Date: 09/29/10 12:02 am Title: Ankles & Angles
Beautiful story, I really felt the depressing and starving for perfection feeling. I admire how you used those technical references, made the story more reasonable. The way Tom reacted, was more professional until he couldn't take it any longer. And how showed Bill's inner conflicts. I love how you managed to pull off using Tom's eyes to tell the story.
Under 125 is also pretty realistic, thank you for such an entertaining story~
It was at most lovely.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of that, and you're welcome.
Date: 09/29/10 12:00 am Title: Ankles & Angles
This almost made me cry. It's scary because you can't help but think that this may be happening. You look at these beautiful pictures of Bill and Tom and at first you see the shiny wonderful beauty. And then you take another look and think, God Bill is thin. And when you look closer, you can see that he is unnaturally thin. It makes me want to scream at Bill to take better care of himself but at the same time, I can't help but be jealous because I have an eating disorder too.
Author's Response:
I try not to think of it that way; I've got a high metabolism too, and although I'm a good foot shorter than Bill, I still weigh less than anyone I know, even people shorter than me. But I actually eat a lot when it comes right down to it, and there have been pictures of Bill chowing down, so I'm kind of leaning that way.
But I hope you overcome your eating disorder and get better.