Date: 03/01/10 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
When are you going to update?!?!?!
Date: 08/18/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1
The suspense kills me...Pleaseee continue! Great first chappie! :D Loved it.
Date: 08/13/08 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
omg! =0
(thank god for the "randome fic" thingy, or i'd have never found this)
this was really well writen and i hope this isn't one of those many fics that the author has given up on, because it was awsome! =D
i like the way you compaired bill's feelings with a rolarcoaster =D i think that's a really interesting way to do it and SO much better than the standard "butterflies"
please write more? (A)
Date: 08/12/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW !! This was really exciting !!
Why did you ever stop writing on this story?
'Cause you haven't been opdating for months, so what shall I do?
I am alredy addicted to the story .. :/ :S
Please help me !!
Write another chapter !! :D
Finnish the story !! :D
Please!!
Date: 04/11/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
NICE!!
reminds me of something i've read before though....
*looks suspiciously at sian*
lol- but yh!! NICE ONE!
Date: 02/13/08 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
NOOO U CANT JUST LEAVE IT THERE!!! lol, cant wait till ur next update :)
Date: 02/13/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1
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You better continue with this story!
omgggg
Date: 02/11/08 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
And then *woosh* a girl with brown curls jumps in, kicks Darren's groin and saves Bill. They become friends and she helps him with his feelings for Tom...
JHaha, just kiddin'. Good story! Go on!