Date: 04/26/25 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 03/18/15 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh delicious! Tom is totally done for :)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for reading!!
Date: 03/14/15 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot hot hot! My favourite kind of twin one shot *_*
Author's Response: Ohhh thank you! I really struggle with the sexier kind of fics so I'm very happy you enjoyed :D
Date: 01/27/15 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry you had a bad day i hope it gets better. Your story definitely brightened my day so thank you
Author's Response: It was a long time ago now :) Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a kind comment!
Date: 03/03/12 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lols XD Poor Tomi *shakes head* Well done ^-^
Author's Response: hee, thanks!
Date: 07/23/11 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Niiiiice story ;)
Hope you're doing well now btw.
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm fine thanks, love <3
Date: 10/02/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Bill's tight jeans are scrumptious - especially when Tom's grabbing his ass in them. ;)
Hope life's going better, love. :(
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Life's looking up a little thanks to so many lovely reviews, including yours ^___^
Date: 10/01/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
sice you asked nicely, an honest response...
JIZZED IN MY PANTS!!! awesome.
Author's Response: Haha THANK YOU SO MUCH! Hope the clean up wasn't too icky xD
Date: 09/30/10 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1
this was mostly adorable, with a touch of hotness and, sweet to the bone. i loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it ^_^
Date: 09/29/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww honey! *hugs* i don't know what's happened..just want to say i hope things get better..infact i know they will get better soon...trust me & have a little faith..no pun intended..lol
great story, (as usual)
i really enjoyed that...i loved the "tight" theme.. thanks for sharing with us..
hope you have a good evening
and we all love you X
Author's Response: Aw thanks, I've got a little faith now, thanks for giving it to me ^_^ You're welcome, I'm glad you liked it :) You're always so sweet to me, so thank you so much! <3
Date: 09/29/10 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've been sick for a few days so this story has been sitting in my browser unread. Let me just say it made me feel just a bit better. haha. I hope you've gotten some great reviews that have made you feel better too. *HUGS* Thanks for a great little story.
Author's Response: Aw hunny, get well soon <3 I'm glad it could help, even it was just a little :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! ^_^
Date: 09/29/10 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot =)
I hope you'll feel better =)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Thank you for the wishes, too <3
Date: 09/29/10 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I like that, wish it is longer before they rush into bed = bill can tease tom some more.
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't quite like the length! I sorta assumed myself there was time between when they kissed and when they jumped into bed but realised I didn't actually WRITE about it, so I'm really sorry xD Thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 09/29/10 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww, I'm sorry you had a bad day D: *hugs*
But yeah. Man, this summary had my mind deep in the gutter at first glance xD I loved it, and I loved the fic as well *_* Hothothooot. I died during the interview part, when Tom started talking about the jeans x'D Wahahha.
Good job *_*
Author's Response: It's okay, life goes on :D Thanks for the hug <3 Awww thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it! :D <3
Date: 09/29/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job. I love how you kept with the theme.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/28/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Could you have used the word "tight" a few thousand more times? lol. That's my only complaint, that it sounded a bit repetitive. Other than that tiny flaw, I really liked this fic. :)
Oh Tom.... hehe, thinking about Bill's pants. LOVE the answer in that first interview. Brilliant. Imagine if he said that in an interview IRL! ROFL.
I think your greatest quality was that you really captured the charged atmosphere between them. You have a unique writing style, the way you describe things sticks out for me, it's very crisp/sharp I feel. :) Oh, and the way Tom zoned out all the time, and when he sat on Georg's hand... funny!!
I wish you would have explained a bit better that Bill was also attracted to Tom, so it wouldn't have seemed so sudden when they started fucking. Wish you'd written what happened between their first kiss and the sex. Perhaps I should just suspend my disbelief for the sake of the story.
This fic was good, very enjoyable, but has room for improvement IMO. Is it a bad thing that I want more though?? LOL. Well done. :)
Don't get too down about your bad day. You've certainly put a smile on my face with this fic. :)
Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry you didn't like that so much, although that was kinda the point of the fic, a bit of a theme :) Oh thank you so much for your kind words! Yeah, I know I didn't do too much of that, but this was just meant for a quick fluffy one-shot, minus all the angst and reality of the situation. I'd intended for some time to pass between the kiss and the sex, but it was my bad I didn't actually convey that to you guys, I realised the time passsing was all in my head haha xD Thanks for reading, I appreciate your opinions.
Date: 09/28/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude. *_________________*
This was fucking HOT.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! :D
Date: 09/28/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I sometimes wonder how Bill gets in his jeans some of them don't even leave room air >.> I once thought it was magic :/
But I've yet to see someone look as sexy as him lol
Author's Response: Haha I have wondered that many a time, maybe Tom helps him into them? xD Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 09/28/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill’s beauty surpasses most in this world
I very much appreciate that this story stays true to well known facts such as this one. I'm sure scientists and fans agree (in addition to Tom of course) that this is the case.
Since I have you here, I haven't gotten to write chapter 7 yet because I've had no time and I forget what we said was going to happen in it. *was obliviated* Damn Lockhart.
Tom's obsession with Bill's pants is delicious. I wish I had a tight pant wearing Bill at my disposal :D
Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? *__* Haha you make me smile, I'm sure we do all agree xD Ahahah it's okay! Take your time my dear, we're in no hurry and real life can be a bitch when it comes to taking up our time *grumble* Oh don't we all? xD Thank you so much for reviewing, I was so happy to see you'd dropped by a review :D
Date: 09/28/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was such a cute fic! Sweet, funny and sexy, you're so good at reading this type of story :) I really enjoyed it! I hope you'll have a nice evening, sorry to hear that your day sucked... :( Thanks for making my day better with this fic !
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! You always make me smile, so thank you! <3