Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 01:37 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

i loved the part with bill outside tom's door. you could just feel their desperation and longing and pain. this was great. =)

Author's Response: Yeah, they were both really hurting, there! Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 12:05 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

I still want art. It would be interesting to get this from Tom's point of view, as a felinoid. He was pretty shocked during the first attempt, but the second, when he transformed, it seemed to be all animal instinct. Hmmm... as usual, Bill gets what he wants and Tom gets sex. Lucky brats.

Author's Response: Oh man, I'd love it if there was art, believe me. And yes, the second was pure animal instinct. And they are lucky brats indeed. ;D

Reviewer: Sonnefeuer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 04:48 pm Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

I think if my mother walked in on me having sex with my brother...I don't even know. Amazing story. Loved every bit of it. And a bill kitten is just hot.

Author's Response: OMG I know. It would be the end. THE END. But I'm glad you enjoyed this take on it! Thank you, I agree with you on Bill kitten. ;D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 04:12 pm Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

It definitely needed a sequel and I'm so glad you wrote it! This was absolutely brilliant, kitty twins are awesome! This fic was so hot, I love needy twins :P The ending was hilarious, Simone is such a funny character!
I really enjoyed this story and the universe, thanks for writing it so perfectly!

Author's Response: I'm really happy you thought so! \o/ And yes, I had to do it. So pleased you thought it was awesome! And I am a big fan of needy twins. ;D Glad you thought the ending was funny, definitely so intended. And thanks for your lovely review!

Reviewer: alexLOVESjumbie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 10:47 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

Yesyesyesyesyesyesyes and yesss Goodness, I read the first one and I was like, she had to make a squeal. I thank those two for pushing you to do this. Gah. It was, intense, rough, amazing. You should do a series. :)

Author's Response: Hee, good to know it's a 'yes' all around! I'm really happy you were excited about a sequel! Ohh, I don't know about a series... I'd need more for them to do than just PWP stuff! :3 But thank you, I'm happy you loved it this much!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 06:57 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

aw this is the end for real?! But it's such a good universe xD okay, i won't whine. This was far too good for me NOT to be satisfied. Ohhhh and this is exactly what i wanted to read, like i said; young twins! And young twins written by you, it's almost too much to handle xD

i looooved this! Bill's first heat... mmmmm. Sexy and submissive haha. Poor Tom, kinda xD I loved the end scene with Simone, it made me chuckle. Aw wow, this was so perfect! Or should i say puurrrfect. Okay no. That's too lame.

Looking forward to more from you! I always am ^^

Author's Response: This is...probably the end for real? I'm glad you enjoyed this trip into kitty universe! Young twins being all sexy. ;)

Thank you, and oh, definitely poor Tom! Until he finds out it's okay; then they're just going to go crazy for each other. And I will proudly accept "purrfect."

Thank you! :3

Reviewer: Paceus Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 05:12 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

Yay! This is so good -- more and better than I even hoped for! *beams*

I love the description of how Bill feels at the beginning! Characters who don't realise what it is that they want (or need...) are so much fun. I like how Bill tries to figure out what's wrong: "He aches, but there are no hurts on him," and it's so marvellously logical. Bill is headed for something all along even though he doesn't know what it is -- he feels confined so he strips. :D

Bill is so wonderfully needy! "Panting" and "on fire." Delicious. *g* I love how he trusts that Tom will know how to help him and what to do. "Like puzzle pieces, they so often slot together" -- hee! This is such a fun story, I love the humorous tone! You've written Bill's obliviousness so realistically and sympathetically; it's priceless, but because of the fitting metaphor, not because Bill's dumb or anything like that.

I wondered how they'd figure out what to do. Turns out it's not very difficult. *g* I love how straight-forward Bill acts (or is compelled to act)! And I love how completely he leans on Tom, sure that Tom will make it better, even though he doesn't know how. "Hopefully Tom will know?" This made me smile. Tom seems to have a very good idea indeed... :D Had he thought about it before? With Bill or in general? I love the intensity of his reaction. It seems that all thoughts fly right out of his head; Bill must be overwhelming his senses, in an exquisite manner, I imagine!

Tom should take it more slowly, though! "before Bill had time to adjust, relax, or even fully realize what is happening" -- aww! A wailing and sniffling Bill makes my heart clench. Especially that he's so shocked it's Tom who's hurting him. :( I'm so glad they can make it better -- and how... I love Tom making "enjoyment to spark and build up in Bill's stomach" and Tom rubbing "himself against Bill's ass" and "looking absolutely wrecked" is just so lovely. *_*

What's Tom asking that Bill interrupts -- is he trying to figure out why now, and what's happening in the first place? It doesn't seem like there's time for answers, Tom, sorry. Hee. I love that they kiss and start right over again!

Tom in felinoid form makes me shiver! I really like that he's more careful even though they don't talk anymore, and seem rougher with each other; it seems they can actually communicate better this way, that Tom is alert so as to stay on top of Bill's most minute reactions. You show their connection marvellously, both emotional and physical! I especially love this: "Bill flops back onto the mattress, pliant and glowing and done. Tom growls down at him, expression feral and intensely possessive." I love that there's a hint of what Tom is seeing and how it's making him feel. ♥

There's biting! I love you. You write it so well, too: "his entire body suffused with pleasure as Tom marks him, claiming Bill as his." This is such a lovely, happy fic! I love that Bill is enjoying himself so much. His quick cat nap and dreams of being sated! It makes me so happy to read about it.

Tom kind of ruins it by running, but I don't blame him -- he's clearly not as affected at all as Bill is, so he's thinking about issues like incest and how sex hurt Bill at first. Poor Tom! It's funny; I felt so much sympathy for Bill when he was hurt and confused by penetration at first, but now I also feel sympathy for Tom who must be freaking out. (Except that he also amuses me when he's saying, "especially not at me!" I wonder how Tom would react if Bill waved his naked as at someone else :D)

And Bill is, on the one hand, so adorable I want to hug him and make sure his ears never have to crumple "into a devastated configuration" again -- crumpling kitty ears! It seems I'm very susceptible to them. But on the other hand his predicament also makes me giggle. His means of getting Tom back to him are just hilarious, especially using Tom's trousers as a lure! Hee. Also this: "Bill is certain the sight of his rear should be like a magnet drawing all toward it" -- it cracks me up! And I'm pretty sure it does work like a magnet when it comes to Tom, so Bill is not even wrong.

I really like the negotiations on the both sides of Tom's door. I like that Tom's so shaken, poor thing, and that Bill can't get it across to him right away that he definitely won't hurt Bill anymore. Tom stumbling indicates that he was peering through the key hole, hee!

Their attraction is so hot, especially when Tom tries to resist it. "Bill knows what he wants now, and he is starving" -- *fans self*. I love how Tom's voice goes weak and faint when he's starting to lose the battle against Bill's charms. And his big-brother frown! I love Tom in this story. :) I love his lust and I love his tenderness and protectiveness, like when he touches Bill's hair and ears, passing him by. ♥ Did Tom ever think of Bill in a sexual manner before this? Or is seeing Bill naked and expecting him for the first time that day a shock that suddenly and inevitably springs up on him what he must do, and that he wants to do it very much? I don't actually know which would make his brain reel more!

I love that this fic is both sympathetic towards the characters and funny. For example, "a splurt of lotion jumps from the neck of the bottle as he clenches it." :D Perfect! And I bet Tom forgot about his worries for a while. *g*

I love the sex scene -- you write it excellently. Bill's "insides quaking with the way he's been teased," Tom panting harshly, and Bill moaning and being obsessed with Tom's cock. Absolutely as it should be! And I love that the next time Tom doesn't have any kind of complaints or excuses, hee. Is he affected by the mate bond in any way in this story? Does it hurt him not to do what Bill wishes him to do? (And not just because he wants it himself.) I love the image of Bill keeping his eyes slitted open so that Tom can't run away without him noticing. It's both funny and poignant (which is why I'm so happy that Tom complies at once the next time, so that Bill can relax!).

The scene with their mother is absolutely wonderful! I love that Bill is so care-free and only interested in the pleasure of having Tom close and maybe some food and a nap. *g* And I love that Simone is so accepting! Only apologising for not having prepared them for this. Hee. The sheer awkwardness of talking about a receptive partner with their mother is priceless!

The ending is so happy! I love this whole story! "Bill can't get enough, and Tom always has more." Just as it should be. :)

+the end. seriously, this is it.+

But what about...

Just kidding, just kidding! *g*

Author's Response: *completely overwhelmed by this comment* I'm glad it's more and better - yeah, it's about three times as long as the first fic that spawned this!

Oblivious Bill is oblivious, but he's trying to work it out. ;D He's just going with everything he's experiencing, and if that means he needs to strip...he's going with it!

Needy Bill is just so...there's so...he's SEXY, okay?? And of course Tom is his missing piece, always. ;D

Tom definitely had an idea of how to fix it. I like to think, Tom had a bit more experience, somehow he'd heard of it or figured it out, and definitely thought about doing things to Bill. :3 Of course, he never imagined there was any way it would be OKAY to do those things to Bill! Bill definitely overwhelms his senses and all common reason.

As for the very first time, though...Tom really did not quite know what he's doing, it's obvious! If he HAS had sex before (which I doubt), it was not with a virgin. :o He didn't really know how to approach Bill's ass with the reverence it deserved for the first time, and let his overwhelming need have him plunge onward when restraint was necessary.

Tom was going to ask something like, "why did you turn felinoid?" leading into an inquiry on why Bill's acting that way (and why Bill needed the secks) but didn't quite get there. Bill does not WANT any questioning. And he figures out how to get Bill right back into it!

Tom in felinoid form is SO instinctual, functioning completely based off what his senses are telling him about Bill. So of course he's going to be more gentle in some ways, even though he needs to do things like pin Bill into place (to prevent him from squirming). And the marking, oh yes! Sexytimes. There needs to be bite-marking in any kind of kitty fic.

And of course, this one's less of a PWP with the angst, and the question as to how far Tom will go in order to keep Bill from being "hurt" by him, because that's how he looks at it. Tom definitely freaked out, but of course, if Bill waved his naked ass at anyone else you'd see him spring into action, for SURE.

Bill works with what he's got to try and snag the Tom. :3 It so happens his ass and Tom's jeans are his biggest weapons? And "negotiations," hehe, that's a good way to put it. And you're absolutely right, Tom was pressed against the door and he stumbled back away from it. Really, the opening of the door was a foregone conclusion but Tom fought it for as long as he could. Big brother Tomi is protective and he's doing his best! I must say, he did think of Bill that way but never would have acted on it if not for Bill waving his naked ass at him. ;D And of course, the reality was far more immediate and overwhelming than any imagining.

I just...Tom is so comical to me; Tom having sex, especially before he gets all experienced and good at it, is the epitomy of hilarity. He'd be so coltish and awkward. And insatiable, which turns into hotness!

I am so glad you enjoyed it that much! :3 Yeeees, Tom is definitely becoming more and more affected by the way they're bonding together. And they're all sexy together, and just collapsing into satiated little heaps together, and all is well.

It's so fun to write Simone accepting, for whatever reason. Having this reason ready-made due to the way the universe is structured is just a real treat. And also an excuse for hilarity, with Simone talking about things that anguishes Tom to hear. :D

I love that you loved it so much! Thank you. I won't resist (much) if kitty fic tries to have its way with me in the future, but I am out of ideas for now. *bows*

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 04:34 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

OMG, a sequel? Yay! Kitty!Bill is back...

And kitty!Tom! I wish I could have got endless fics of kitty!Tom.

So hot, cute and funny. Poor Tom, he is having a long week ahead of him. Even I feel exhausted now and I was only reading :D.

Author's Response: Yes indeed, I perpetrated a sequel!

Kitty!Tom as well. :3 Couldn't resist. Thank you, I'm really happy you found it to be all of those things!

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 03:37 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

I went back and read the first one, then this. What better way to highlight the sexy animalistic side of sex than anthropomorphic Bill/Toms having hot, funky, instinctual animal sex! Way to go, loved both of them.

Author's Response: Good progression! I'm glad you enjoyed their hot instinctual sex. ♥ Thank you!

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 01:39 am Title: i didn't want to fuck you, baby, but you're pretty when you're mine

Loved it. (;

Author's Response: Great, thank you!