Date: 09/02/11 07:32 pm Title: Clare
This story's amazing and I can't wait for the next Chapter!!!! WOW Go Tom!!!!
Date: 02/20/11 06:59 pm Title: Clare
i've been reading this on mibba & wondered where it'd gone but now i found it here :D yay!
Author's Response: Haha, it's been on mibba and on here, so don't worry. (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:47 pm Title: Clare
OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU ARE AMAZING! you really came a ways with your writing and your AMAZING!
Author's Response: Ha-ha, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 02/18/11 08:44 pm Title: Tom/Clare
Great job with the make up!
Author's Response: Thank you. (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:41 pm Title: Tom
....ya....i was thinking sex...>.
Author's Response: not yetttttttttttttt. :')
Date: 02/18/11 08:40 pm Title: Clare
omg SEX!!!!! lol great job! i though tom almost had her that time!
Author's Response: Ahhh, nearly. ;D
Date: 02/18/11 08:37 pm Title: Tom/Clare/Tom
hahahhhahahahha! i was one of the crazy fans!!!!! lol good job, detail is deff getting better
Author's Response: Crazy fans are the best to be honest-- they brought the band up into fame. (:rnThank you, and I'm glad it is. (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:34 pm Title: Clare
GREAT DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:32 pm Title: Tom
gain, details but this is good! i like the characters and the Jamie problem! very good!
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:31 pm Title: Clare/Tom
... a little to fast paced now, try to go a little deeper into detail, like what dose bill look like and whats going on in her apartment
Author's Response: I will next time-- this was one of my first fan fictions, so it's a little rough.
Date: 02/18/11 08:28 pm Title: Clare
omg if i moved in next to one of my lays id freak! great job of defining character!
Author's Response: Same here! However, Clare doesn't want to bother her parents with finding another place for her, so she sticks with it. (:
Date: 02/18/11 08:26 pm Title: Tom
O.O omg that was great! good discriptions and i loved the fast paceness!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
Date: 02/18/11 05:39 pm Title: Clare
Moore.. :D ♥
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I just updated so it will take a while. :/
Date: 02/11/11 05:47 pm Title: Tom/Clare
mooore? :D ♥
Author's Response: Soon. (:
Date: 10/06/10 08:21 am Title: Tom
I like it! It was interesting! I really hope you update soon I would love to read more!!! Find out what happends next :D your a good writer truly
Author's Response: It will be updated ASAP. (:
Date: 10/04/10 10:19 pm Title: Tom
i read this on mibba are u gonna uodate it??
Author's Response: Very soon actually-- I'm just writing some stuff for it now. (: