Reviews For Stay Forever Young
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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 08:09 pm Title: “…Stay With Me, Lay With Me…”

when is Bill going to tell Tom the truth? its obviously Tom would be ok with it. thanks for the speedy update!

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing/reading :)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 06:43 pm Title: “…Stay With Me, Lay With Me…”

Jace is so cute lol. The dimissal btw Tom and Anna-Lee was epic lmao.

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing/reading :)

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 03:19 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

Ok I want to know who the other guy is! And yes Tom you should have stayed.

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing/reading :)

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 02:45 pm Title: “…What Is Love?”

This is very good!!!!

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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 08:38 pm Title: “…What Is Love?”

A few typos, but good chapter. I am very much looking forward to the arguments between them, for the truth to come out. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing/reading :)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/10 03:21 am Title: “…Do You Remember That? I’m Coming Home…”

ooh, very much looking forward to seeing Bill and Tom interact together for more than a few seconds.

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing/reading :)

Reviewer: MissBlueeyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 09:58 am Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

Ohh Intresting, now I wonder if the little girl is Toms and what about that other kid. Hmm probably I need to wait you tell more before I start make my own conclusions:)
But if Tom is pappa please don't let him go to easy because now look like he was that who left:( I look forward to next chapter:))

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Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 08:42 am Title: “…Do You Remember That? I’m Coming Home…”

MORE MORE MORE! I'm intrigued about Tom's dream!

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Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 06:31 am Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

AWWW their Toms kids huh? OH! is Bill single? i hope he is :)

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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/10 05:43 am Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

hmmmm...i think this has potential, i look forward to more. =) just a few typos were missed, other than that, great!

Author's Response: thanx for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 11:59 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

One word-MORE

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Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 07:25 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

Interesting. I can't wait to read more.

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Reviewer: MalenaN Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 05:15 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

I don't get it, this is a Tom/Tom, not a Tom/Bill?

Author's Response: bill/tom sorry just a little error

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 04:34 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

I can't wait till the next chapter!

Tom has a lot of unfinished business.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 03:38 pm Title: “I Was Walking With A Ghost. I Said Please, Please Don’t Exist”

I'm hooked. Update soon!

Author's Response: will do.

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