Date: 02/28/11 03:14 pm Title: Dear Tom : October 18th, 2010
So darling and chatty. I loved the little stories about highschool
Date: 02/28/11 02:54 pm Title: Dear Bill: October 16th 2010
ROTFL I giggled throughout!
Date: 02/28/11 02:25 pm Title: Dear Tom : October 14th, 2010
Oh he is darling, being all questiony and then finding he's getting late. *pet*
Date: 02/28/11 02:18 pm Title: Dear Bill: October 11th, 2010
Aw that was so darling.
Date: 02/28/11 02:15 pm Title: Dear Tom: October 9th, 2010
LOVE IT
Date: 02/28/11 02:09 pm Title: Dear Tom: October 9th, 2010
I haven't started reading yet, but I absolutely ADORE letter-fic, and I can't wait to read this one.
Date: 02/25/11 11:29 pm Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
This was cute :) I'm VERY interested to see how tom reacts to the whole Bill talking about jacking off thing. Should be interesting. :P
Date: 02/25/11 11:26 pm Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
I LOVE this story. I laughed almost the entire time. It was great. Hope it keeps going. Or maybe a sequel done in a "regular" format instead of letters?
Date: 02/24/11 10:37 pm Title: Dear Bill: October 16th 2010
comment 1: he named his fish 'mr.bubbles worth'? hahahaha thats what im gonna name my next water pet now
comment2:fish speak? i thought that face was just them trying to scarepeople away from their tanks and outta their faces
comment3: i can picture tom just sitting there stareing at the fish. i do that sometimes... but not to track bubbles
comment5: i have a (internet) penal in mexico! funny enough we came/are becoming friends due to a random letter
comment6:"Boys on this side of town weren’t very accepting of the wangster wanna-be hitting on them and their sisters." WOAH. did he say AND?!!
comment7:"I never bothered with the whole coming out thing, ‘cause I never was fully gay,"....????!
comment8:"Insert dirty smirk here, if you will. " i pictured the well-known lip ring wiggle.. close enough ;)
comment9: the way tom describes the club it sounds like the place to be haha
comment10:" it will get you far, as long as you don’t suck too badly. I’m sure you are amazing." i was just about to ask if that was a sidewayz diss then BAM compliment =)
comment11: yes tom, i noticed how much better this one is and im picturing you with that innocent boy like grin on ur face
12th: i just pictured the look tom would give someone if someone went from moaning to asking s too vivid.
13th: SHERLOCK HOMES!... did he eally never say that in the books? he did in the saturday cartoon
14th: tom says 'fuck' alot. kinda ironic wink wink
15th: bacon bits are gross! u know how tom reminds himself of the pigs killed for bacon? well when i was little i used to tell my lil bro they killed babies to make bacon bits so he wouldnt eat them muhahaha
16?: i 4got to say im d up hot dogs in EVERYTHING
17th:" Somehow throwing up after a night of partying is nowhere neare as terrible as throwing up all my favorite candy" just put that down as my new fave quote =)
18th: i love toms questions haha
19th: and his ps's
20; i wrote 20 comments? gee wiz that must be super long. i dont even wana imagine what this is going to look like all the way out (i can only see small box)... SORRY!
Author's Response:
Tom and i (Billalovesskittles) are really enjoying your comments :DD
Date: 02/24/11 09:15 pm Title: Dear Tom : October 14th, 2010
1st: bill went ape shit in your mind? sounds painfull.. and awsome lol
2nd: does he mean he thought he was going to send his letter to the cops or is he telling him to?
3rd: awww i can just picture bill dancing infront of his mailbox... and the weird look that the mail man must have gave him lmao
4th: 'i wasnt trying to scare you, i was just sending you a random letter' lmao
5th: ' i hoped that i could become friends with someone this way" i know what he means but it still sounds hilarious
6th: " It might be pathetic of me to resort to this but I never was one for caring what people thought of me. " wooooo! go bill!
7th:should of guessed bill being gay as going to come up somewhere but i didnt. i guess its cause im looking at it from toms view. to me itd be obvious vcause of the setting of trhe story but for tom its like bam!
8th: why is bill making himself be more formal - ya know like crossing out kinda
9th:" apologize if it makes you uncomfortable, knowing I’m gay. I would understand if you didn’t want to keep writing because of it. Friends rejected me quite a bit when I first told them. " awwww poor bill, poor strong willed bill
10th:sooner or later they are going to realize there not stalking each other right ? lol
11th: he doesnt even know if hes gay and hes making sex toy jokes? niiice
12th: he thinks three brothers is alot? pft. i have twin older brothers,a older sister, a little brother and 3 step sisters NOT counting all the kids my step father has that iv never met
13th: like a big ssister hahaha thats messed up and cute at the same time
14th: the questions did make me picture bill as an excited kid
15th: how has he 'missed' his class twice? not like he has hangovers
16th: this was cute =)
Date: 02/24/11 05:49 pm Title: Dear Bill: October 11th, 2010
1st: "dear just bill" like it already " i really dont know why im responding to your letter," like it even more lol
2nd:i like that your making the letter realistic by having the cross outs, but good grief he cant spell lol is it cause hes nervous or do e just have that in common from birth?
3rd:tom is older! dont know why that makes me happy bit it does
4th: "but then you’d already know I lived alone, wouldn’t you? Are you stalking me? Am I being paranoid? " yes tom, very much so... but its widly entertaining.
5th: "Maybe I should have told you I live with a six feet seven black belt in wing-chun kung-fu." at first i thought he was saying 'maybe i should have old you im 6'7 with a black belt in kung fu' and tried to picture him that way. you already know how funny the image i got back was and if not try it urself. ill wait..... funnny right?
6th:"im not use to doing this writing stuuf" oh yeah tom, way to make ya self sound smart.
7th: i notice something they have in common already- everytime they state something about them selves '-like tom going to clubs- they ask if the other person is assuming the worst thing based off of it -like tom being a club rat- is that on purpose or am i just an overly observant/adhd reader?
8th:"God, now I sound like some overly sentimental weirdo, if I do, then please ignore that last bit about home and shit." see?
9th:drop out? hat explains the not writing lol
10th: 'rags on my back' someone gt jokes lol
11th: "to bother with restricting our vocabulary as kids. " 'our'? he has siblings?.... see? there i go being a adhd/over observent reader again
12: 'i have 3 brothers' knew it! -smug face-
13th: how much older? where did they go? why hasnt he seen them?.... have i mentioned im inquisitive yet? its part of my charm :p
14th:"Well, I’m gonna stop here or I may end up talking about something completely inappropriate" for some reason this reminded me of everyones (by which i just mean many girls) belief that toom is always thinking about sex.
15th:"t was kinda cool meeting hearing reading (?) from you. "hahahahahhaha
16th: i like that he crossed out love. i always put 'love' on the ends of things just as a reflect then realize i dont feel that strongly about the person its going to and cross it out.
17th:"My tadpole lives on the moon, on the moon. she makes me sing like a loon, like a loon. " ya know i would ask, but ill just take ya word for it.
Author's Response:
:DD i absolutely love your comments :DD i won'[t really "Answer" them because most of your questions Tom answers on his own. over time though I think you will notice that Tom's writing does "Mature" becauseche "gets used to the writing stuff". i really do hope you continue to read and enjoy our joint efforts on this story :D
rn-BillaLovesSkittles
Date: 02/24/11 05:29 pm Title: Dear Tom: October 9th, 2010
WARNING: I -Chady-as a reader dont do 'reviews', i do comments. I shoot to do one 'set'(?) of them per chapter but they tend to be long and very detailed so if they annoy you tell me and ill stop....
1st: sorry to have been a ghosts reader for so long. started tracking ur story because it reminds me of something i almost did (which is a story in itself lol), but havnt been on much so im actually only starting to read it today.
2nd:i kno exactly how he feels just by reading the 1st sentence in the 3rd paragraph... poor baby =(
3rd: correction: i HAVE done this...sorta
4th:this kinda reminds me of their song 'scream' only less agresive like.... 'cry' or something if that makes sence.
5th:i already like the sister =)... i feel like his mom is dead or some thing tho 0_0
6th: this maybe the first story iv read where bill (or who im assuming is bill) admits to his bitching! lol
7th:they have the same last name? weird...
8th:you can tell hes nervous in his writing... its adorable =)
Date: 02/22/11 12:13 pm Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
I love it. MMMM i've heard about phonesex, sexing, sexy emails, but sexy snail mail??? That should take long to come :D
Date: 02/22/11 10:29 am Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
awh, bill is a naughty tease. wonder how tom's gonna react to this letter. ;)
Date: 02/22/11 08:14 am Title: Dear Tom: October 9th, 2010
tomhandschrift. love the banner :D
Date: 02/22/11 04:12 am Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
I love this story. i wish i could read about the time they spend together though too. Keep up the great work. =)
Date: 02/22/11 02:05 am Title: Dear Tom: October 9th, 2010
Oh grosh! Lolz *thud* *falls on the floor and twitches a bit* hahaha
Date: 02/22/11 01:27 am Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
Tom: gaH Bill oh god BILL BILL YOU SICK SICK TEASE GUH! Now i have to go masterbate. how unfair is it? that when we are actually together we aren't all that sexual, well we are sexual, but not overtly so, and yet guh, when we're apart its nearly impossible to stay so? It's almost liek whe we're together, just being there is ALMOST better than sex... it satisfies in a different way
and hey! don't get me wrong sex is AMAZING!
-tom
Date: 02/22/11 12:51 am Title: Dear Tom : February 21st, 2011
IMF I can't wait for tom's note back lolz if I were him I'd fall out my seat if I someone told me that lolz
Date: 02/21/11 02:10 am Title: Dear Bill: February 2nd 2011
Awwww tom's such a sweetheart! A total perve, but also a total sweetheart! :D They're so cute! Can't wait to read more! ^_^ This is a very original idea in my opinion :) You guys are doing a great job! :P
Author's Response:
he is a perv isn't he! and a total sweetheart true. We are all so glad you are enjoying this story :D