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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/25 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/17 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/15 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yum yum. Delicious scene. And wonderfully written. :)

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/13 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was hot... Cool idea too. Love it!

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/12 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

If i hold my breath you have to write a sequel or something, right? You don't want anyone to die, right? :D Anyway, awesome fic, i've red this a million times and this is one of my favorites i must say!!!

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/12 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good Story :)

Reviewer: TBells17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

this was really gd i wish it was longer :) and i hope that u elaborate into a multichaptered fic it wud b AWESOME :D

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

AAAH!!! i would love for this to be multichaptered XD angry sechs all over!! LOL!

Reviewer: Shattereddreamss Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's really damn good and I love the plot. If you ever make a full story out of it, damn sure I'll be there to read it xD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This would be interesting as a multi chaptered fic. But either way I likey

Reviewer: aia157_TH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

that. was. fucking. awesome.
and adorable :D

Reviewer: ree Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Multi-chaptered fic needed! I'm a sucker for Tom and Bill hating each other and having angry sex and falling in love.... :D

Reviewer: Krissi_Casa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg, this fic is just amazing XD I almost never read pwp, but this plot just lured me in. Multi-chap fic? Yes, no? Please? :D

Reviewer: xRupii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I WANT A MULTICHAPTERED FIC WITH THIS. It would probably be PERFECT :D

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1

...sooo how many "loves" do you need to make it a multi-chaptered fic? i got enough to do that plus more for this!

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wait, I'm confused. Is Tom a football player? Because if he is, I read that whole thing with the thought "GODDAMN he got all those pads off super fast!" >.> I'm a stickler for little details that make it realistic.

Wonderful angry sex. Om nom nom.

Reviewer: haenni89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

wooow. cool. *_* :D

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!love it please continue,it will be great:)

Reviewer: LittleMissSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would absolutey adore this as a multichaptered fic. I was listening to Let's Go Crazy (by Prince) when I was reading this, and for some reason it fit. I could definitely picture some giant scene on the football field where everyone's going crazy. But maybe I'm just being weird. Anywho, I loved the story. :)

Reviewer: ree Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

THIS NEEDS TO BE A FULL BLOWN FIC!!! I PROMISE TO REVIEW AND LOVE IT AS IF IT WERE MY OWN BABY!! PLEASE :D

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