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Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 03:51 am Title: Chapter 2: Acts of Fate

Oh, is Tom going to think that Marie is their mother? I bet so. *sighs* And then you'll probably make it a torturously long time until Bill tells him the truth.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 03:11 am Title: Chapter 2: Acts of Fate

wow. very mean. great great chapter, but I'm dying to find out why Tom is there. Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 2: Acts of Fate

I hope Tom won't be a jerk. I'm excited to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 2: Acts of Fate

GAHHHHH we're left like this?!?! Oh lord I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Acts of Fate

Oh wow, I didn't expect Tom to come looking for Bill like this. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next, if Bill is going to tell him the twins are his, or if Tom will think Marie is their mother, what exactly is Tom doing there. So many questions! I'm so loving this! The baby twins are adorable and Marie is awesome!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

A great beginning. I just wish I didn't have to wait another week! =)

Reviewer: lover2413 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

I'd love to see more of this :)

Reviewer: MyWhiteDecember Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

Oh no! God, this had me tearing up when Bill looks at the photo of Tom and his daughter... :'( I'm not feeling very amiable towards Tom right now.. :S and i feel so bad for poor Bill... all alone... (and Jost fainting all the time made me laugh actually... :P) How many babies is Bill gonna have? Twins? And is he in labour!?? *Waits excitedly for next chapter*

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

Ok I hate Tom and I hate Sonja for doing this to Bill. I know Sonja isnīt to blame, but! she couldnīt keep her legs closed!
Probrably Tom didnīt even thought about Bill while he was gone!
You know what? I think Tom has to suffer for being a really big Idiot!!!

Reviewer: bella_black Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

I, for one, liked it very much! I can't wait to see what will happen next, so please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ and sorry for the long wait for update. Life got in the way. -.-

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

Aw god poor Bill! I love it!!!!! Has he gone into labour because of the strees???? I hate Tom, he can be such a DICK!!! I hope he realises that Bill's his soulmate before he loses both Bill and his babies! I can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Lol, I love when readers love the drama. xD and Yep, labor due to stress. I've had family who that's happened to (the labor b/c of stress), and they're all like -.- i hate my life, and we're all like.....well at least they're out now, and you're off of bedrest. lol. Anyways, yea, Tom can be a dick, but I'm not certain he's necessarily a dick here. just a misguided, selfish idiot. there's a difference, I promise. lol.

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

*shocked*

Author's Response: lol, really? is that a good or bad thing? xD

Reviewer: Sweden89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

oh fuck thats sad, i really hope t'll be alright, its in stories like this i really hate women. And please let us see some jealous Tom, like REALLY jealous Tom, mean jealous Tom. Thats the best

Author's Response: Lol, don't hate women. it's not always their fault, when they're brought into something this bad. lol. And, jealous Tom is coming. I'm actually really excited for some jealous Tom. xD

Reviewer: AlexDum Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

Hell yesh, you're back!
I'm loving it so far. Poor bill running away from tom.

Author's Response: Yep, I am! I'm happy you're happy and that you're loving it. ^_^

Reviewer: kelyse Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

I liked it it's really good can't wait till nest week thought :( can't you do more now maybe for me :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! there's another chapter up now ^_^

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

O__0 I am so hooked...hope I can hang on until next week! I can understand the way both Bill and Tom are thinking...just hope someone opens their eye's before it's too late. Tom has no clue and I can't wait to see his reaction when he does find out...

Author's Response: yay! I love hooking people onto my stories ^_^

and yeah, their eyes will open. eventually. hopefully. We'll have to wait and see ^_^

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: On My Own.

I freaking love it! Bills in labor! I just can't wait til next week! More now! :)

Author's Response: Lol, Bill doesn't much like being in labor. xD there's more up now ^_^

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