Date: 12/01/10 11:48 am Title: 10:04am.
that..made me cry for a whole five minutes and i dont know why
Date: 11/02/10 02:31 pm Title: 10:04am.
omg...........poooooooooor billi
It was cooool btw
Date: 09/24/10 08:56 am Title: 10:04am.
Wow, different thank any other story i have ever read, I wish it had a happy ending but, then again this ending was powerful! good job :) I will read your other stories if you have more! :)
Author's Response: Thankyou dear. <3
Date: 09/23/10 09:09 pm Title: 10:04am.
Oh my god... This is the most saddest story I have ever read.. I'm like literally crying now .. Aww it's soo sad you're very good at writting.
Author's Response: Awww. <3 I didn't know the response was going to be like this! XD Thankyou very much!
Date: 09/21/10 09:34 pm Title: 10:04am.
Holy smurf in a bucket O.O
I hate the fact that I like this (how it is written that is)>.>
Author's Response: Haha :D
Date: 09/21/10 01:57 pm Title: 10:04am.
Ooh, wow, this was so amazing. I really liked it. Short and simple and sweet, but still horrible and murderous. Eek. You catered to my guilty pleasure of having the twins (or just one) be murdered by the other. Kudos. 8D
Author's Response: Ahahaha, thankyou! XD
Date: 09/21/10 01:23 pm Title: 10:04am.
FAWK! WHY DID I READ THIS! T_T DAMN YOU BANNER THAT GOT ME CURIOUS! T_T. though i must say that is an awesome banner =B
ugh Character deaths -_-. though Tom *shakes head* and Bill...what can i say...
mostly speechless. good job >_>,
Author's Response: Hahaha, aww. Well, I'm glad you liked it... I think? XD
Date: 09/21/10 01:03 pm Title: 10:04am.
Wow.
I think a little bit more of a background information, perhaps about Tom's being a bit of a psycho who just randomly stabs people, would have been nice. You know, just to get some more insight behind the situation.
I feel bad for poor Bill and all the bloodthirsty bullies in his school, :(
Overall, nice writing!! The first person p.o.v. definately made it very intense and enjoyable. :)
Author's Response: Thankyou! Yeah - maybe I could follow this up with another chapter, with it being Tom's P.O.V? Maybe. It's a possibility. XD But the mystery of why he's such a psycho creep was really originally just left for the reader to make up. :) But thankyou again!
Date: 09/21/10 12:58 pm Title: 10:04am.
I cry... God, that was so beautiful.
Author's Response: Aww, thankyou so much. <3