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Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job

Alien sex in the workplace D: I'm so shocked. Where will they do it next? :P

Author's Response: Hells yeah ;D Hm next? Idk, YOUR PLACE xD

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 07:21 am Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job

I'd never be able to do something like that. I'd be too afraid that I'd get caught somehow. XD But then again, with someone like Bill I just might break the rules... ;)

Still loving it. This is a great story and one of the best fluff ideas I've read in a while.



Author's Response: thank you 8D -special feeling-

Reviewer: Livianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 04:31 am Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job

Omg!i love how you write.
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!
Good job girl,i love to see more:))
Kisses

Author's Response: Well thank you :D I love that you love how I write :) Makes me feel special :} I like all my first chapters are fluff to give it a niced coushion, and then flop some NC17 on top of it, then maybe some more fluff to tuck it in. Teehee x} Kisses? :D Yay! x*

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 12: Sleeping on the Job

well *considers carefully* I suppose your forgiven. Another really nice chapter, I' m thinking he might get in a lot of trouble if he keeps bringing Bill in to work...as much fun as it may be. can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: thank you for your kindness :3 I'll try to update more often. And yes, the boys could get into a lot of trouble >:3

Reviewer: Icrymusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 11:47 am Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

This story is so fluffy and kwute! :3
I can't take the sweetness!
XD
Love it very much! Keep up the good work 8D

Author's Response: And I shall 8D I gut got a tattoo on my left write and I don't wanna type one-handed, but I'm gunna make myself work on the next segment tomorrow :) Stay in touch :D

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

Leavin some love for you :)

Author's Response: -gasp- 8D -squee- xD TSOA left me a review 8D

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

Okay, that's hilarious, you calling us horny bastards in the author notes. Hilarious, and completely accurate! Great chapter!

Author's Response: xD thank you, i am quite hilarious :}

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

Alien sex couldn't get hotter than that >.< I had to switch my fan on. It's was captivating, it's like Tom was in awe during the entire thing XD

Author's Response: bahahaha xD made you hot, ja? good! lol yes yes Bill is one to put you in a state of awe haha

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

man, being sick/blah sux....... ^_^ great chap though..... that last scene was so cute!!!!!!!!!! XD take care of yourself, please!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I shall :D I'm less blah today. Just allergies :) -sniff- I should maybe b e able to post a new chapter soon. Maybe! No promises.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

this was great
wouldnt it be neat if bill could actually get pregnant (i mean in the story, not in real life ROFL)

Author's Response: bahahahaha xD a rl mpreg bill? epic! haha but yeah it would be cool. tom just doesn't know how Bill's race is set up with their sexual organs and such.

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

Haha, that's great. Bill has like this slightly different view of sex and it makes it funny. He's kind of like me, like, "Go ahead and do whatever, I'm not very experienced at this." It's good Tom's a virgin. We wouldn't want poor little Bill to get sick with an STI or something, now would we? That would be absolutely horrible. Hm, let's see how this goes...I'm wondering if anyone from Alchera is looking for Bill and if they'll just push Tom inside since he's just a human. :(



Author's Response: Lol yeah Bill just wants Tom's sex and Tom's like all taking it slow and shiz xD And I guess I never really made it clear, but I probably should in later chapters, Bill can't go home. But it's ok, he doesn't want to :)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

guuhhhn *drools*...oh meine gott...that was the most epic alien sex i haveEVER read. I should so have not read thiswhere I did...I'm sitting in one of my college's lounges right in the middle of the room... I really shouldve known better. eh too late now. very very nicely done...oh and there was only one mistake i noticed. One of the things Tom missed most about being single was the cuddles, it should've either been One of the things Tom missed most about being in a relationship, OR, One of the things he missed most while BEING single...so yea. love this fic SO much. *huggles*

Author's Response: o shit that does makes no sence, i go change it x) and thnx :D lol as long as no one noticed you squirm yiu should be alright ;) -huggles-

Reviewer: Livianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closer

OMG!!!
What can I commented?
Perfect!!!
Very detailed and sweet and hot.
Speechless:))

Author's Response: 8D

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

I love this
cant wait for more
sex scene next?

oh and i know what you mean about being depressed, iv had problems with that too.

Author's Response: yeah it totally sucks :| but yes, sex scene next x)

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

it wans't too long of a wait.... ^_^ and this chapter was TOTALLY worth a wait..... tom and bill are so CUTE!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals* take care of yourself!!!!!!!!!!! (please?)

Author's Response: lol ok ok I'll take cre of myswelf, thanks x) and yes they ARE cute xD

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 10:53 am Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

well thank goodness you updated today...I was starting to think I'd have to find my pitchfork. Its ok really, crap happens I know, But i can't believe you stopped it there!!! evilness!! thats what that is!...I wish you the best of luck with resolving w/e situation you have going on in your life and I hope you...feel better? is that the right thing to say about depression? I dunno...but hey think about this. YOU you have fans. how awesome does that sound? oh yea...*big squishy bear sized hug*...Bill just has the best plans. so simple, so straightforward, so perfect. I'd like to learn more of his planets view on sex. but I know were getting there, its not often I read a WIP from the very beginning can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Calm down xD I shall gives you more! And yes, I shall have to sit the boys down for an interveiw so we can learn about Bill's customs :) Till then! -zooms away to the kitchen- FOOD!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 10:48 am Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

well thank goodness you updated today...I was starting to think I'd have to find my pitchfork. Its ok really, crap happens I know, But i can't believe you stopped it there!!! evilness!! thats what that is!...I wish you the best of luck with resolving w/e situation you have going on in your life and I hope you...feel better? is that the right thing to say about depression? I dunno...but hey think about this. YOU you have fans. how awesome does that sound? oh yea...*big squishy bear sized hug*

Author's Response: Nuuu not the pitchfork D: I update soon I swear! Nu stabbing! Lol, yes I am quite evil to stop there >:] But I wanted the next chapter to be strictly sex. Teehee x) Thank you for the well wishes :) Yes it's ok to say 'feel better' haha. I feel ok today. Just blah -.- It is quite cool to know I have fans, QUITE cool x) -hugses- That's my second hug today :D

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 07:44 am Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

Well, finally. XD Gosh, I thought they'd never get to it now that I know you're going to write sex. Haha, I'm just kidding. You could have put it at like chapter 20 and I'd be perfectly fine. I just like reading about good relationships. :)

Tom is just...I know I say this all the time but he's so sweet to Bill. It's really adorable. It makes me want to squee with happiness. And Bill is so adorable and innocent and he makes me happy. He does the sweetest things and it makes you just kind of squirm with happiness in your seat. Well, it does for me. I don't know about anyone else. :3

Oh gosh, suicidal thoughts? :( I used to be suicidal so if you need anyone to talk to that understands what it's like to be that way and have those thoughts, shoot me an email, ok? -hugs-



Author's Response: Bahaha I wanted to get everything nice and fluffy before I went all NC17. I actually planned this for later, but Bill just couldn't wait xDrnrnAnd I know :3 I made Tom all sweet on purpose. It's how I'd want to be treated if I were a male alien who left his home planet and crash landed on Earth into the arms of a sexy stranger... ha xDrnrnrnYes, the thoughts have returned :| I used to be really suicidey, but I got the help I needed. That was just a really bad day v.v I'm ok right now but thank you :) Always nice to know someone cares x)

Reviewer: Courtszteney Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 05:58 am Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

Nawwww so cute!!!!
Billi can't speak English properly,
They're going to get freaky, Tom has a soft side and Billi is an ALIEN!! XD I was actually listening to Alien while I was reading this without realizing :S lOl
Hope you update sooooon!
xxx
Courtney

Author's Response: LOL thats funny xD And yes, they shall get freaky >:]

Reviewer: Livianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/10 04:29 am Title: Chapter 10: Bridging the Gap

OMG
I had a smile on my face the whole time I read the chapter.
awesome .... but why did you stop right now?
keep me in suspense???:))
Very well then, post soon:))
kisses

Author's Response: Lol if I didn't stop there the chapter would be UBER long! Plus I like keeping you on your toes ;) kisses x*

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