Date: 04/11/13 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Please more... Please? =3
Date: 04/11/13 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Please more... Please? =3
Date: 02/03/12 09:27 am Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
this was a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: thank you! but im kinda at a blank :(
Date: 01/25/12 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Something as great as this has turned out deserves to be continued. And then it deserves an ebding just as great. I know you can do it! beliéve in yourself! God knows we belive in you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate every ones support and I really do want to finish this so bad. It's not that I don't have the time, but when I do I have no inspiration. I think I need to read all of what I have so far and go from there.Don't know when I'll do it, but one day I'll have to sit and make myself concentrate, lol. Thanks again :)
Date: 05/10/11 12:05 am Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Aw. I love how innocent Bill is and how much Tom seems to love that about him. I love this story.
Author's Response: My goodness it's been a long time since I've responded. It's also been a long time since I've written anything. I know I owe it to my fans my characters and myself to finish this story... I just can't stop procrastinating!
Date: 11/09/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Escape
rofl
Author's Response: thank you?
Date: 11/08/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
dawwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! gott, i think this story has made me "daww" more than almost any other on this site.... damn.... XD
Author's Response: beware teh fluff! >:D
Date: 11/08/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
i absolutely LOVED that
soo sweet
cant wait for more
can I have the link to that facebook you were talking about?
Author's Response: well, i havent fully decided weather or not to but up a link to my fb yet, but i think i might next chapter :) you guys seem nice, like you wouldnt track me down and kill me :) i hope ._. haha and thnx as always :D
Date: 11/08/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Still great. :)
I love Bill's childish ways. They're adorable. But then he pulls out something like "My Tomi always" and you can tell he really loves Tom with an adult kind of love, and it's so sweet. Keep that going on, yeah? ;) Can't wait to see what happens in different situations. I have a feeling trouble is brewing on the horizon...
Author's Response: to be honest. idk what kind of trouble is brewing, but i feel something epic should happen. i didnt plan this out xD and i still have yet to discuss age and life on bill's planet further with tom. hm, i shall have to do that soon >.> and thank you :D
Date: 11/08/10 08:58 am Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
yay!!! update!!!! I woke up this morning all achy and hurty in my back then I sat at my computer, checked my tracked stories and saw you updated, now my back doesnt hurt any more!!!...I suppose that might have something to do with the tylenol...nah it was you...this was a great update!!! I really loved it. I appreciate that you want good inspiration for before writing. sometime people seem to get burn out then just crap out on an ending and that is never fun. can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: why thank you :D i was unaware i had magical powers of healing xD although, i have been told i have healips lips of jesus :0 lol! glad my update made your back not hurty :D hope to have an update soon, but idk exactly when.
Date: 11/08/10 03:49 am Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Love, Love, Love. I am so excited that you put this up!
Author's Response: :D Hopefully the next chapter won't take so long :) -hugses-
Date: 11/08/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter 14: Illegal Activities
Yeah,i liked it very much.
It was soo sweet...and i waited this chapter for soo long.
Thank you for updating and go back to write.
I will wait next soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) I'll write more soon :]
Date: 10/27/10 09:35 am Title: Chapter 13: No Bun No Oven
I honestly don't see much difference between when you beta and when you don't, haha. I guess you're just a naturally good writer. ;) Anyway, it's so sweet how Tom is totally spoiling Bill. And Bill is just being so damn adorable it's hard to even believe it. What a sweetheart. -squishes-
Author's Response: Yay I was squished again! 8D Lol thanks for your kind words as always :) They make my happy :} And the only reason I don't normally spell things wrong: Spell check xD But thank you :D -squishes back- smoosh you later ;D
Date: 10/27/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 13: No Bun No Oven
How funny is Gustav...omg,i can't anymore :)))))
Yeah,Tom are right:Bill need a birth certificate at less.
Very funny this chapter,sweetie,i want more
Author's Response: And I shall give you more :) But I'm so tired v.v But I hope to have more up soon :D
Date: 10/26/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 13: No Bun No Oven
wow great chapter again, full of much cuteness. Up where you were talking about band-aids on Bill's planet you put an 8 in the middle of the word things. just so you know. I used to have so much fun with that butter thing at the theater here. I used to put so much in it would leak out the bottom after about 15 minutes or so. I can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response: Bahahahahaha xD Once, I got a huge butter stain on my pants! Looked like I peed myself Dx And it stayed there all day >:| Lol xD Damn the 8! My spell check thinks it's ok to have random numbers in between words inside them, so it never tells me Dx I'll correct it now, thanks :) Hope to have another chapter soon :D Adding a new character ;)
Date: 10/26/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 13: No Bun No Oven
:( bill cant have baby? "pouts"
LOL
great chapter
Author's Response: lol nu Bill nu has bebes! and thank you :D
Date: 10/26/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 13: No Bun No Oven
uh-oh...... tom's dabbling in illegal stuffz........... XD when's georg coming in??????????????
Author's Response: He already did ._.
Date: 10/20/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job
I like lots!!!! More pleaseeeeee!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 10/20/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job
i loved this chapter
cant wait for more
Author's Response: LOL you're my 69th review xD
Date: 10/20/10 11:15 am Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job
hehe...... dirty business in work.... XD great job!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ikr? xD Thnx :D