Date: 09/24/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was so perfect, thank you thank you thank you so much. *hugs herself*
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♥
Date: 09/24/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY FUCKING GOD
I don't
I mean
omg
I swear, I barely even read fics anymore, and smut always seems so...flat to me, but this
omg ._.
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oh my god
Date: 09/24/10 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
The idea of Bill as an incubus was so unique and fits him perfectly! You did a really great job of writing the "dream" sex without making Bill seem sleazy. And of course the sex itself was amazing. The ending was sweet and wonderful, and even though you drew it all together very well and nothing more really needs to be said, I loved it so much that I'm sad it wasn't a long drawn out chaptered fic. Thanks.
Date: 09/24/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I've got butterflies >.< So sweet and sexy. I love how you've written this. The ending was the portal to a hot beginning that I wish I could be privy to >.> To be continued in my dreams lol
Date: 09/24/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is the sweetest, loveliest story I've read in a while.
I've been trying to read it as slowly as possible to savour the feeling. It touched my cynical heart. :')
Date: 09/24/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
im sad to see this story be over...it was so good
Date: 09/22/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
dayum that was awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥ Always good to hear it!
Date: 09/22/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooo...very nice. I love this.
Author's Response: Hee, thank you. Glad to hear it! ♥
Date: 09/22/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so amazing I don't really know what else to say. I love how Bill is falling for Tom and that Tom shamelessly gives himself to Bill the way he does. The fact that there is a bottom Tom genre makes me giggle. Why not a Bill bottom? lol. I so can't wait for the next chapter. Love you for writing this :)
Author's Response: Hee, thank you so much. I giggled at the bottom Tom genre, too! I suppose most fics feature bottom Bill, so no one has to be warned for it. :P Next chapter coming up tomorrow, and love you for reading, too. ;D
Date: 09/22/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
*flails*
This is amazing so far! ♥
Author's Response: Eee, thank you so much! ♥ More coming tomorrow!
Date: 09/22/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want more!!!!!!!!
:P
Author's Response: More is coming up tomorrow! :P Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/22/10 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it!!!!!
Author's Response: Eee, thank you, I'm glad!
Date: 09/22/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, I love this! And given how into it Tom is, I wouldn't worry about the dubcon content.
I really like the way you're portraying Tom's struggle with his sexuality, especially in the context of high school, and the aggressive posturing of teenage boys.
Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was so nervous about the sex scenes, because Tom is totally into it but he is asleep, lol, so. It's a relief to hear that it didn't come off as creepy or anything. ♥
And thank you. Tom's struggle is a very personal issue for me, indirectly, because I have friends who've experienced that kind of social pressure and really had a hard time with it. It's good to know I did a decent job with it, so thank you again. Next part will be posted tomorrow!
Date: 09/22/10 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God.... This is.... I can't even.... Xgbnkhlvtrqzxw *________________*
Author's Response: Hee! Sounds like a positive thing. Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reading! ;D
Date: 09/22/10 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I have no words o: (that's positive) *tracking*
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Hope you enjoy the second part, too. I'll be posting tomorrow! :D
Date: 09/22/10 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is brilliant! The characters are sweet and interesting, the plot is awesome and it's all very well written!
I really this fic and I can't wait for the second part!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is very much outside my normal genre and twin dynamic, so it means even more to hear that everything worked out. I'll be posting the second part tomorrow, and I hope you enjoy that, too! ♥
Date: 09/22/10 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, this is so interesting. I just love the idea of incubus and succubus and I can't wait to see the second part of this. You're doing a fantastic job with it, which isn't much of a surprise because you manage to do that with pretty much every story you write. I'm tempted to give you a prompt myself to see how you do with it. ^-^ Of course, only if you're ever bored and need something to write about. XD
Your writing is very fluid and I love that. It's not like reading a story, it's like reading something...else. I don't know. XD But it's really, really great. :3
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always been fond of the incubus/succubus idea myself, so it was a lot of fun translating that into a piece of Bill and Tom fanfic. ;) I wouldn't mind at all if you tossed me a prompt; your pieces are always so original and awesome that I bet I'd enjoy writing an idea of yours. Of course, with my backlog of fics I'm supposed to be writing, it'd be finished in like ten years, but still!
Again, thank you. ♥ Good to hear it!
Date: 09/22/10 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
*wipes brow*
DAMN.
Can I has more???
Author's Response: That sounds like a positive reaction; thank you! ;D More coming up tomorrow!