Date: 11/13/10 04:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Hot! Hot! Hot! Badboy!Bill and Moral!Tom is such a nice change, usually Tom is the "dominant/badboy:ish" one, isn't he? Anyhow, loved it!
XOXO//NikkiDiary
Ps: The "flailing"-part was kinda cute xD, I could imagine Tom flailing his arms a little, trying to steady himself to not fall xD
Author's Response: "Badboy!Bill," I like the sound of that! *g* I think Tom is usually written as more dominant, yes. I'm glad you liked the change of pace in this story! Tom's reluctance can be sweet, too, right? :) Thank you for the lovely comment!
Date: 11/13/10 04:09 am Title: Chapter 2
This story is so incredibly hot! And awesome! Not sure if I have the words to adequately review it.
Love everything Tom says to himself about how wrong it all is. Love how even with the constant conversation with himself he is totally unable to say no. Love that Tom's thinking that Bill is "noble and innocent" when Bill knew the whole time that it was sexual and he wanted more.
This is a great, funny, sexy story! So nicely written. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank you for commenting again; you're a wonderful reader. :) I was really nervous about this because I felt that people expected things now, so your words make me feel both relieved and really happy! And yes, Tom is a very moral person, very firm -- in theory. Not so much when faced with Bill who has firm ideas of his own. *g* I think he's learned a lot about himself, and Bill, in this story. :D
Date: 10/19/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
was hoping that you would write more to the one shot, and now we have a sequal! May the muses smile down upon you and the dreaded wb never darken your door step
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm in the middle of writing the next part. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 10/11/10 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Steinsgrrl, betaing this was a blast. But then again, betaing for you is always so much fun. Aren't I lucky that I get to read your fics before other people? :D
I think this is just the right combination of cracky sexytiems and angst for Tom. Poor Tom. At least he's finally aware of his desires. Now he only has to convince himself that acting on them is perfectly fine. Really.
Author's Response: Aren't I lucky that people point out my mistakes before I publish the story? :) I'm so happy the combination of humour and angst worked for you! They're always so reluctant to do twincest-y things; I can't understand why... :D
Date: 10/10/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope there will be more yet!
Author's Response: There certainly will! Hopefully in (less than) two weeks. :)
Date: 10/10/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, poor Tom.... shocking himself :D.
I love you for writing this, because, damn, IO needed this tonight. So freakin hot that my computer melted. And cute and funny.
Just wonderful and my brain is overheated by the thought of them doing THIS. UNF! :D
Author's Response: Yay, my first "unf!" *flutterclaps* :D I'm glad this was here for you to read when you needed it! Thank you for an awesome review!
Date: 10/10/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Tom is so confused. And Bill wanted some cuddles afterward.
Loved when they both started getting turned on by looking at Tom's finger. LOL!
Love it! Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: "And Bill wanted some cuddles afterward" made me laugh! Thanks; I'm so glad you enjoyed! More in two weeks or so. :)
Date: 10/09/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, I actually feel bad for Tom, even if I'm laughing a bit at his plight. He had no clue what he was unleashing with his little massage and now he's in quite the predicament, a very hot one btw. I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: That's so kind of you! Poor Tom is so anguished. I'm glad you think it's hot, and that it made you laugh, anyway! Thanks for reading and telling me what you think. :)
Date: 10/09/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response: :D Thank you!
Date: 10/09/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
MORALLY QUESTIONABLE BUT SO, SO SEXY. :D
Oh god, that was amazing. Well! We've made progress. At least Tom realizes what he wants now! Oh man, that scene at the breakfast table was so incredibly sexy, with just a few gestures and noises passing between them...the sexual tension was delicious!
I can't wait to see more of this. :3 And I'm pretty sure Bill is trying to entice you, Tom.
Author's Response: In the TH fandom I've found that morally questionable is often the same thing as sexy... *g* I love this fandom! Yes, there's some progress in this fic, although not as much as I thought there'd be, hee. Thank you for an awesome comment! :D I'm so happy you liked this!
Date: 10/09/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this. I can't wait for the next part. Definitely going to my faves ;)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! :) I'll try to post the second part in two weeks, max.
Date: 10/09/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes!Yes!Yes!! No, I didn't come. Thank you a bazillion times for making a sequel for this! I feel the tension of Tom's. Poor him
Author's Response: "No, I didn't come" -- :D You're very welcome! It was a lot of fun to write this. And I know, poor Tom. I'll try to make it up to him in the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/09/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was brilliant! The way you start with Tom talking about puppy and cute things, and then all this sexual tension between them, so perfect! This chapter was so hot, I can't wait for part 2! So glad you did a sequel btw :D
Author's Response: Poor Tom is distraught with the sudden mixing of puppies and twincest-y sexual tension! Hee. I'm so happy that you think it's good! Thank you. :)
Date: 10/09/10 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I got really happy when I saw that you continued on the one-shot... well, at first I didnīt realize that is was the same story... I thought someone copied youīre idea, but then I was like... "Oh shit, itīs the continue!" I couldnīt do a happy dance cuz I have macbook and itīs the schools property and they would have been mad if i broke it, so didnīt... But if I had a stationary I would have!! Uh... I think Iīm a little bit of topic^^' Well... This is as fantastic as the one-shot... So... Iīm waiting for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: It seemed that I'd ended the one-shot in an unsatisfactory way, so I decided to write a sequel. *g* I'm so pleased it made you want to do a happy dance! It was probably good to refrain from doing so, though, since there might have been property damage. Hee. Your comment made me very happy, thanks!
Date: 10/09/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww poor Tom. Just give in to Bill already xD
Author's Response: I agree with this advice :D
Date: 10/09/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I could barely breathe doing the beta for this, either laughing at Tom's flail or just from the sex. SO GOOD. I can't wait for more. :D
Author's Response: That makes me so happy! :D Poor Tom, but I just can't resist laughing at him a little.
Date: 10/09/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for part two. great job
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'll post part two in a couple of weeks, hopefully.
Date: 10/09/10 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so! :)
Date: 10/09/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, so incredibly hot! I'm so happy you decided to do a sequel as this universe is way too amazing not to. I also really like the humor combined with a touch of angst in this. Tom's reactions are just so realistic but still hilarious. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I agree that it's an intriguing universe. *g* Poor Tom, everyone (including me) laughs at him when he's worried and anxious and afraid he's perverted Bill! Hee. I'm glad you found this hot!
Date: 10/09/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a win. A definite win! I'd love to see what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that! :) The next chapter may take a couple of weeks, but hopefully not longer than that!