Date: 02/05/11 12:21 pm Title: Letting Go
Oooh D: it hurts! This was just such a gorgeous chapter. I adored it, in a heartbreaking way. I wonder what Tom is off to do now? I'm really really curious as to what's going to happen in the next several chapters. I want to bad for things to go right for them, but like you said in the author notes; it is always darkest before dawn. I so hope they won't be in the dark for too long though. God you're so so talented.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <333 I was going over in my head all of the things that are going to happen between now and the end of the story, and it there is still SO much. I've still got a few tricks up my sleeves. ;)
Date: 02/05/11 08:37 am Title: The Complications of Lying
Great chapter!
Author's Response: =D (You're catching up pretty quickly! lol)
Date: 02/05/11 08:18 am Title: A Whispered Touch of Hope
He felt him! XD Can't wait to find out what happens!
Author's Response: Teehee! xD
Date: 02/05/11 06:04 am Title: Working From the Inside Out
Another great chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you! <333
Date: 02/05/11 04:49 am Title: The Warning Call
It was cool to get a little insight into Tom's world. I wonder what Tom's going to decide to do XD
Author's Response: You'll just have to keep reading. ;)
Date: 02/05/11 04:08 am Title: Still Breathing
Of course Bill was the answer! How silly of me XD I must read on! I need to know about these consequences that Tom runs into!
Author's Response: lol Ahhh, that riddle. xD And consequences! Tom just can't seem to get away from them.
Date: 02/05/11 03:44 am Title: Defining the Indefinable
Great chapter XD I am happy they're friends. But with Tom not having a sex drive, and Bill not being able to touch him, I'm curous as to how this relationship is going to form. I'm also curious about these rules and this higher power. And what is bright but slow and has two working arms?!?! I must find out immediately!
Author's Response: It does seem a bit impossible, doesn't it? I promise, if you keep reading, you'll find out. =)
Date: 02/04/11 07:53 pm Title: Letting Go
Ooh gosh, I don't know, I just hope it's something that sorts all this out. I feel so bad for them ♥
Author's Response: I know; I'm reallying putting them through the ringer right now. But I do promise a happy (or at least promising) ending. ♥
Date: 02/04/11 10:01 am Title: The Warning Call
Wanna hear some theories now huh? Here you go; celia is the same person as clara whom Bill had lunch with at the library, that one day. And she will make Tom sort of human because she is fucking CUPIDO. It al starts with a C, so it makes sense to me. (the cupido i made up on the go, but i do believe they are the same person and that it will but Tom en Bill together and hell, why would it not be a lovematching angel, breaking every rule for true love?!) It's a long shot, i know. let me dream mkay?
Author's Response: Ohh, look at you playing detective and looking for clues! I love your theory, and I'll certainly let you dream. ;)
Date: 02/04/11 06:21 am Title: Believe
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! <3
Date: 02/04/11 06:01 am Title: Back to School
You got me hooked on this story now...good thing there's still like 20 chapters waiting for me to read XD
Author's Response: Yay! Be careful, though. I've heard that those 20 chapters will go really fast. xD
Date: 02/04/11 03:19 am Title: Ten Letter Word For Insubstantial
I am so fasicinated with this story right now. Usuallly after reading a few chapters of a story you come up with a pretty good guess on what's going to happen, but I really don't know.
Author's Response: I take that as a very big compliment! I love that you (and others) are still trying to figure out what happens next, and that all of the theories I've gotten are so diverse and uncertain. It's a wonderful feeling, being able to keep people guessing with each chapter. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 02/04/11 02:07 am Title: Accident Prone
This is very interesting so far. I'm curious to see where this goes XD
Author's Response: It's going somewhere, I promise! lol
Date: 02/04/11 01:18 am Title: Letting Go
Man, you've got me on what it is Tom wants to do, but I have to say that this chapter was wonderfully written. It hurt, so it was good, right? ;p Well done, you! ♥
Author's Response: Aye! If it hurts, then I did something right. =) ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 02/04/11 12:58 am Title: Letting Go
ooh, thanks for the wonderful update! good luck with the snow!
Author's Response: You're welcome. And thank YOU (it keeps falling >.<). ♥
Date: 02/03/11 09:10 pm Title: Letting Go
I don't know why it's taken me so long to review, but geeze, I feel awful for it. I have to tell you, absolutely love this. It's so beautiful and perfect.
The emotion that I feel from both Bill and Tom is just so...so heartbreaking almost. I could feel how broken up Bill was by not being able to see Tom.
I have a feeling he knew he was there with him though. I have a feeling he knew he was right there with him, feeling just as sad and broken as he is.
I don't know what Tom is planning or wanting to do. I read someone's comment about him possibly giving up his wings. That could be a possibitity. But, I just don't know.
I'm still curious about Tom's memories. I'm wondering if we will ever get to know how Tom died. I wonder if that will come to play in how him and Bill are so very well connected to each other.
I guess I'll just have to wait and see. I can't wait to see either. I seriously love this. I am such a fool for not commenting sooner. =/
You're such a talented writer and have an amazing story right here! =D
Author's Response: Awww, I don't mind you being late in reviewing. I'm just glad to see that you're enjoying it. There's still a lot to come (I was going over it in my head the other night, and realized that there is still a LOT of stuff about to happen), and I'm very pleased to see that you are curious and aren't quite sure what's around the next corner. Thank you so much for reading (and for reviewing)! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 02/03/11 07:32 pm Title: Letting Go
I have no idea what Tom has been waiting to do but I can't wait to found out!
I feel so sad for both of them, it's painful to read about them not together... but I trust you to make it better! Love the chapter, especially the ending!
Haha So much snow here too! I'm just glad I take the subway and don't own a car, it's a nightmare on the roads!
Author's Response: I'm glad you trust me! Because I certainly wouldn't do anything to harm them in the long run (just the short term, you know? haha) ♥
Date: 02/03/11 06:54 pm Title: Letting Go
oh, now i'm even more sad.....
Author's Response: I'm sorry. I knew this chapter was going to cause some frowny faces. =(
Date: 02/03/11 06:24 pm Title: Letting Go
Annngggsssttttttt xD Waiting for HP to cal with those answers lol. Tom would freak out and think he's in trouble again or something, I bet xD
What if Tom knew Bill before he died, and Bill never noticed him? O_O
Author's Response: LOL! Tom probably would completely freak out. Then again, he might just be waiting for the phone to ring, himself. Who knows? (Well, I do, but besides me. =P) And that is an interesting theory of yours. ;)
Date: 02/03/11 05:42 pm Title: Letting Go
i love this! but it is sad, really really sad that it has to be this way.. i don't like it.. but maybe tom emm.. geez i am bad at this, so no idea! but something that makes him human ya? that would at least be very nice^^
Author's Response: Tom becoming human WOULD be nice, wouldn't it? It'd certainly solve a lot of problems. lol I'm so glad to hear that you're still with me and loving it. <333