Date: 10/12/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
i love how Tom was worried :3 it was so cute
Author's Response: I knuw x) I like the concerned and caring Tom :)
Date: 10/12/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
I like how you're taking it slow with them though :) i loved this chapter :D
Author's Response: I knuw :D I had butterflies the whole time I was writing it :)
Date: 10/12/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 7: Little by Little
this one was sweet :) and i didn't see any mistakes, and again i'm sorry you can't get in touch with me D: do you want to message me on facebook instead?
Author's Response: Its alright boo-boo x) And yes :D I'll message you my next chater via fb when it's finished. My damn allergies prevent me from seeing to type o__e
Date: 10/12/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 6: Getting Close
Aw this one was so sweet :) I loved it
Author's Response: why thank you miss :D
Date: 10/12/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Shopping Spree
awe :O I'm sorry D: I loved this one and i promise I'll try and make myspace try and work for me so i can read :|
Author's Response: Is ok bebe I know you try :) If all else fails, we can beta here xD
Date: 10/12/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Strange New World
I love how Bill kind of attacked the pizza xD such a cutie
Author's Response: lol xD everybody loves pizza! even aliens xD
Date: 10/12/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blending In
awe x) Tom is a little shy? lol but is bills species shapshifters? is that how he changes his appearance?
Author's Response: yes, i plan to explain further in later chapters, but they can change certain aspects about their appearence :)
Date: 10/12/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: Fated Encounter
Toms reactions always makes me smile, I love how this is so different from what I usually read x)
Author's Response: thats my goal :D
Date: 10/12/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: Escape
I told you whenever i first started reading this :) I love this! ^-^
Author's Response: thank you :D yay I have my beta back xD
Date: 10/11/10 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
oooooooooo, poor billi... being sick is no fun..... ^_^
Author's Response: Is ok, he has Tom :)
Date: 10/09/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
Awh, that part with the Band-Aid was pretty adorable. He's just like a little kid and I think that's the cutest thing ever. :3 Poor baby Bill got sick. Let's hope that it's not anything serious or that he's going to get even sicker, because we don't even know what medicine he's supposed to be given. :(
Author's Response: i know :) i thought i should add a little bill cuteness in this chapter, since he's kinda not in it. but dont worry, all shall be well :)
Date: 10/09/10 04:14 am Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
it was kinda sad this chapter,but i like it.
I hope Bill feel fine next chapter and thank you for updating soo fast.
Author's Response: you're welcome :) i also updated my other story if you want to check it out xD it needs love :| but don't worry, Bill will be fine, he had Tom ;)
Date: 10/09/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
*is baffled* weapons? what? Why would I come back with weapons? I brought cookies *holds out tray* they're snickerdoodle! you don't have to worry about me bringing weapons unless you go like a month without updating in which case you might worry...poor lil Bill gettin all sick and not feel goodish...your right though it would make perfect sense for him to get sick here. I'd like to know more about the Gustav situation though how does Tom know him, why did they fall out of touch?you know stuff like that....Oh I'm glad you liked the suggestion for a title, I would be honored to have my idea used as a chapter title. I understand you wanting to hold off on naming the story...gotta make sure its perfect. sorry you were all sniffley like Bill I hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: lol it was a fairly odd parents thing xD jorgon von strangle lol COOKIES! -inhales whole tray- burp! :0 thanks :D teehee x) i dont think you have to worry about my not updating. i totes neglected my other story cause people seem to love this one, so i'm concentrating on this one atm. and i was going to explain about gustav, but it felt bill was more important as of then. but gusty will be in more chapters, so no worries ;) i also may add other characters, you will have to see xD cant wait for your next review! :) Bye :D/
Date: 10/08/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: Old Friends
I'm sorry your allergies kicked in but thank you for putting up the chapter! Haha, I love this story and I love the 'child Bill'. He's so cute. And thank you for bringing in Gustav, He's coolieo! Who's next? Georg? :D
Author's Response: Lol I won't tell xD Actually I havn't worked out a part for Georg yet :| I have an idea but it wont come up for a few chapters :) I'll try to work him in though. Thanks for ze review :D They keep me writing :) <3
Date: 10/08/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Escape
TwinSwords is right, by the way. Don't worry about the sex so much. Just go naturally, and if they don't have sex it's perfectly fine, you know? :)
Author's Response: Yes :) But they will have sex xD It wouldn't be NC17 without it xD I could always change the rateing, but I'm kinda looking forward to writing about their epic love making xD But glad to know you'd still read it without it :)
Date: 10/08/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
D'awwww, that is just so sweet. Especially the bit with Bill calling the starfish his favorite sea animal. I thought that was pretty cute. :3 Never thought about Bill having a favorite sea animal before. I wonder what his really is. :o Anyway, you've done a wonderful job of making this pretty much one of the cutest stories I've ever read. You keep it up, okay? :)
Author's Response: and keep it up i shall :D lol when i was writing, like most things, it just came to me. my favorie sea animal is the starfish, except the freaky ones with like 16 legs .__. scary haha i wanted to illude anyways i could to stars, since thats what tom thought bill was when he first saw him :3 posting soon :D cya ;)
Date: 10/08/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
Yes,yes,yes....they kissed!
I liked it very much this chapter.
I love how you write.
Please post soon sweetie.
Author's Response: Horray for kisses :D I shall post soon :) And thank you :D
Date: 10/08/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
huh.... eh, sex isn't everything a relationship has.... am i the only one who actually enjoys stories more when there are fewer sex scenes and more just cute fluff like this????????
anyway, my musings aside, GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! cant' wait to see more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D Sometimes i like smut but other times I like it all fluffy :3 More fluff to come :D
Date: 10/08/10 12:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
each chapter just gets more precious than the last. The zoo and picnic were really good ideas as a way to teach Bill a bunch of new words. Sometimes I wish I could see the world the way this Bill does...umm a title...hmm I've only got one idea that might work, and even it might be better in a summary than as a title cause its so long but I'll throw it out there for you anyway An End is Only a New Beginning...like I said...kind long but it does fit the story well...ps I'm totally cool with them not jumping into sex i mean its been what 2-3 days right? looking forward to more...*goes all Schwazenegger* I'll be Back...
Author's Response: Bahahahahahahaha xD with weapons? Lol Thank you so much for your reviews, they make me all happy and dancey :D ~Does the Bill dance~ I really like the title suggestion, but I may use it for a chapter. I don't wanna rush the title too fast ya know? Even though it should really already have one xD I have the next chapter or two in my mind, I just gotta write them :) Looking forward to your next review, laterz!
Date: 10/07/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: Perfect Day
I love this chapter
soo cute
a is soo cute to imagine Bill being so curious about stuff.
Author's Response: a curious bill is the cutest bill xD