Poor Tom totally lost to Bill's whims, wants and his ass. And now Bill has Tom by the nose despite his guilt about incest. Very hot.

Author's Response: I love how you describe Tom -- totally lost to Bill's whims, Bill has him by the nose! :D Isn't that how it's supposed to be? *g* I'm glad you found it hot! Thank you, your comments made me very happy. :)

Poor Tom, so obvilious and denial! :D
But I like the story. You built up the confused, awkward atmnosphere so well here - as Bill being so willing and Tom hesitating. There was something very "twin like" in their characterizion especially in the end. Always loved that :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Tom's confusion! :) It takes them a while to find the same wavelength. It makes me happy to hear that you found them twin-like, thanks for letting me know!

I had suspected that Bill wasn't exactly as, er, innocent as Tom wanted to believe him, but everything from his satisfied little smile to the way he stretched to his attempt to offer Tom anything, ANYTHING he wants. As for Tom, lol! That boy is less the lecherous pervert than he realizes! He's more innocent than Bill, amazingly enough.

This totally made me crack up: "The only thing I don't get is how you thought it wasn't," he said. It was such a delightful turn of events, Bill knowing it from the start, and kind of surprised Tom didn't know, or at least, managed to persuade himself somehow that it wasn't?

Of course, the results of Bill's seduction were a foregone conclusion but it's so sexy to see how Bill coaxes Tom into it. "You like it," Bill said breathlessly. "You like it when I spread my legs for you." TOMMMM, SAYING ANYTHING BUT "HELL YES" AFTER THAT IS A DIRTY LIE. But not long after, with Bill telling him outright that Tom makes him come...ohh, yes! That certainly got a reaction. It's so intimate, and Bill lures him on by telling him what he wants, by making sure Tom knows what he wants and showing him how he wants to be touched. *_* So beautifully effective.

I love Bill's rationale, "just this once!" and that Tom is still innocent enough to BELIEVE it. Gorgeous, simply gorgeous.

As for the act itself...here I am, mired in this stubborn bout of illness, and this story stirred ME up. I was starry-eyed and just completely wrapped up in what they were doing, it was all so extremely sexy. And even then I loved all of the caution; Bill's repeated "don't just stick it in!" and how into it Bill is, especially when he's begging Tom to kiss him, kiss him anywhere, and the way Tom understands later. It's all so warm and sexy and lovely. I enjoy how the thought of their being twins is comforting to Tom, further on.

Bill fighting Tom's need to come was also incredibly sexy. XD I just can't even. Tom's so completely overcome, and yet Bill's not there yet, so he'll slap at Tom for even thinking of coming before he does...then he gets so turned on over the way Tom is on the verge of coming simply from looking at what they're doing. *____*

Beautiful, just beautiful. Also: in conclusion, they MUST do it again. ;) Because Bill is always right!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the long review! :) You're right, Tom is actually more innocent than Bill. And he's so worried about depraved, poor thing! I feel sympathy, but of course I also laugh at him... *g* Apparently Bill thinks he needs to be very specific and even give Tom a little show to get him on board? :D It makes me very happy to hear that this story managed to distract you from your illness! I'm thrilled you liked all those moments and thought that it's all that -- warm and lovely and sexy, that's exactly what I hoped to achieve! Hee, Bill wanted to make sure he's the one who comes first! But it works so beautifully when one's impending orgasm turns the other one on that much, right? It's practical. ;) Bill is definitely always right! Tom will just have to accept it. Thank you for the detailed and enthusiastic review! I'm so happy you liked it!

It was fantastic, the tension incredible.

Poor Toms feelings so high strung I could hardly breathe as Bill managed to seduce him so well.

Some of the hottest smut I've read in a while.

I loved the internal battle Tom went through because it must be some of the most difficult boundaries to cross for the twins! And still Bill's logic arguments constantly made Tom's worries nothing and almost silly because, honestly, who can it hurt other than them, and it certainly can't hurt Bill and Tom.

Good job!
*Maria

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your compliments make me very happy. :D It definitely can't hurt Tom and Bill! But still, struggling is, of course, completely understandable. Thank you for the lovely comment! :)

I was so excited to see this update! This story is just awesome. I like Bill so much in this, how he knows what he want and do everything he can to get it! That was really really hot, a brilliant fic !

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked Bill in this! I was nervous about posting this last instalment, so feedback like this makes me very happy. ♥ Thank you!

*nosebleed*
I like that tom struggles a little before he really give it to bill. Worth the wait.

Author's Response: :D Thanks! What a great reaction. *g* I'm glad you thought it was worth the wait! Tom's struggling is kind of hard to understand, in my opinion, but on the other hand it's sexy, so. :D

Bill got me, I thought he really was that oblivious. Tom's such a goofball... I'm gonna reread it all now, now that I know Bill knows exactly what's going on! Thanks for your hot and funny story!

Author's Response: I think Bill was just as clueless as Tom at first, but orgasms are amazing for broadening your horizons. *g* You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for letting me know what you thought!

Yum Yum! The breakfast scene was so erotic

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it tasty! *g* Thanks for reviewing!

"I think we should fuck," is about the hottest line in all history, just fyi. lol.

And then of course you had to go ahead and out-do yourself with "Tom, you make me come," which is jskghergebrgkjberkjgbejrbjkerghjehb!!!#^%#%
XD

And the following, which are also retardedly mouth-wateringly i-want-to-cry sexy. lol.:
>>You sick, miserable fuck, that's your brother
>>"You like it when I spread my legs for you."
>>"I wish you'd touch me here,"
>>"You don't want to touch me like this?"
>>"I want to feel you inside me."
>>"That's incest," --- "Yeah," and continued, "but do you want it?"
>>"Where?" "Kiss your ass, you mean?" --- "Yes," "Or bite it, whatever. That's so good!"
>>"I can't look at you," "I'm gonna come."
>>"You look so hot," --- "You're watching me?" --- "It's the hottest," "you're the hottest thing I've ever seen."

The dialogue in this fic is UNPARALLELLLLLLED!!!

>>He could feel his brain shutting down important thinking centres like moral-based decision making.

That line is brilliant and witty and so funny. lol.

>>Tom was pretty sure he would have clapped his hands if Tom hadn't been between them.

I can totally see that happening IRL and it's epic WIN. rofl.

>>Bill was certainly hot enough to melt things.

Tehehehe. Obviously. hahaha.

OMG, this series of fics, but especially this last chapter were -I'm pretty sure- one of the Top5 HOTTEST fics I've ever read. No jokes.
OMG, I'm going to have to read this again. You nailed the forbidden incest aspect so well that it's curl-up-in-the-fetal-position SEXY. I'm running out of ways to describe HOW SEXY this story was (esp the last chapter).
The way Tom has to be coaxed into saying Yes to sex, the number of times Tom said No and resisted (resistance is futile, but the fact that he tried SO HARD is THE BEST THING EVER, makes it more naughty and forbidden and that's a HUGE HUGE HUGE turn on), the way Bill is throwing himself a him is mind blowing.
But you know what was even better than the sex? The fact that this was so real and believeable. SO REAL AND BELIEVEABLE it was scary. If there's any way in the world I picture first-time experimental twincest going down between the twins, this would be it. The way they talk and interact is SO Tom and Bill, because they still have that witty sarcastic brother thing going on. And they have distinct and multifaceted personalities and it shines thru the sex, makes your characters so human. When Bill is like "Dont come!!" lol... it feels so real, probs because I myself have said that in the middle of sex. (Lol. Yes, too much info, sorry, but u know what I meant. It's believable because it actually happens IRL, lol). I love how they tease and taunt eachother and their witty comebacks but also when theyre at a loss of words and just say the first things their minds come up with to describe what theyre feeling. It's so pure and loving.
You captured every moment so fucking well, and every moment was special.
MIND BLOWING.
I'm totally going to have to read this again, and excuse me if my hand is down my own pants next time I do. ROFL.
No, but seriously, the way you captured the twins in this fic is so perfect. I love every emotion in it so much.
This is incredibly well written, and I wouldn't change a word. This was amazing.
Amazing.
Fucking super amazing.
Not kidding.
Very well done. Thank you so much x100 for writing this. :)

Author's Response: Wow, I'm absolutely floored by this comment! Wow! I don't even know what to say, hee. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the story so much! Your compliments on my writing make me so happy -- that you think the dialogue is so good ("unparalleled," :O thank you!) and Tom's pov works. I remember thinking, when I first got into this fandom, that I could never write any TH fics because it would be too difficult to write about real people, especially them talking! So I'm very happy to get feedback like this. :) Hee, I'm glad you liked the line about Bill clapping if he wasn't hugging Tom! Thank you for such detailed comments; I'm thrilled to learn that the elements of the story came through the way I meant them to -- the forbidden aspect and Tom trying to resist (bless his heart). And of course, one of the reasons I thought I'd never (ha) write TH fic was because I thought I couldn't make it real and believable enough, so it's amazing to hear that you thought it felt realistic! "Every moment was special" is probably what every writer wants to hear. Thanks so much for your wonderful review, and don't worry about TMI. *g* This was a fun story to write, and I'm really, really happy that you enjoyed it!

I love how you wrote Bill's attitude towards the whole thing--eager and blase, with most of the twins' inner dialogue focused on physical attraction and not love. That actally made me think about writing a fic where the twins are hot for each other and sleep together, but aren't romantically in love.

Tom's awkward and guyish thought processes made it funny and cute and sexy, and you added parts into the sex that made it realistic too, like Bill smacking Tom and telling him not to come.

It was just a smutty one shot, but it was so nicely written and long I thought you deserved a real review. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the characterisation! I hoped it would be funny and cute and sexy, so it makes me very happy that you thought it was. :) Thank you!