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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/25 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/23 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: Angeleyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/17 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Cute and amazing story with a bad ending for both. I was crying when Bill really left and Tom was so heartbroken. I read the next part directly and was happy, that they both find together in the end.
Thank you for the stories.

Author's Response: You're quite welcome. :)

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/17 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I had my suspicions about Bill the second Tom switched off the news report >.> I'm not sure what to think

Author's Response: At least Bill didn't kill anyone. This time.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/17 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1

No idea how I hadn't seen this before. Loved it!

Author's Response: It was being sneaky! Hiding all the way back in 2010 and all. Sneaky fic!

Annnnnd, thank you!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/16 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh and yes it will be added to my favourites because it's brilliant, but ugh the pain.

Author's Response: *loves*

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/16 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so upset with you right now. You have no fucking idea. Is this your idea of happy stories for me? Huh?! YOU BROKE MY HEART! I'm sad and crying! Ughhhh. I mean yeah it was absolutely brilliant but I am never trusting you again! NEVER!

*goes to sob in corner*

My heart is broken.

Author's Response: I promise on a stack of twins that you'll feel better after you read part two. Promise promise.

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/15 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my God, wow! This was so so good! Wow your writing is just brilliant- i smiled at so many lines. As soon as i heard the mention of the bank robbery i just knew haha and i like that twist rather than the standard helpless runawqy homeless kid storyline thing. Not that i hate that stuff, because i dont, but i mean variation is good. And i am SO excited that there is a sequel for this even if i know Bill's a baddie now haha. Also loved Tom's characterisation here (and his mum's). Wooo on to the sequel! :D

Author's Response: 'Stranded bank robber' doesn't seem to get done quite as often as 'runaway', does it? ;)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/14 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

AMAZING!

Author's Response: Thank you again. :)

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/14 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

cute story

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/13 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1

gosh Idk what to say! it was simply perfect and beautiful <3



Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: affinity Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

All I've been doing the past 24 hours is reading your fics and favoriting them. Because they're great. I love that this wasn't the typical homeless boy from a broken home thing for Bill. And Tom is so sweet and lovely omg I want to keep him in my pocket forever. I did guess when the news report came on that Bill was the bank robber, and was positively thrilled to see I was right. Great touch at the end with Bill sending the postcard back.



Author's Response: I must say I approve of the way you spend your time. ;)

Nope, no typical tragic Bill here, just a kid that ended up doing something bad that could have ended up worse, but rather well worked out in the end. :) And, postcards are good when you're on the lamb. There's no return address, so the worst you have to worry about is an area code, and if you're only passing through, that doesn't really tell anyone much.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1

AWWWWW! Hehe. That was a delicious mystery. Yay for badass Bill.

And I for one like the name Lysander ;P

Author's Response: Bill should get to be a badass more often. :)

I actually have a friend whose son is named Demetrius. :D

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I miss Lysander. I'm not so wonderfully eloquent like Mr. Leichenwasser (omg my phone totally autocompleted that!!!) or loquacious at 1.26am lol. But as always, I love your stories. Short or long, epic or cookie, happy or tragic - I love them all and I adore you &heart;

Author's Response: Long or short, happy or tragic, reviews are always nice. :D

Reviewer: Leichenwasser Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Man. MAN.

This was awesome. The characters were simple and neat, and they had a great, easy-going chemistry. The romance was great, too, right up my alley with the lack of mushiness.

Loved that Bill robbed a bank. WHAT A BAD ASS MF. LOVE HIM. Better than a sob story IMHO. And hee, Lysander. What a dork, Tomnus. <3

I want an entire book of just this. :D GUESS I'LL JUST SUCK IT UP AND REREAD THIS FOR A YEAR.



Author's Response: It's practically like they were meant to be in some manner.

Bill is totally hardcore! Robbing banks and taking names and...getting showers and stuff. ;)

Reviewer: TomtwincestBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/11 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

NOT FAIR IT'S JUST ONLY ONE CHAPTER! T___T

Author's Response: http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=17859 ;)

Reviewer: Twelve Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

My heart is melting, despite the snow covering the ground outside. XD

Author's Response: *loves*

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Once again, you're amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you. :D

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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