Date: 11/11/11 11:27 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
That was-- I can't even-- You don't are! OMG BE MY BEST FRIEND!! .....Yep, I totally just sounded like a complete freak. Oh well! *shrugs nonchalantly* This was amazing, hot, sexy. Just... unff! Yep, that is all I have to say for now!
Author's Response: LOL OKAY! *exchanges friendship bracelets* Oh gee I am just overwhelmingly glad you enjoyed it. Super, super glad! Thanks so very much for reading and leaving this cute and fantastic review! :D :D :D ♥
Date: 11/11/11 10:36 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
This was fucking awesome. I enjoyed every portion of it. I think you did fantastic.
Author's Response: Ahahaha, fantastic! I'm glad you liked it. Cheers mate! ♥
Date: 10/19/10 06:18 am Title: Chase and Ansel
That was such a great, funny story. Such an enjoyable read. Your writing is really good, you seem to capture such small details when giving the readers "the visuals". Bill in spectacles, vest and what not....oh God.
As for Swedish references....it cracked me up so much, I bet all Swedes on this site had to chuckle a lot....in a good way, girl.
Great, great work!
Author's Response: I'm very, very happy you enjoyed it! Haha, I didn't mean to poke fun at the Swedes, I hope they don't mind my poor attempt at Swedish! ^--^ Thanks for reading, and for your very kind review!
Date: 09/27/10 07:29 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
This was really interesting and very well written! I had absolutely no clue where it was headed and I love the twist.
Author's Response: Eee, thank you~ ~^^ It was a bit random, I know. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/27/10 02:01 am Title: Chase and Ansel
That was SUCH a trip, I loved it.
Author's Response: Wow, really? *scratches invisible beard* Well, what else to say but thank you for reading!
Date: 09/26/10 11:33 am Title: Chase and Ansel
I thoroughly enjoyed your little one shot with Chase and Ansel. It was a little different than I expected and that was good. Danke.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you were able to enjoy it~ ^--^
Date: 09/25/10 04:31 am Title: Chase and Ansel
Hahaha! Love it! Love that they dressed up in suits to help them be in character. Love that Chase told everyone in the bar that “I have a cat named Pauli and he’s my best friend, I’m addicted to online poker, I have sex only once every six months and I’m filthy rich with nothing to spend it on but vacations and cat food" So funny! Also loved that Bill changed his mind about not having a boyfriend partway through.
Great funny, sexy story! :D
Author's Response: You did? That makes me incredibly happy! :D Bill and Tom, those crafty buggers. XD It was silly, but I'm super glad you liked it! ^-^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/25/10 03:32 am Title: Chase and Ansel
LOL! I was so not expecting that they were playing. Nice! I loved the banter in this, and the atmosphere. Entertaining and funny, and I would have loved more of the sex scene. :D
As for your A/N question, don't know if anyone answered you, but I think it does that to everyone. We don't even recommend you use the preview feature because of problems with it.
Author's Response: Eee, thank you. >///< Haha, I shy away from sex scenes whenever they're not completely necessary, I know, I'm the worst person in the world. ^^" Next time, I'll try~ I'm glad you were still able to enjoy it~~ so much so. T^T
Ah yes, Miss Fyerdancer has addressed it~ I don't really have -issues- so much as just the series glitch. I rely so heavily on the preview function, but I have yet to know if it causes harm to the site. If that's case, I'll stop using it immediately. T__T I have to hope it's not, though. T^T
Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're amazing. ^-^
Date: 09/24/10 08:13 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
Pure genius! Wow! I don't know what else to say. Wow! I love this!
Author's Response: Wow, that's so kind of you to say! *bows* It's not genius at all, rather silly actually! However, thank you for reading and liking it so! It makes me so happy~~ ^^
Date: 09/24/10 02:43 am Title: Chase and Ansel
LOL thank gawd Tom wasn't actually an old married cat man wasting away his days trying to up his internet poker scores.
Pauli^^ Yeah, the story did feel really weird near the middle, you had me believing that Bill was this scary forceful seducer -raper- and that Tom was a cute, albeit kinda slow money-machine, but I'm so glad that I decided to read to the end and I'm happy that they were playing around.
Your writing style is absolutely lovely by the way.
Author's Response: I'd give my left foot to hear Tom say he's an old, internet poker playing cat man. Actually. / I think Tom wanted it to feel like rape. .____." Just a little. XD Ahaha... oh my. Anyways, thank you for reading and thinking my writing style is lovely? :) Cheers! ^^
Date: 09/24/10 01:52 am Title: Chase and Ansel
I love it! xD Especially part: "Bill, it's Mum. She want to talk to you!" xD
I almost cried xD
Author's Response: Hahaha~ I'm really happy you liked it. ^^ ~ Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/23/10 06:52 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
I definitely wasn't expecting that! I knew with the word 'charade' in the title that something had to be up, but I was expecting more like 'Ansel' and 'Chase' we're boyfriends and that they were just pretending not to know eachother or something...I wasn't expecting actual Twincest! Those kinky twins...lol. Anyway, I thought this was a great one-shot idea, and it was incredibly well written!
Author's Response: Yay! I caught someone off guard? Yay again for twincest! :D I love my twins, and so does everyone else! Haha! of course I'll take any opportunity I can get to write about them in silly situations. xD I'm really happy you thought it was well done, as I found it terribly silly. ^^" Thanks for reading and reviewing~ ^^
Date: 09/23/10 06:23 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
The 'preview" function isn't working for eFiction (this site's interface) and we don't know how to fix it. Our recommendation is to not use preview. :/
This was such a sexy and fun one-shot! I called the roleplay pretty early on but that made it no less enjoyable. I liked the dynamic you had going between them in their assumed personas and them as themselves. The reveal was hilarious and yet I sympathized so much with poor Bill! Ah, the lengths to which they'll go to spice it up.
Better learn that fourth lesson, Chase.
Author's Response: That's too bad, about the faulty interface. Damn, it's just I live off the preview function - it works for me, and the series glitch is the only real problem I have with it. (Except for the natural oddities that comes with using THF on Google Chrome. ^^") I find final proofreading ten times easier seeing it on another surface, I hope if I continue to use it, it won't affect the board negatively in any way? *pouts*
Wouu~ I'm ecstatic you think so! >///< Haha, was it too obvious? XD I think it's okay that it was, I'm glad it could still be enjoyed even with my obvious hints. This was really strange for me to write, but it was different and enjoyable in that sense. To read others found it amusing, too, (as diluted as my writing humour is) is really awesome! n__n Let's all hope Chase takes his teacher-friend's lessons to heart. Silly man~ Thank you -so- much for reading! ^^
Date: 09/23/10 06:00 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
*giggles* This was too much fun to read, honey, and hot to boot! Loved how frazzled Tom was when he realized 'Ansel' had been planning teaching him new things and then when he answered the phone like that and it was their mom. LOL, brilliant! Oh, and I needed a good laugh, so thanks for that!
Author's Response: I'm ecstatic you thought it was humourous! ^^" Oh gosh~ It's good to know. It was really a shot in the dark, my humour is a little diluted when I'm writing, and I find silly, pointless things hillarious. XD Thanks for reading, as always, you make my day! ^^ <3
Date: 09/23/10 05:41 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
it was adorable! very quirky and funny and undeniably hot. your writing is really good and i think you're being way too hard on yourself - the sexy stuff was great. i would love to read more!
Author's Response: ^^ Thank you~ I appreciate your praise, and I'm wholeheartedly glad you enjoyed it! Haha, it seems this is the end for this story, but maybe... we'll have to see what the future holds. ^-^ Thanks for reading! <3
Date: 09/23/10 05:32 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
Haha! It was awesome! :D I was convinced that it was a Twincest Non-Related XD
Author's Response: That was the intention! XD I'm glad you thought it was good! :D Thanks for reading~ ^--^
Date: 09/23/10 03:46 pm Title: Chase and Ansel
Tom's been watching Bridget Jones' Diary hasn't he?
"Bridget Jones, Wanton Sex Goddess with a very bad man between her thighs! ... MUM! HI!"
Author's Response: Is that a good or bad thing? (*Hasn't seen the movie*) I'm gunna have to now though. The one with that scrunchy-faced Zellweger isn't it? (I was only 10 when it came out, I believe. XD) I've likely seen clips. XD Okay well... thank you for reading? ^^"