Date: 07/02/11 12:17 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
Tom goes after Bill. Andy Sixx&Kenneth Nixon
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote :)
Date: 07/02/11 12:02 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
Framing Hanley - Alone in this bed. hehe, amazing song.
ANYPOODLE. When I saw that there was another update for this I was just so happy. I looooved this :) And I still want that puppy. Just. So cute. ANYPOODLE. I think that if you're bringing in a new character it should be either Andy or Kenneth, coz I love them both so much :3
Author's Response: It is indeed a very beautiful song, one of my favourites. I'm so happy you were happy, and I'm so glad you loved it, that means a lot. I really want to bring the puppy in somewhere along the line, because I just adore them tehe. And I especially love both of them also so I really want to include them somewhere also. Thank you so much for your vote and review :)
Date: 07/01/11 03:44 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
so glad you finally updated this! i love this story a lot, so it makes me very happy^^ but for the next chapter, i would like a mix of 2, 3, 5 and 8! that would've been really nice^^
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love it, that means so much to me ^-^ And the fact it makes you happy makes me very happy also. Thank you so much for your review and votes :)
Date: 07/01/11 12:51 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
Oooh, I'm so happy that you're back. :) I've been desiring new chapters to this ever since I read the previous ones.
But yeah, I like options 1, 3 and 5 the most so I hope that even one of them will be on the next chap. :)
Continue soon!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to be back, and I'm so happy you're glad to have me back tehe. Thank you so much for your reviews and votes :)
Date: 07/01/11 12:34 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
1, 5, and a puppy. :D :D :D
I loved thiiiis, ofcourse, it was amazing and cute and just... gaah you're such a good writer ^^
Author's Response: Wow, that compliment just gave me a massive smile, that means so much to me. Thank you so much for your amazing review and your votes :)
Date: 07/01/11 11:36 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
I think in the next chapter there should be more development of their relationship and that bill goes to toms room plus some bed cuddling in bed. So far this story is coming along great, I really liked this chapter and the way Tom showed some emotion with bill. But I would also loll to know what Andreas said:) keep up the awesomeness
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughts and vote, I will definitely try and include that in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your review also :)
Date: 07/01/11 11:24 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
OMG i love this story its AMAZING !! and i always look forward to the next chapter being posted. Cant wait for the next 1:)
Can the next story have....
Number:
1. bill goes into toms bedroom
3. Some more development building to their relationship
4. more opening up to each other
5 cuddling up in bed
8. some more feelings being exchanged between the two
Author's Response: You really think so? Wow that made me smile, I'm so happy you think so ^-^ And I will definitely try my hardest to include them all, if not I'll include them in the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much for your votes and your amazing review :)
Date: 07/01/11 10:56 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
1,3,5,6 thanks for the update I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved it, thank you so much for your review and vote :)
Date: 07/01/11 10:21 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
1,3,4,5,8!
In an hour and a half?! You are awesome! I love it! It's filled with so much meaning!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think it's filled with so much meaning, it makes me feel all happy tehe. Thank you so much for your review and vote :)
Date: 07/01/11 09:49 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
Aww broken Tom makes me sad =( i would like to see 1 & 3-8 =D
Author's Response: Broken Tom makes me sad too :( I hope they mend each other soon tehe. Thank you so much for your vote and review :)
Date: 07/01/11 09:32 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
I would say 1 and 3 after what just happened i think thats where they are so Yeah :) love the chapter and i dont Ever Want tom to hit Bill again
Author's Response: I don't enjoy making Tom hit Bill but sometimes it might be necessary, hopefully there won't be much though :) Just depends what type of spin my muse is taking tehe. I'm so happy you loved the chapter and thank you so much for your review and vote :)
Date: 07/01/11 09:11 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
I think...more opening up to each other. I'm so happy you updated!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and vote :)
Date: 07/01/11 08:27 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
i want option number 5 xD aww i love cuddling twins... thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Absolutely no problem, thank you for your review and vote :)
Date: 07/01/11 06:28 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
i think we need a kiss in the next xhapter doesnt have to be anything big, but something you know
Author's Response: I indeed did add a kiss in the next chapter, unfortunately Bill was to demented about the whole fact he indeed has feelings for a gang leader and pulled away :( Hopefully he learns not too. Thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 07/01/11 01:01 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
Yay! An update =) I'm glad Bill stood his ground & refused to strip for those goones. I love that Tom broke there at the end & would love to see Bill try & fix him. I think it would be fitting if Bill were to continue his comforting by going to Tom's room.
Author's Response: I'm really looking forward to progressing the relationship so that they can both help each other, they both still have no idea that they went through the same things so hopefully they break down soon, which I'm planning on tehe. And indeed he did go to Tom's room as you may have noticed in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 07/01/11 12:34 am Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
Aww, Tom was all protective!!That so sweet! I love thst he beat the crap out of Georg for talking sbout Bill like that, even though thats how he knows everything thinks about him, and how he himself thinks about Bill half the time.
I think I would like to see Bill go to Tom's room, Some Cuddling, and a Brief scene to explain what the letter says.
I'm really glad to see you back. I hopw whatever kept you away is resolved, or if it was school that finals went well. Keep up the great work. I am looking forward to seeing moer soon!...and sorry this isn't up to my normals lengths today, I've been up since like 4.30 this morning, but damn me, I'm addicted to this site, can't seem to get to bed without checking my tracked stories and reading any updates. *hugs* goodnight...*dozes off hugging*
Author's Response: I love protective Tom and honestly that beating was really coming Georg's way, so I'm also very happy my muse decided to allow that to happen tehe. And as I'm writing this response after I've wrote chapter thirteen you might have noticed both your votes have been included. And absolutely no problem, your reviews are absolutely amazing honestly. They really inspire me, especially because of your kind words. I always get excited when you review tehe. *Hugs back* Thank you so much for your amazing review :)
Date: 06/30/11 11:16 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
1, 3, 4, 5, 8 please! 8)
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote and review :)
Date: 06/30/11 10:53 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Waooo...finally!!! Thanks for update and i vote 4 and 5
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and vote :)
Date: 06/30/11 09:26 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
i am thankful your back ^_^ i've miss this story being update. i think it would be good if Bill stay in his room then half way through the night go into tom's room. and careful cuddle up to him.
Author's Response: That's an absolutely good contrast of the ideas, it'd be quite cute to write actually so I'll definetly include it in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your idea and your review (: x
Date: 04/19/11 06:53 pm Title: Ten: Somebody Knew.
2.!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your choice and review (: x