Date: 11/01/10 08:19 pm Title: Sofia
O_O you did good :O lolee
Sofia had no chance :P
Author's Response: Thankyou! xD and haha, she never did. ^.^ Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 11/01/10 05:57 pm Title: Sofia
Happy ending for sure :3
Damn this chapter was sooooooo good *___*
You're definitely improving. The way you describe Bill's immer battle and how Tom is characterized is what's making me hooked!
Definitely wanna learn and read more about them, so I hope you update soon :3333
Author's Response: Ahh woah, thank you! :DD I'll update as soon as possible. I'm definitely leaning towards a happy ending too, but I wanted to know what you guys think. I'm glad you like it so far and thank you so much for reviewing! :D
Date: 10/24/10 03:18 am Title: Obsession
wow wow wow
Author's Response: :DD thankyou for your review!
Date: 10/24/10 12:43 am Title: Obsession
:D I'm really happy you decided to keep writing this :P
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Awhh thankyou! :) I'll get to work on the next chapter as soon as, so hopefully it won't be too long. :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/23/10 11:55 pm Title: Obsession
Hm...I still think Tom is going to take advantage of Bill and Bill is so enraptured with Tom that he wont even notice. Like Tom is protective of Bill and don't want anyone messing with him, but it's ok for Tom to do what he wants. Does that make sense? Not always the best at getting thought's out! ^_^
Author's Response: That makes perfect sense and you are very much on the right lines. :D Thank you for your review. :]
Date: 10/23/10 06:34 pm Title: Obsession
I'm so thrilled you decided to continue this!
I love the idea and I like the way You've characterized Tom and Bill ^_^
Hope to see some more kissing and touching between them in the near future. And personally I would love if Tom made Bill go all the way with him at some point *____*
Anyways, love the story and will keep it tracked to keep up to date with it :3
Author's Response: rnWoah, thank you! :D It's great that you're glad there's more and I'm really happy you like the characterisation. ^.^rnrnThere will definitely be more kissing and touching soon, and they'll probably go the whole way too...I just need to figure out the circumstances of it all. *__* Thank you so much for your review; I'm glad you like it so far! :]rn
Date: 10/23/10 04:20 pm Title: Obsession
Scary Tom is sexyyy.
Author's Response: Oh I know xD he's so fun to write. Thank you for your review. :]
Date: 10/23/10 04:18 pm Title: Obsession
i love this story :D its awesome.i wonder what happens next O_o
Author's Response: Thankyou! :D And oohh, you'll just have to wait and see ^.^ Thanks for your review. :]
Date: 10/23/10 04:11 pm Title: Obsession
I'm so glad this story isn't a oneshot after all! :D It's way too interesting to be left wihout continuation.
Btw, Tom is weird.
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you! :D I'm glad you think that - it makes me believe that I made the right decision. :]rnrnAnd yeah, I know he is. :D It's all part of my plan...rnrnThank you for your review. :]rnrn
Date: 10/07/10 10:49 am Title: Am I Normal?
hmmm...i'm honestly unsure of what i think of this...it was alright, I can't really elaborate, nothing is exactly wronge per say, something just didnt click and sit right with me you know?...sorry I couldnt be more constructive or give you a better review...but at least I didnt lurk right?
Author's Response: Fair enough. :) It's a shame that you can't pin-point anything wrong inparticular, because I could have gone back and possibly had a re-think, but I understand what you mean. I've read stories before where there's nothing "wrong" with them, I just didn't get on with them. Thankyou for your review anyway; it was definitely better than lurking! :)
Date: 10/07/10 12:47 am Title: Am I Normal?
This was pretty fierce I think, really left me wanting more!! :) Kind of wish I had a little more background as to why on earth Tom started kissing Bill (cuz it was a bit out of the blue), but it was devilishly hot. The story has a really hot pedo factor going on, hehe, cuz of Tom being 3 yrs older, and it makes me feel twisted for liking it, but it's SO HOT. I loved that Bill was kind of scared and didn't know how to react at first but then at the end he liked it. :) and I loved big brother Tom and how he protects Bill.
Sexy and kinky. I liked this very much. :)
Author's Response: Woah, long review! Thanks! :D There is likely to be more written; even though it was originally a one-shot, I'm going to make it longer to explain why Tom did kiss him. Devilishly hot?! Thank you! I'm glad I didnt fail in that aspect. ^.^ I love the whole protective Tom thing too, so it just seemed right that Bill was abit scared. Thank you so much for your review, and I'm really glad you liked it! :D
Date: 10/04/10 08:48 pm Title: Am I Normal?
I'm such a creep for violent older tom xDD
WHY IS THIS ONLY A ONE SHOT??? DDD:
Author's Response: Ooohh same! :D You'll be pleased to know that I'm currently working on some ideas to make this longer. ^.^ Thankyou for your review. :))
Date: 10/04/10 01:29 am Title: Am I Normal?
I really like when Tom is a very violent character with everyboby but Bill...Bill on the other hand seems to only have spirit for people that matter like Tom...I LOVE IT! Think you will write a sequel or a story with these tom/bill personas?
Author's Response: I love when Tom's a violent character, and Bill's more reserved, too. :) Thank you! I may write a second chapter/sequel, but I will definitely write more stories with personas like this! :D Thank you for your review!
Date: 10/04/10 12:35 am Title: Am I Normal?
Being normal is overrated! :3 Great story. I'm glad to have read it. :D
Author's Response: Being normal is very much overrated! ^.^ I'm glad that you liked it and thank you for your review! :D
Date: 10/03/10 11:58 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Why oh why is this a one shot?! I love bad ass Tom, and I can't figure out if Tom is taking advantage of the situation, or with what happened, his feeling's surfaced...LOVED IT
Author's Response: Loads of people are saying that :P I think I might write more to this, revealing whether he is taking advantage of not. :) Bad ass Tom is just amazing! I'm glad you loved it and thankyou for your review :D
Date: 10/03/10 10:09 pm Title: Am I Normal?
8D See that face?
Thats the face of a satisfied reader. Continue to make stories like this. FYI, I like a big scary Tom too. 8D
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it! xD Everyone seems to like big scary Tom :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 10/03/10 08:08 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Wow. I loved it! I love the mad, scary Tom. Sexy!!!!
Author's Response: Awh, thankyou! :) Scary Tom is very very sexy. I'm glad that you liked it and thanks for your review! :D
Date: 10/03/10 06:01 pm Title: Am I Normal?
Oh, I am tracking this!
Author's Response: Woah, thank you :))
Date: 10/03/10 05:35 pm Title: Am I Normal?
This was really good! I enjoyed that very much!
And SEE? I'm not a lurker :DDD lol
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D Yaaay for non-lurkers xD
Date: 10/03/10 04:47 pm Title: Am I Normal?
great story :D it was creeper tom!or sometimes they call him pedo tom...anyways..good story :D
Author's Response: Thankyou! :D whether it's creeper Tom or pedo Tom, he's still awesome :) I'm glad you liked it and thankyou for your review