Date: 09/27/10 12:32 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
Jeez, that was so cute, and fun, and *sigh*
Author's Response: hehe, thank you :D
Date: 09/27/10 10:55 am Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
Totally not gay, rofl. Just like I'm the Queen of England. lol.
I loved this fic. So witty and funny and thoroughly enjoyable. This was light-hearted and easy to read, it flowed great and was just what I needed to put a smile on my face.
I loved your characters!! Tom is such a cocky Prince Charming. lol.
This totally lived up to the fab prompt- I only wish the twins had been related. That would have been the cherry on top. Until then, I'll live with Bill attacking Tom's lips and still saying he's not gay. Brilliant. hahahahaha :)
Author's Response: Had the twins been related it wouldn't have worked at all with my plot though, but I'm glad you liked the rest of it.
Date: 09/27/10 02:14 am Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
This was just WOW!!!
Author's Response: haha, thank you :D
Date: 09/26/10 11:56 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
I really liked this. I hope Bill isn't willing to give it a try just because of the gifts but because he really likes Tom. Are you going to turn this into a multi chapter fic or a few one shots in this same world? I would love to read more. Great work.
Author's Response: This is probably just going to stay as it is, actually, but thank you so much :)
Date: 09/26/10 10:08 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
MY PROMPT! :D
lol I'm so excited that someone picked it up. Especially you, since I love your writing. Couldn't have asked for anything better. :)
Author's Response: Oh that's awesome, I'm really glad I could fill something for you <3 I'm really happy you loved it so much <3
Date: 09/26/10 09:32 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
OH CUTEEEE.
Now write a sequel, thank you. :3
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/26/10 08:29 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
LOVED THIS! I was intrigued by the prompt to begin with, but you really made it so entertaining and cute. I hope you consider a sequel at some point, as this universe is just too awesome!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I'm not sure about a sequel though, I like the openendedness of it all, haha~
Date: 09/26/10 08:28 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
very nice story, i really like it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 09/26/10 07:46 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
That was a really good story. I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :D
Date: 09/26/10 06:07 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
It was cute I feel bad for both Bill and Tom. Tom. Because what a mess to.get himself into. And Bill because he's just so confused. But it was rather adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/26/10 06:06 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
Loved this!! Love persisting Tom and Bill who slowly surrenders! Somehow it tastes for more.. sequel maybe? Directly after the clubbing/kissing-part? *grins
Author's Response: Thank you!! Although I don't know about a sequel. I quite like the ambiguity ;P
Date: 09/26/10 05:58 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
Such an amazing story! I loved the plot, it's a rare thing that Tom is the gay one and Bill the straight, but you wrote it so well. Tom's character was also amusing, and entertaining.
I'm fairly new on this site, but I've already read a ton of your stories, and I love them all. I should get better at reviewing though, that is for sure. But this is a start, right? :)
Author's Response: It is rare, but it's what the prompt called for so I went with it :) Thank you.
And thank you again! I'm really happy you love them :)
Date: 09/26/10 05:57 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
That was funny, I liked it! Tom is a little creepy and well, Bill let go fast, but it was a pleasure to read it!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I don't know about creepy, just, to use Bill's words, "persistent" and the story spanned around two weeks, so maybe not too fast :)
Date: 09/26/10 05:51 pm Title: ...And One Time He Succeeded
I really liked this. It had a nice rhythm and the plot was great. I loved how Bill actually proves that he's not gay but willing to check out what a 'Tom' is all about :) And Bill is right there. Just because he's chosen a gay relationship it doesn't have to
involve anal *gasps!* *g* ;) Maria
Author's Response: Thank you! And Bill isn't gay, just like he told us/Tom all the time, haha, I think it's posible to still identify as straight and like someone of the same sex or whatever.