Date: 10/06/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
YEAHHHH you updated!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the slight delay, RL took over and I didn't have chance to post!
Date: 10/06/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww! I feel so sad for them, I hope she learns to accept them! But I like how protective Tom is over their twin bond, it's adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter! *hoping for an happy ending* :D
Author's Response: ♥ I liked writing protective!Tom and his grandpa ways, so I'm really pleased you enjoyed that ^_^
Date: 10/06/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
I kept putting off reading this every time it came back to the top of the list, simply because I prefer reading stories when they're complete and I don't have to wait for the rest. I finally caved and now I dunno whether I should be annoyed at the decision because I'm hooked and really REALLY want the next part or if I should just stick to be happy at finding a great read...
I have to say that I don't usually like het stories because the girls featured in them tend to really annoy me and the ease with which the boys fall for them seems unnatural. That's not the case at all with this story. It's written so perfectly that even the thought of a triangle relationship doesn't seem off putting or farfetched.
I can't wait for the next part! :D
Author's Response: If it helps at all, this fic is already finished so you won't have to wait longer than a couple of days before I post the rest? XD I'm really thrilled you gave it a chance and enjoyed it though, thank you so much!
Date: 10/06/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
That whole part where Bill tells Nina what he is and then gets her to not run away forever seems like it would be very hard to write. But you did it perfectly. The dialogue and her reaction were soooo realistic!
You really say just the right things to convey what a meaningful relationship Bill/Tom/Nina would have, like when Bill's thinking about waking up to see her in Tom's arms. It's intimate without being all about sex, and even though Nina's just entered their lives, it doesn't seem strange at all that Bill feels close to her. Another great thing is that I don't feel like this is a competition at all. I don't feel like I have to or want to choose between Nina or Tom. Great accomplishment, since I usually dislike OFC romantic interests.
I'm glad that you didn't make Nina come around even after a few days, but I hope they'll be able to find her agin if they return to Germany.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you - The whole reveal section did terrify me in writing it realistically, but I'm really thrilled you felt it all worked. I'm also so pleased you feel convinced of their connection. Thank you so much!
Date: 10/06/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww man, what happens now?
Author's Response: >.> *looks shifty*
Date: 10/03/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omg, the scene where Tom is in bed, hinting in a so not subtle way was hilarious! And Bill telling Nina that Tom is a sex addict was pretty funny too! Aww the ending of the chapter made me sad for Bill, she didn’t take the news of what he is so well, but that’s normal I guess, more realistic than if she would have just accept it right away! I hope they can fix this! Can’t wait for more, once again, this fic is incredible and so well written, I love it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt it was realistic, and that you enjoyed the little things like Tom's behaviour. Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 10/03/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
You have no idea how much this story took me by surprise. I hate het stories in fact I despise het stories. I've only read two prior to this and couldn't stomach it.
Your story however... I don't know... I find myself liking it! You've written this wonderfully and it's almost like a median to slash and het stories in that it has the twins having a relationship but then there's a girl thrown in as well. I especially like how in one chapter you have the twins swear to each other that just because Nina is in the picture doesn't mean that the twins are going to love each other any less.
I am so very surprised that I like this and I've been loving this story so far! You've done an awesome job with this. I favorited it :P
Author's Response: You made me squee with this, lol. Thank you so much - I hope you keep enjoying it!
Date: 10/02/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my, oh my, oh my! This no good, no good at all. I new it wasn't going to go well but this awful!!
Author's Response: It did all go rather pear-shaped :(
Date: 10/02/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
gah!!! no! i hope bill and or tom figures out a way to 'fix' the situation, or Nina comes to her senses and realizes how fucking lucky she could be. not that freaking out was a weird thing to do. i'm sure i just wouldn't believe him for the LONGEST time possible, lol.
I really do hope you can update soon, this is my favourite story right now.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much - and I'm glad the freaking out seemed 'normal' to you; I thought it was the only appropriate reaction in the situation!
Date: 10/02/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well that didn't work out so well can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Not really :( Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/02/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/02/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh no! Well, I guess I might have done the same, but still!
Wonder if Bill will hurry after her...wonder what she'd do if he beat her home.
Gah, what a cliffhanger! I hope you update soon!
XD
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you felt like you might have done the same - getting the reaction to be believable is pretty difficult given the news. Thanks for keeping reading!
Date: 10/02/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
“I promise to laze around in your bed looking as incestuous as I can.” I don't think I can ever fully express my delight with this line and how Tom carries it out.
And I review because I adore this story, and enjoy re-reading it, and pointing out bits I especially enjoyed on this new go-round. :3 You don't need to reply if you're pressed for time; you already know I love it and I feel I've been adequately thanked for my comments!
Author's Response: That was very much a fun line to write - thank you Tayness ♥
Date: 10/02/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 3
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 09/30/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
I wanna know what happens next this story is awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/30/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 3
I am so surprised this story isn't getting a bajillion reviews. i absolutely love this story!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you - that means a lot!
Date: 09/29/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awww! Bill is so adorable, the way he came back from their date all in love...
I really like Nina, how she’s not crazy about Bill right at the beginning and I like the fact that she can say he’s an hypocrite when he is :P
The awkward scene when Nina came to their apartment was fun to read! Especially how Bill manage to make her believe he hadn’t slept with another girl! Hilarious! I was wondering how they were going to tell her about their relationship, so I can’t wait to read more about that!
Author's Response: As you can see, it all goes totally to plan >.> Thank you so much for keeping reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/29/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
"We'll" know when the time is right, eh? *snigger* ...Oh, Bill.
For a bit of that first scene it seemed as though Nina wouldn't have quite minded if Tom had come on their date! Very promising. ;)
This continues to be excellent, of course.
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you, Tay - but please don't feel obliged to review again, squeeful as it makes me that you like it so much XD
Date: 09/28/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just so you know I am totally obsessed with this story! I get so excited over the plot. Scifi plus a decent OFC is like gold. Good OFC's on this site are like 4 leaf clovers impossible to find and worth making a big deal about. I really enjoy the scifi element of incubi, how the relationship and balance between Bill and Tom works and I'm enjoying being their for the transition to add their third. I love that she's not in on it, that they have to woo her, that they come as a set but that they have to figure out how to get her in on it. I'm so in love!
Author's Response: This made me smile so much - thank you, I was really touched you came back again to say more and I truly hope it doesn't disappoint as the story unfolds!
Date: 09/28/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 2
ZOMG!
I've got to say, I adore Nina Dobrev, so I was stoked when I saw that you used her.
I'm curious as to how they're gonna go about getting her...taking her...keeping her? Lolz.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: LOL! Well she isn't meant to be Nina Dobrev, so I apologise in advance if that gets confusing - I picked the name Nina first then googled it and Nina Dobrev's image came up so I was like 'Oh! Perfect!' Hope you keep enjoying it!