Date: 08/12/12 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw it was more than okay! Aaaw, so damn adorable, i can't handle the cuteness!
Date: 06/02/12 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwww i love it!!!!!! It was so cute how they treated eachother :`)
Date: 02/20/12 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dude.
I loved this story, how it started, how it progressed, and how it ended.
It was awesome!
Date: 12/10/11 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh I loved this story. Could've been a bit longer ^^
I hope you write more Tom+Manzini stories in the future.
Those are so rare.
Date: 08/21/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 4
I know that I'm loving your stories more and more everytime you upload a new chapter!! I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Lol thank you that means a lot. I've finished this story and plan on posting more that I've been working on for a while. Most of them are going to be Tom/Manzini and I hope you'll like them. :) lol
Date: 07/08/11 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just found your story and it's so good.
I love the Manzini/Tom pairing.
Hopefully you write more.
Author's Response: Thank you I am getting ready to finish this story and write more Tom/Manzini (:
Date: 12/08/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was really cute! I love it! Please continue to write more!:)
Author's Response: Thanks lol I am going to finish this and write more soon (:
Date: 12/03/10 02:57 am Title: Chapter 3
your story is so cute! I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you I know its been a while but I am going to finish the story (: and write more (:
Date: 10/16/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Haha tom told the bitch:) please please update soon!!!
Author's Response: For real that skank whore lol rnI will today (:
Date: 10/15/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3
God I love this...cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Yea I'm glad (: ima put more up (:
Date: 10/15/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it and love Bills character so far-it's refreshing and different! Now to catch up...
Author's Response: Thank you I will finish this story and write more soon(:
Date: 10/14/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
love it ...i have been waiting for the updates.... thanks
Author's Response: yea! sorry I take forever to update I don't mean to its just hard cuz I'm moving and trying to look for a job and trying to think of were I want this to go and yea lol rnbut thanks for reading (:
Date: 10/14/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gotta say, I love Bill in this story.
Author's Response: Its cuz he's gangster lol rnI love him to(: rn
Date: 10/14/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love it :) But I think maybe you should get a beta reader to help you with grammar and spelling and stuff. It's always helpful and they can always help you out of a writer's block or give suggestions/tips if you're ever lost!
Just trying to help a fellow writer. I love this a lotttttt, though. Tomzini is loooooooooooooooove. Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Yea!:D rnYeah I want a beta but I have no idea who to ask or where to get one lol if you could help me find one or something that would be great(:rnrnI appreciate the help alot (: so true lol. thanks for reading!rnwoot woot! lol
Date: 10/12/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it! Love bill!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!:Drnthere's gunna be a new chapter today (:
Date: 10/05/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
love it i hope u update soon..gonna check ur other stories
Author's Response: I'm glad you do (:rnI'm hoping to put something up by tomorrow or friday (:rnThank you I just put up a new chapter for my other story Light of Mine:D
Date: 10/05/10 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
i am liking the story so far...
Author's Response: Thank you I'm gunna be writing a bit more now and I'm gunna finish this story (:
Date: 10/05/10 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very cute, lovd that Tom's afraid of spiders...but did he borrow Kris's shoes or something? Just wondering...
Author's Response: Haha...I know I was rereading and I was like wait I didn't say if he had borrowed shoes or not sorry about that lol rnI hope you can forgive my mistake(:
Date: 10/05/10 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
ahahaa I like Bill, he seems funny in this fic ;)
And daaammmmnnnn, they were just about to kiss before Bill knocked!!
Author's Response: haha i do to lol(:rnI know right lol:D
Date: 10/05/10 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2
I love it! More!!
Author's Response: I will get more up hopefully by tomorrow or friday(: