Date: 10/07/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
Every time Bill asks 'what is that?' I recall the interview where he asked 'what's a facebook?' XD
Author's Response: lol xD i didnt see that one, but it sounds funny :)
Date: 10/07/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Little by Little
I had the same trouble with the beta's too
I wrote some of them, didnt get a response from any of them.
Please update soon
Author's Response: I shall :D And yeah my beta has like no wifi at the moment :|
Date: 10/07/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 7: Little by Little
What a sweetheart. I love how he cries over pretty much everything. Probably because I always make Bill do that, but who knows. It's so precious and sweet and I feel so bad for the poor thing. I do hope he can go back to Alchera with Tom and the two of them can live together forever. Tom doesn't seem like he has a ton keeping him on Earth, and to be living on a planet so peaceful that war makes them have to run away...mm. It sounds wonderful. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter. ♥ You're doing great without your beta.
Author's Response: Thank you :D Your words mean alot to me :) Hehe Bill cries alot but it's cause he's a child at heart. I still really haven't discussed their age but I should probably do that. There's alot I've yet to toalk about, so I will definatly have more chapters, I just don't know how many haha. I already have the next chapter, just not all the way done yet. I want to make it long :) Well long for me! If I don't get sick I should have it up tonight! Looking forward to your next review :)rnrnAnd thanks :D Sometimes I need help but other times I pretty much rock xD
Date: 10/07/10 02:32 am Title: Chapter 7: Little by Little
excited? you? no way!...I was so happy 5 minute ago, I was going to go to bed, but something said "hey, you should check Currently Untitled, she might've updated"...so I did, and you did!!! I was so happy. It wasnt too bad a wait really, one day is like SO much better than nearly EVERYBODY. *crosses fingers* I hope you keep it up!...as for Tom I am all "you don't know how innocent he is" am I right or what? *wiggles in chair* I can't wait for more!!!...yes this is for the most part fluff...if it makes you want to go AWWWWWW !!! like 90 perccent of the time its fluff...you must be new to fandom. if you have any questions feel free to contact me. I don't normally write fanfic, but I've done a boat load of reading it and had to pick things up the slow way...took me forever to realize that POV meant point of view for one thing.
Author's Response: bahahaha xD i only know what that means cause of porn :x lol but thank you very much for your review :D made me all happy inside and i giggled from excitment! i got too caught up in reding the other day to write, so i made up for it tonight :) glad i did a good job :D i may start working on the next chapter but thats only if i feel better :| im all achey Dx BUT! thanks for your support and your offers :) i looked up what all the warning/genres were so i think im good there, but if i has a question, i'll ask you :D also, I CANT THINK OF A FREAKING TITLE >:O the best i got is "when worlds collide" but that sucks Dx if you have any suggestions, ANY!, please tell me D: i'll put a big thank you in the summary :D kisses! x*
Date: 10/06/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
sweet
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Working on it now :)
Date: 10/05/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
in the second to last chapter its "clung" not "clinged"
I absolutely love this story
Author's Response: oh, idk why i thought it was 'clinged' lol my spell check didnt notice anything either. thank you for pointing that out. and im glad youre loving the story :)
Date: 10/05/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blending In
awesome story
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 10/05/10 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
I like this story so much! Alien!Bill is so sweet and innocent, and Tom wins the prize for adorability.
Author's Response: i just triy to make him how i'd want a man to treat me :)
Date: 10/05/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
dawwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dun worry about it, it's cute!!!!!!! more plez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: will do :)
Date: 10/05/10 09:03 am Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
Awh, this is just the sweetest thing. Oh, and there's a guide to the warnings and genres and everything when you add a chapter. It's somewhere in one of the rules and it says "For a guide to warnings/genres, CLICK HERE" and then you just click there and it explains all the warnings and genres so you know which ones to use. You can bookmark the page just in case, like I had to do for my first few stories. :)
But yeah, Tom is just so sweet and I love that. He's so amazing to Bill and I absolutely loved watching Bill learn English. So adorable. I don't think I could do a better job myself. :') I swear, this story has got me saying 'awww' the whole way through.
When Bill turned on the TV and started seeing the wars, I actually teared up. Omg. It was so sad. Just made me want to cry and blubber like a baby. I can just imagine how Bill would see the war and cry over it, since his planet was torn apart by one. :( God, that was just so heartbreaking. I kind of hope you'll put more stuff like that in the future but at the same time I don't because I don't want him hurt. But I do at the same time. ;~;
Author's Response: bahaha xD best review yet :D thank you very much :) long reviews make me want to dance! but thank you for the info, i'll definatly have to look at all the wanings/genres to learn them all. some are obvious but others im like "wth is 'lemon'? >:O" lol im so glad i have fans! thats so new to me. im doing the best damn job i can on this story, making it all sweet and dramatic :) perfect combo x) but yeah, i'll for sure have more drama, but nothing too bad. like no ones gunna die or anything. well no one else :| i just felt his sister had to die so she could watch over him in spirit :) but bill will learn more english and tell tom why he left and there will be crying and love making xD the NC17 stuff should come pretty soon ^-^ thanks again for the review :D keeps me writing :) even though i abandoned my other story xD
Date: 10/05/10 08:57 am Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
Awwww....so sweet.
I like very much.
Please update more soon :))
It's very interesting.
Author's Response: thank you very much :) i dont feel good at the moment but maybe later i can write more and have another chapter up soon.
Date: 10/05/10 03:22 am Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
ummm...I like the length and the wording is still fine, but you did misspell a few things today. um you meant "he couldn't TEAR his eye away" not tare and "Tom watched as the water carried the FOAM down Bill’s body" not form..but other than that i'm so loving this. i have no better words for the love i have for this...its adorable and cute and fluffy and just fantastic.
Author's Response: idk why i could not spell "tear" i was thinkng that was like a tear drop... i fail Dx and i didnt even notice the 2nd one! i must be blah today xD but thank you :) is this what fluff is? i never knew xD
Date: 10/04/10 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Shopping Spree
I didn'r notice any blatant screw-ups in spelling or grammar, and I'm nit picky about things like that normally. So good job with that!! This fic is super great so far. Bill is seeming a little extra naive in this, how old is he mentally? I mean yea he might physically be 17 but if his species usually lives like 200 years that'd be like 10-12 for us, or is this supposed to be more lie a culture difference?...or are we going with a mate type theory?...I dunno but you might want to address it, just a suggestion ya know? can't wait for more, and I don't think this was too short considering you update so frequently.
Author's Response: don't worry, i plan to make reference to it shortly :) once bill knows some english. so far he's just shy but he is really smart :) i'm going to work on the next chapter today, maybe have it up tonight, though i'm neglecting my other story :| lol
Date: 10/04/10 10:43 am Title: Chapter 5: Shopping Spree
D'awwww, he said Tom's name. :) I find it so adorable how he wanted womens' underwear, somehow. I don't really have a doubt they would look sexy on the actual Bill which frightens me a little. XD His and Tom's relationship is so sweet. I love it. And hopefully Tom will be able to protect him from everyone looking for him. ♥
Author's Response: Teehee I know x) He's just so adorable, you can't help but squee at him :D The real Bill I mean xD I'm hunt him down and make him wear pink undies xD I'll take a picture :D Though I might get a lawsuit against me :| It'd be worth it :D LOL glad you're enjoying it :}
Date: 10/03/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
yesa you tell me the name of someone who doesn't like pizza I'll give you the name of a liar. So cute though, I can't wait for the language barrier to be gone and oh btw I LOVE HOW FREQUENTLY YOU UPDATE, its amazing, I can barely keep up which is a super awesome thing. keep up the great work.
Author's Response: why thank you :D having no life helps xD plus, im really curious to see where this is going! i have all the ideas in my head but nothings concrete until i start writing :) im also an insomniac xD
Date: 10/03/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
New reader.
I liked very much:))is very sweet this story:D
Please update soon.
I will wait next chapter:x
Author's Response: and i shall :D hopefully tonight but i cant say for certian.
Date: 10/03/10 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
Bill is cute b29;
I can't wait to read the next chapter ^-^
Author's Response: it shall be up soon :D
Date: 10/03/10 08:24 am Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
Awh, Bill's bein' so cute. What a little sweetheart. I love when he's all innocent and helpless. And Tom's a freaking angel for taking care of him like that. I mean, if I was him I'd probably have been way weirded out by an alien landing on Earth, and I'd call the authorities or something. I'd like to think I wouldn't, but that's probably what I would do.
I'll tell you when the mermaid fic is out. :)
Author's Response: well tom wished for him after all. maybe not him but somebody. and bill fell from the heavens and into toms pants XD lol but seriously. ah shit i just remembered what i forgot to put in this chapter >.< i'll work it in the next one :) and yay thank you :D
Date: 10/02/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blending In
how ever will Bill learn language skills?...I love this so far and can't ait for more!!!
Author's Response: why thank you :D and bill's smart :) he'll learn... with tom's help x)
Date: 10/02/10 08:30 am Title: Chapter 3: Blending In
How did Bill change his eyes and ears? Besides that good chapter!
Author's Response: alien magic xD