Date: 11/23/10 11:29 am Title: Not So Easy
I kinda like the story, but you're rushing it. The whole story seems so unreal when they fall in love with each other that fast.
Date: 11/23/10 09:05 am Title: Not So Easy
well I certainly hope he gets over this silly embarassment soon. nice chapter. I look forward to more.
Date: 11/08/10 10:17 am Title: Second Thoughs
oooh conflict...good story so far. can't wait to see more
Date: 11/08/10 12:51 am Title: Second Thoughs
Aw that's cute. I like how it was love at first sight...but Tom's still a little scared. He should take baby steps.
Date: 11/07/10 11:44 pm Title: Second Thoughs
I think Bill will be in for a surprise, I have a feeling Tom wont be so willing to show his affection too publicly for a while. Then again, I may be the one surprised...
Date: 10/24/10 11:45 pm Title: I Knew
This may be my favorite chapter of the story so far~absolutely loved it!
Date: 10/09/10 04:02 pm Title: The Night's Not Over
i like this story.
its really good.
but it seems a little rushed to me
Date: 10/09/10 09:27 am Title: The Night's Not Over
I love this. More please? :)
Date: 10/07/10 05:33 pm Title: Art Exhibit
like this chapter!
Date: 10/07/10 02:02 pm Title: Art Exhibit
Hmmmmmm whats gonna happen now? ~_~
Date: 10/07/10 01:47 pm Title: Art Exhibit
Poor Tom---so gone already and not even a touch yet!! I want more...*PLEASE*?
Date: 10/07/10 01:01 pm Title: Dream Girl
he is falling in love that fast???
Date: 10/07/10 09:33 am Title: Coffee Shop Nightmare
This is so interesting, can't wait for more!
Date: 10/07/10 08:07 am Title: Coffee Shop Nightmare
I don't really understand why Bill would be ashamed because of that. IMO he has no reason to be, it isn't like he is with Tom, on the contrary he shot him down the day before.