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Reviewer: Eldog333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/23 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

I’m actually melting into the floor ahhhhh this was so good

Reviewer: Eldog333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/23 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

I’m actually melting into the floor ahhhhh this was so good

Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/23 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

So as I've mentioned on other reviews, I came into the TH and THF game late - the vast majority of stories I've read are over a decade old and I'm sure the authors have moved way on, and probably wont even see new reviews, BUT, why not shoot one over anyway.... It's been AGES so of course there wont be a sequel although it would be just as amazing as this one =) This was actually really cute in a way I don't even know how to describe (what with the lack of consent and lies etc) haha.... but I mean whatever it's a story. I just found Bill to be endearing for what it was worth. I hope their future is a happily ever after the credits rolled.

Reviewer: kiza Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/19 09:14 am Title: Chapter 2

Hermosa historia

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/18 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

this was a good story!
you should do a sequel to this!

Reviewer: Bizackiuke Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/15 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

Erm... Hey, I thought you should know that I wrote a semi-sequel to this (found HERE: http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=23859) and thought you might prefer seeing it and giving your honest opinion. Sorry if I took too many liberties! I just... wrote it out for my own frame of mind because I had so many questions that needed answering. I posted it mostly because I didn't feel comfortable with it snarling at me on my desktop. In retrospect, it might not have been a good idea. *hunches shoulders guilt-ally* sorry. I did credit you though.

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/14 10:43 am Title: Chapter 2

Sequal? Please

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/14 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

I just reread it again and loved it just as much. Wonderful story!

Reviewer: empathee101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/14 07:37 am Title: Chapter 2

Ahhhh best last line ever! Another truly perfect story, I love these characters, they're so well detailed. I felt like I was there the whole time. Thank you for the beautiful read.

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/13 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooh i loved this! Absolutely amazing story! Can't say anything else, just awesome, so awesome! Loved every word of this!! :)

Reviewer: Susanveg Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/13 03:36 am Title: Chapter 2

It was one of the best stories I've ever read in my life. Amazing!

Reviewer: baffrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 11:52 am Title: Chapter 2

Love this, oh my god. xx

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/13 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

Love it! Love it! Love it!

It's just romantic, so touching, so loving and so hot! Perfect!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 01:16 am Title: Chapter 2

this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this!

Reviewer: Kim Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/12 12:55 am Title: Chapter 2

NO. JUST NO. I stayed up all night reading this and they fiiinally meet and as I'm on my cell I didn't notice it coming to an end and I was just like, someone has to be f*cking kidding me... Not only did I expect some action between them, but I also hoped that poor Tom would finally learn the truth. Aaahhh, damn it!

Great job though and a sequel wouldn't be bad at all! xD

Reviewer: Nessie-san Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 12:15 am Title: Chapter 2

Very well done. I had to stop in the middle of this chapter, to think back on what I was reading, I liked it so much XD I suddenly went "Wait a minute... I'm reading something about a centuries-old incubus lusting after a high school senior, fucking him a ton, making him SORE he fucks him so much, and I'm LAUGHING at it" XD This whole thing was really good, and I love Bill and Tom's relationship (or lack of) in it. It was very well done, and I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff ^-^

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/12 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm sorry, I have to comment again. This is the perfect fic. Period.

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 2

Those must be some pretty amazing dreams if hes dreaming of Bill -nods head-

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 03:07 am Title: Chapter 2

Aw I'm glad that they're together now :')

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this story is so perfect!

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