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Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 07:24 am Title: Chapter 2

Awwwww. Very well written-- extremely sexy but still with plenty of plot and Awwwwww moments. I love how you use words, and your descriptions and the way you've painted your characters so vividly. You've a very talented writer, I'm a big fan of several of your stories and I think you've done it again. This was a pleasure to read.. Everything flowed and I felt sucked in to the story and it's everything I hoped it would be when I read the prompt (and more). :) Thank you for the happy ending! I loved this! :)

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

BEST THING EVER

Reviewer: THforalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

You should really make a sequel for this, or no, not sequel but a whole fiction to tell us like how they relationship will go and what Tom will do when he finds out what Bill did to him :) It would be amazing :)

Reviewer: sheerac50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

You had me worried in the beginning that Bill would give up on Tom. So happy he didn't :) This story had the same magic as Love for sale and I absolutely loved it!!! *blows kisses*

Reviewer: roniekins Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2

Jesus, that was sexy. *Fans self* As always, you're writing is just on another another level.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

aaaaaaaaaaaw! sexy and sweet and top!bill is...not bad at all! it takes a certain type of tom, this type of tom, to make it work but wow, it worked. mm loved that last bit, the "kiss" and ill remember/i remember......so dreamyyyy :)))) cute ending, wonderful two-shot

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was way too good.

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 2

The last sentence made so giddy, that was just beautiful! I love how it's so literal, he really DID find the man of his dreams.

Thanks for this fic *_*

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 2

ZOMG, I can't even express how awesome this story is. And WOW, I love Georg to bits!

LOVED this!

XD

Reviewer: flossa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 10:13 am Title: Chapter 2

iquehiuahihseiogsr AMAZING. So detailed and gorgeous... I love shy and timid Tom slowly but surely being unraveled by Bill's seductive prowess, only to find himself in love. Bill was amazing... and so was Princess! I genuinely felt for Bill when he realised he was hurting Tom and then decided to leave him alone.

BRAVO! Part of me kind of wants to see how Tom reacts to being told but it's just perfect as is

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 05:56 am Title: Chapter 2

I loved this!

Reviewer: kramllew Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 2

*_* x10000 This was just so amazing!

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 04:45 am Title: Chapter 2

*falls on the floor* *is melted goo* Ah. *is insane* THANK YOU! O_O

Reviewer: cj89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 04:10 am Title: Chapter 2

What a wonderful writer you are. I love how you express every thought.

Reviewer: Misery Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 02:19 am Title: Chapter 2

*whines* This feels like it could've gone on forever and I so wanted it too.. The emotion, the feeling, just.. all of it. So real. LOVED it. Faving it.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 2

That was a delightful story! Thank you!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 2

Awwwww! Yeah! that was the perfect ending! This fic was absolutely beautiful! I enjoyed it so much and I'm sad it's finished, I had so much fun reading it! Thank you so much for sharing this sweet story with us :)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aw...is there gonna be a sequel?

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

AWWW! beyond sweet and hawwwt :) love it!

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Must be nice, the man of your dreams being an incubus. At least the sex will always be fantastic. Lucky brat. I wish my dream man was an incubus... but then again, there is such a thing as too much of a good thing, but in Tom's case, I don't think that will be a problem! Epic win for a fic, this is in the favorites folder!

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