Date: 02/03/11 05:46 am Title: Beaten
Fantastic!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :DD
Date: 02/03/11 02:29 am Title: Beaten
Hi! Yes, I liked it, not for the bullies of course. But for the emotional display on the chapter.
Bill had it in him to not take crap from those kids, and now he is just putting to the test that new ability with his brother's crap.
I am already wishing the next chapter is up, so we can get to know if the Kaulitzes get along again.
Hugs!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. :)
Yeah, he's fed up of being walked all over.
Thank you for your review - you'll just have to wait and see whether they sort it out. ;) -hugs back-
Date: 02/02/11 11:33 pm Title: Sofia
Happy ending bitte!!
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. :) At the moment I'm leaning towards a bitter sweet ending. Thank you for your review!
Date: 02/02/11 05:54 pm Title: Beaten
Lovely, lovely, lovely:-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/02/11 03:45 pm Title: Beaten
I love the insights into what Tom is feeling & I'm so glad that Bill put up a bit of a fight..
it's a great story so far & I'm really looking forward to more.
*tracks story*
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I think Bill had just had enough of being walked all over by everyone.
Yaay, I'm glad that you liked it :))
Date: 02/02/11 03:43 pm Title: Am I Normal?
*takes cookie*
brilliant chapter, I thought the idea of "rape" would make me feel uncomfortable.. But you wrote it well, good job.
I really love the characterizations, and Tom's character is very intriguing.He's is very angsty.. i'm torn between liking him & disliking him at the same time..
Author's Response: Awh thank you, I'm really glad you thought I handled it well - I didn't want to lessen the seriousness or anything.
I love Tom's character throughout this too; it's super fun to write because he's just so conflicted. I'm glad you like it too. :)
Date: 02/02/11 03:24 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Hey! *waves*
new reader here!
I'm loving this story...it's very interesting & well written..
Author's Response: Ohh a new reader! -waves and hands out cookies-
Thank you, I'm glad that you like it :DD
Date: 02/02/11 03:02 pm Title: Beaten
At least Bill put up an effort to fight back this time. Maybe this situation will result in Bill becoming stronger and more independent...really looking forward to next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think he got fed up of always being pushed around by everyone. :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 01/20/11 03:12 am Title: Done
Great update Zoe:-)
I have told you already how much I love the realness this story carries with it but this chapter is yet another super example of it. How Tom reacted at the end of both previous and this chapter screams it to me. I think that is why it is so powerful and so interesting to read, that's why it makes me care and wonder what will happen next:-)
As for now, it seems that Tom is trapped, he aches and he is confused. He is living in a weird limbo of trying to avoid Bill, still he wants him badly but also doesn't want to hurt him...that is a pretty impossible equation...the boy needs to make some decisions soon...not easy, huh? Not being able to entrust himself to anybody with this highly sensitive matter doesn't make it any easier on him.
I find this story to be ultimately Tom's story, in true sense of it, not trying to diminish Bill's importance or input in it. You as a writer are dealing with some pretty heavy weight issues in here and there is absolutely no easy way out of it. You have been doing marvelous job so far though.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) You know I always love your reviews, so thank you for yet another lovely one!rnrnTom is indeed trapped; he really doesn't know what to do for the best. While he's trying to avoid Bill to prevent hurting him, he's realising that he's already hurting him by doing just that. He now understands that his time for stalling has run out and he does need to finally make up his mind.rnrnIt's funny that you say it's Tom's story - when I first started writing this as a multi-chaptered story I had the intention of it mainly focusing on Bill. But now, I also see that it's more focused on Tom. It's interesting how stories can change like that.rnrnThere is no easy way out, but I'm going to do my best to do this story justice. Thank you so much for your review and all your help. It really means a lot! :)
Date: 01/17/11 06:57 pm Title: Done
Hi
It was, indeed, a gully emotional chapter. I felt the anguish of Tom at the end, as well as the defeat of Bill.
What will it take for them both to get together again, no easy path is awaiting for them, is it?
See you next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you felt their defeat and anguish, I was worried that I didn't manage to pull it off. And no, there is no easy path...it's not going to be easy for them to make up. Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 01/16/11 06:01 pm Title: Done
o.O tom you stupid i cant believe you share the same DNA with bill
Author's Response: Ahaha bless him; he tries his best. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/16/11 06:00 pm Title: Done
*gasps* I don't like where this is leading D:
They better figure everything out eventually ;-;
This is still so amazing! And.. Yeah I'm speechless once again D:
Author's Response: I know, things are not going well for the boys D: Don't worry, I'm sure they will figure things out soon enough...even if I have to force them into the same room and make them sort it out! Awhh, wow thankyou, that means alot. :3 I'm glad you like it and thankyou for your review! :)
Date: 01/16/11 02:54 pm Title: Done
Ohh, great update. i loved Bill's comment about how the other girl looked to jessica. too funny. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/16/11 01:59 pm Title: Done
:o what would happend next ? ^-^ cant wait for more
Author's Response: I have no idea O.o Haha, I'm going to have think about it :') I'm glad that you liked it and thank you for your review :)
Date: 12/31/10 09:28 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Haha my two best friends are twins Lynde and his brother and then Alexis and her sister :D Yay for cool twins :O
Author's Response: Ah niceee, go cool twins! xD
Date: 12/31/10 09:28 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Woot I'm excited and you better make it D:
Author's Response: I shall do my best :D
Date: 12/31/10 06:12 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Cookies! -eats- You are very welcome! I love re-reviews, I wish my reviewers did it more XD And no dye :I
Author's Response: :D Well, I'm going to go and check out what you've written right this second and re-review to my hearts content as payment for your wonderfulness xD haha! And don't worry, I think I'll just about make it into 2011...after that though, who knows?! ;P
Date: 12/31/10 06:10 pm Title: Am I Normal?
I doubt you will and who knows I'm sure you'll figure it out :O
Author's Response: Gaah, fingers crossed! D:
Date: 12/31/10 06:10 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Dude they are! Well Lynde is, the one that looks like Bill, I've never seen the other twin [kaiser]. Although Lynde has short red hair now and Kaiser long black dreads XD But hey I don't blame you I'd do the same thing!
Author's Response: they sound AWESOME! I wish I knew awesome twins like that! The only twins that I know of are two girls a couple of years below...the word 'slags' comes to mind. Oh, and two guys that used to be in my year at school, but they were chavs. O.o Ahaha, I'm glad I'm not the only one!
Date: 12/31/10 05:06 pm Title: The Truth
This is getting so good.
Just do not rush, do not rush it girl!
This chapter was superb and the way you wrote their angst and all the misunderstanding was simply brilliant.
It did make sense ans more than that. It was quite amazing actually:-)
Happy New Year 2011
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! As you know, it means a lot to hear that. :DrnrnI'm really trying not to rush it, but now I'm not sure where to go again. :/ I think I need another helpful email xD *hint hint* You don't have to, by the way. :)rnrnThank you! I hope you have a great New Years! :)