Date: 10/02/10 08:28 am Title: Chapter 3: Blending In
Haha, Bill's a genius at hiding himself. How adorable. :) Let's hope that he either learns the language or he starts to understand Tom. I hate having the barrier of speech. I have it in my new mermaid fic and Bill can't speak (yet) in it so everything has to be done with words for Tom and motions for Bill. It's hard having to write it all out. XD
Oh, I know a lot of space stuff so if you ever have a question, go ahead and ask me. I used to be really into that for a long time. :3
Author's Response: a mermaid fic you say? hm i may have to check that out :) but yes, bill is very smart and he'll start picking things up and learning english :) also thank you :D if i have any questins i shall ask :)
Date: 10/01/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: Fated Encounter
If it only took him three weeks to get to Earth, then the planet must have been like right past the Moon. Unless the UFO travels at really fast speed, which you might want to mention because otherwise it kind of doesn't make sense.
Awh, I hope Tom treats Bill right. I think he will. But Bill's planet has to have a lot of different customs and stuff from Earth and maybe the Earth things will scare him. But he'll have Tom there, so he shouldn't have to worry. :) Tom will help him out and explain things.
Author's Response: bahahaha xD im so bad with space travel! i'll tweek it to explain the pods abilities a bit further. i just didnt want it to travel to fast cause that ends up making you go slow... like, idk, space travel cofuses me hahaha but thank you for pointing that out :) an yes, tom shall be there for bill :3
Date: 10/01/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2: Fated Encounter
I think this story is very cute, and starting out pretty damn interesting.
Favorited :)
Author's Response: woo i made a favorite :D as was my goal xD
Date: 10/01/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Fated Encounter
i read two mistakes, but it didnt matter, i understood what you ment
I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: damn i'll have to read through carefully next time x)rnnext chapter will be up soon :D still gotta write it xD
Date: 10/01/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Escape
i love it
i love fics like this
Author's Response: happy to give you what you want xD
Date: 10/01/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Escape
*bear sie hug* oooh!! I love love love it so far!!! I don't really have any ideas of what i'd like to see yet, but I am super interested in seeing more of it!!
Author's Response: *returnes bear hug* im excited too 8D
Date: 10/01/10 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1: Escape
Awh, I feel so sorry for his sister. The poor thing was just trying to help her brother out and she got killed. :( Well, at least Bill is safe. I think I can live with that. :'( Tom better help Bill out because he's going to be really, really sad when he gets to Earth, and he better be ready to help Bill deal with the death of his sister. :(
Author's Response: First review! :D -squee!- Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) I hadn't planned on Andreanna's death but it sort of just happened you know? I do feel bad though :/ I liked her. Anyways, Bill is safe now and I can assure you he will be well taken care of :) I already have most of the second chapter worked out in my head :D I just gotta write it now xD And have it betaed so I dun look r-tarded xD