Date: 02/10/11 10:41 pm Title: A field & Hospital
Aww, such a horrid situation! I feel so sorry for everyone, especially Tom. *hugs Tom* But, this is an amazing story! I hope you keep it going. :D
Author's Response: It really is. Maybe it doesn't seem like it, but Tom has been through a lot, which you'll probably find out in the next chapter (: Thank you, I'm glad you like it !
Date: 01/24/11 08:50 am Title: A field & Hospital
aww, poor tom and just poor all of them! :( but i love it! (:
Author's Response: Yeah! haha. Thanks (:
Date: 01/23/11 10:26 pm Title: A field & Hospital
um....can u update on mibba as well...just asking
Author's Response: I didn't had the time last night so yeah, I will right now (:
Date: 01/23/11 08:26 pm Title: A field & Hospital
Awe, I really love the whole scene with Brandon and Jacob. It's nice for Brandon to be able to see his twin. It sucks that he's in a coma but nice for him to be able to see his twin.
Hopefully he gets better soon.
(I meant what I said...I really see a difference here, hun. Your writing is getting better =] Great work! I loved this chapter!)
Author's Response: Yes, that's how I pictured it! And having Brandon in a coma will make a lot of people realize things and all so in a way, it's not THAT bad.. of course it's sad and all but, you know what I mean :p
I'm glad that someone noticed that my writing is getting better (: I'm trying really hard (: Thank you again (:
Date: 01/23/11 08:09 pm Title: A field & Hospital
asdfghjkl; I liked it. (: Awhh, poor Tomi ! This chapter shows that under his asshole facade, he's a a total sweetheart. :D gR3@t cH@pt3r, bbqurl. (: Lol.
Author's Response: Yep, I think he's starting to change (: hehehe. !M ql@d yuu0 liK3d ittt ~*~ lol
Date: 12/31/10 03:23 pm Title: Phone call.
THIS. This is THE best story i've ever read. I REALLY want to read the next chapter cause i'm dying to know what happens. I really like how you threw the drama in there and i almost cried for Brandon. I could really feel the emotion. When Brandon explained how he missed his brother, i felt sadness sweep over me. And when that Danny kid gave him those drugs, and he said he felt dizzy, i could feel the world spinning around me. You are a GREAT writer, maybe even the best i've seen :D
Author's Response: Oh my god, this means so much to me right now! I've never really had a reviewer that liked it so much! I'm glad you do, though! I really appreciate it that you think I'm a great writer! I'm not really good with explaining emotions and all but you telling me that you felt it, I think that I did a good job ^.^ I'll still try to bring it more, which is my goal (:
Date: 12/10/10 07:07 am Title: Phone call.
omg!
Author's Response: good thing or bad thing..?
Date: 12/10/10 01:02 am Title: Phone call.
Damn, I'm glad that realization hit Tom in the face ! Hopefully Brandon will be okay and Tom's not so much a of dick anymore ! Nice capter ! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with you ;D hehe. Thank youuu (:
Date: 12/06/10 08:59 am Title: Old friends
I hope you'll be able to update soon. :)
Author's Response: I'm planning to write a chapter tonight so we'll see how that goes (:
Date: 11/30/10 09:45 am Title: Old friends
aww poor brandon :( aw, it really sucks to get your laptop taken, i tried that before :D but i will look forward to next chapter, sooooooo exited!! :D
Author's Response: Yeah poor him :/. It does sucks, but i'm on my ipod right now! Hehe, i'll try to write the next chapter soon :)
Date: 11/30/10 06:03 am Title: Old friends
How could Danny do such things to him? He was the best friend of his brother...such a jerk....hate him!
Author's Response: He's really a jerk, I know!!
Date: 11/13/10 03:10 pm Title: Accident & running away.
please please write faster
Author's Response: I'm trying to update soon!
Date: 11/08/10 03:47 pm Title: Accident & running away.
Noooo. Omg. I can't believe he's running away. :/ I hope things turn out okayy and Tom grows the fuck up !
Anyway, I love it so far. (:
Author's Response: Yeahh :/ I agree, Tom needs to grow up XD && Thanks (:
Date: 11/08/10 01:53 pm Title: Accident & running away.
dlksdhfg D:
Author's Response: asdfghjkl; !!!
Date: 11/08/10 01:32 am Title: Accident & running away.
Why so sad??? Eveyrthing i read or choose ot read is sad or depressingly good.. :
Author's Response: Awh this is just the way it is :p
Date: 11/06/10 09:59 pm Title: Accident & running away.
OMG i loved this, please update soon. This is a great story i get where you are coming from with the whole not wanting it to turn out like shit thing. Good like with that guy ;). UPDATE!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you love it (: Yeah, so that's why I'M kinda taking it slow with the updates, i don't wanna rush and have it turn into shit, you know?! (: Thanks again ^^
Date: 11/06/10 07:51 pm Title: Accident & running away.
Love it! :D please upload soon again :D
Author's Response: Thank you(: and I'll try !
Date: 11/06/10 01:05 pm Title: Accident & running away.
*Gasp* OMG
Author's Response: Is this in a good way? XD
Date: 11/06/10 12:16 pm Title: Accident & running away.
Tom is so fucking stupid! How can he not see that Brandon need him? If feel so bad for Brandon, and if I were him I would run away too!
Great chapter! Ireally love this story, please update soon I just cant wait too see Toms reaction! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom is pretty stupid! I would too! I'm glad you liked it and I'll try to update soon ^^
Date: 11/02/10 06:33 am Title: Memories
Hey don't forget we are still waiting here...:'((
Author's Response: Yes i know. I am so sorry! I'm trying to write a chapter it's just that I want it to be right!! I'll try my hardest to update tonight!