kill himself. that might be the way out of this, if their big job is to protect people and bill will kill himself if Tom isn't allowed to see him, maybe HP will have to get over it. Tom's becoming more...normal, anyway, so maybe there's some way...to 'transfer' him back to life? :3

Author's Response: Very interesting theory. It seems HP would really be in a bit of a pickle and would really have very little choice. =)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 03:34 pm Title: Final Chance

I like that HP was surprised that Tom is getting hungry and tired and stuff. I think that bodes well for his future with Bill. At least I hope so. Thanks for the update, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: It seems HP's lack of knowledge is sparking a bit of hope in a lot of people. =)

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 03:30 pm Title: Final Chance

I think Tom is still somewhat alive. I mean, like he was beaten or something and they never found his body so he's in a coma. Or, he's in a coma in the hospital.
It'd be cool for Bill to try and find his body dumped in the woods somewhere, though.
This is lovely, and I can't wait for more! (:

Author's Response: Hmmmm. Very interesting theory. ;) More coming very soon!

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 02:12 pm Title: Final Chance

I'm surprised that HP didn't have any answers for Tom right away.

Uh oh, what's Tom planning now?

LOVED this, can't wait for more!

XD

Author's Response: Hehehe. Tom has ~plans. ;)

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:53 pm Title: Final Chance

I think I like the fact that even HP doesn't know exactly why Tom is doing more *human* things, like eating and sleeping =]

Such a hard decision to make, but I hope Tom thinks it through!

Author's Response: It's a little bit of hope, isn't it? Though probably terrifying to poor Tom. ;)

Reviewer: DieNacht1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:37 pm Title: Final Chance

O_O HE CANT GET TRANSFERRED!!!!!!

Author's Response: !!!!! BUT WHAT IF HE DOES?!?!

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:31 pm Title: Final Chance

Yes, Tom, it IS worth it >:D It's ALWAYS worth it when it comes to Bill xD

And poor HP is probably freaking out about Tom turning real or whatever's happening to him xD Poor HP...

Author's Response: Wow. "Poor HP" is not something I expected to hear. =P And can I assume that your vote is for Tom to do whatever it is that he wants to do? ;)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:13 pm Title: Final Chance

Hehe, this is amazing. It's feeling like we're getting down to the wire but I'm delighted that there's so many more chapters to go :D

And awww, you had to cut it there XD

Author's Response: We're definitely winding down to the end, but there's still so much left to happen. <333

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 11:43 am Title: Final Chance

man, poor tom.... he's in such a dilemma.... *huggles tom* you'll figure it out!!!!!!

Author's Response: He's definitely in a bit of a pickle. He could use all of the hugs he can get. =)

Author's Response: He's definitely in a bit of a pickle. He could use all of the hugs he can get. =)

Reviewer: Twelve Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 11:26 am Title: Final Chance

I see Andi's logic, but at the same time, I just want them to be together! There HAS to be something that Tom could do to stay with Bill... What about just staying in his world?

And what about those solid touches, things? Like if Bill can physically touch him, does that mean that he can be seen by others? Hmmmm... can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I want them to be together for good, too. Guess we'll just have to see how things turn out. =)

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