Date: 05/01/23 12:56 am Title: Am I Normal?
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 11/15/18 03:03 pm Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 02/01/18 11:15 am Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 12/20/14 03:11 pm Title: Epilogue
Can I just say how much I love you right now? I LOVE YOUUUU!!!!!! I was yelling at the screen at the beginning and just cursing the world in general until everything worked out. And now I've just recovered from my joyful screaming fit to tell you that I LOOOOOOVE YOOOOOOUUUU!!!!!!! *runs off screaming again*
Date: 09/26/11 03:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Ah! I love his story! amazing job!
Author's Response: Awhh thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 09/25/11 02:20 pm Title: Am I Normal?
LOL we called this kid named Kirk a lurker. he was always hanging out by the girls bathroom....lurker. and i love big scary tom too X3 so hot!
Author's Response: Definitely sounds like a lurker! xD Everyone loves big scary Tom, even those who say they don't! Thanks for your review. :)
Date: 09/01/11 09:28 pm Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :3
Date: 07/26/11 02:07 pm Title: Epilogue
I really really liked this fic!! :) There's a bunch of classic twincest goodness in this: angst, doubt, avoidance, love, lust, yummy smut, forbiddeness, funny... it's so so good.
When I started reading this, I was like "Hmm.. I've totally read this before"- turns out I read this when u had it as a one-shot, but I'm so glad you made it into a chaptered fic. It explains Tom's and Bill's feelings and oh man, it was really sexy.
Am I sick for loving drunk!rapist!Tom??? lol. I also felt the bit where Bill buys Tom that hat: Awww!! Too bad Tomi was a douchebag and kept running away when all Bill wanted was him to hold him close. :( It worked out in the end tho, and that's what counts. :)
I thought it was a bit random to throw in a "nearly getting caught" flashback in an epilogue, but I loved it anyways cuz I love when they live dangerously. hehe.
I love Tom being a bit rough with Bill, on the verge of taking advantage of him, but then making it up to him. :) YAY for hitting a bunch of my fav kinks! Oh man, and the pinning Bill to the wall and Tom kisses him is soooo hot- one of my fav images ever.
So, I know you have your own style of writing, it's very obvious and I like your narration very much, but I feel like it just needs to be refined.. to me it feels like its SO CLOSE to perfect.. just tiny bits and pieces that need a little beta-ing. I'll elaborate if you want me to, but it's almost not necessary.
There were a few typos also- almost negligible, but just thought I'd let u know.
So yeah, that's it. AWESOME fic. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: Awhh woah, thank you so much. I'm flattered, especially seeing as you read it as a one-shot and then read it again. :'D
You're not at all sick for loving drunk!rapey!Tom...remember, I'm the one who wrote it. ;) Plus, that's nothing compared to one of my other stories. Having to continuously write Bill coping with Tom running away was ridiculously hard, just because of how sad he really was.
I understand what you mean about the flashback bit, but the reason behind it was because quite a few people wanted to see what their relationship was like after they agreed to try and work it out. After all, trying to hide that sort of relationship from your mother who lives in the same house can't have been easy. xD Ooh well I'm glad I managed to hit some of your favourite kinks!
I'd love for you to elaborate on what you mean. :) I'm always willing to know where people think I can improve because I, like everyone else on here, want to write at their best. If you want you can email me about it at x-unbreakable@hotmail.co.uk (ignore the lame email address, it's my one I use to sign up to websites xD). If you don't want to email me though, feel free to leave another review. :)
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely review! :D
Date: 06/21/11 02:32 pm Title: Am I Normal?
oh ok :(
Author's Response: Sorry! :(
Date: 06/20/11 10:44 pm Title: Am I Normal?
are you gonna do a sequel?
Author's Response: No I don't think so, sorry. I don't want to end up ruining it or something. :)
Date: 06/20/11 01:34 am Title: Epilogue
loved it
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 06/17/11 11:22 pm Title: Admitting
yeah, poor tomi
Author's Response: I know :( Bless him!
Date: 06/15/11 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue
=) Very good ending. I like it, it fir with the rest of the story very well.
Author's Response: Awh thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 06/12/11 04:24 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh, also, I love the age difference. This is kind of an out of place, pointless comment, but I do.
Author's Response: Ohhh good :) I love the age difference too - I think it was super important in the earlier chapters :)
Date: 06/12/11 04:53 am Title: Epilogue
'Gotta love smut and happy endings. (`:
Author's Response: Two of my favourite things xD thank you for your reviews! :)
Date: 06/12/11 12:38 am Title: Beaten
I've always wanted to get into a fight....
I mean, I don't think it'd be anywhere near enjoyable, but it'd be cool to have the experience.
Author's Response: I know what you mean. I've had some pretty bad fights with my brother, but not with anyone else.
Date: 06/11/11 06:34 pm Title: A Revelation
Oh, Tom. Rape is all about intention.
Author's Response: I agree. The question is whether he meant for it to end up like it did or not?
Date: 06/11/11 04:58 am Title: Am I Normal?
"Bill gasped and clutched at Tom’s oversized t-shirt as though it was the only thing preventing him from falling into the deepest pits of hell, which judging by the situation, it probably was."
HA! I just fucking love how creative that line is!
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I must say, I think that is one of my better lines xD
Date: 06/10/11 09:09 pm Title: Epilogue
AWWW That was amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it!