Date: 10/26/11 11:42 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
Whatazaazaaah!
No, Biiill, don't leave!! :o
Awesome update Blondey! Keep it up! :D
Author's Response: I was so upset to let Bill leave but it'll help move the story along hopefully :D Thank you so much that means a lot x
Date: 10/26/11 11:30 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
Well I must say the wait was worth it. I like it =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you thought it was worth it and that you like it, thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 10/26/11 11:25 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
Glad you updated! n_n
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Date: 10/26/11 10:43 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH Wow I love it, I'm so happy for you and this chapter:B
Author's Response: Awh thank you so much that means a lot. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 10/26/11 09:52 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
I'm so happy for this update! I didn't expect Andi's letter at all. That was a crazy twist lol. I'm hoping absence makes the heart grow fonder, even for that short time that Bill's away from Tom. This was great & I can hardly wait til u update again =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're happy, and I have some ideas up my sleeve when it comes to progressing Bill and Tom's relationship, unfortunately there is going to be some dramatic/violence involved again, I'm worried how that is going to go down though. I'm going to updated as soon as possible now, thank you so much for your amazing review :)
Date: 10/26/11 09:33 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
Thank you for finally updating!!! It;s been ages!
I love your writing, but can you please stick to the default font style, cuz the font you've chosen discourages my reading.
I hope that Bill and Tom resolve everything. And I always knew Andi wasn't good for Bill.
Author's Response: It's my absolute honour to update for reviewers like you, especially because you all put your time into reviewing which means a lot to me :)rnrnAnd I will definitely stick to the default font style, I am so sorry that it had discouraged your writing, I've changed the previous chapter back and from now on will keep it that way.rnrnAnd he really isn't :( I hope Bill realizes that in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your review :D
Date: 10/26/11 09:09 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
OMFG ldrueihgdkru you updated!! *does a dance* this is truly amazing and i feel for both Tom and Bill *wipes tears* your writing skills are what i wish i had!lol seriously! keep up the good work and i always look foward to reading whatever you post!
Author's Response: Wow I'm so happy that you were so excited *Dances with you* You think it's amazing? That is such a lovely comment, thank you. Lol honestly? I don't think my writing skills are all that great, there is other writers out there that are incredible which I wish I was like, practice makes perfect though so just keep giving it a shot :D And thank you so much for your review it means a lot :)
Date: 10/26/11 08:49 am Title: Thirteen: Because I'm Fragile
why leave if he loves him ?
Author's Response: There is complications to Bill in some ways, he stills loves Andreas and he's really confused about his feelings towards Tom, as you can see he can't finish the sentence. But he'll slowly begin to realize his feelings. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 10/10/11 12:33 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
Oh my GOD I absolutely love this story
Author's Response: I am so happy you love it, thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 09/05/11 08:59 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
I'd like for their relationship to grow even closer at a faster pace. It seems like Bill is starting to accept Tom for who he is and it'd be nice if Tom does the same and open up to Bill and let him in. And if you want to bring someone in, maybe Kenneth or Andy? whats their role going to be? I hope whoever it is doesn't interfere with Bill and Tom's relationship in a negative sense :/
Author's Response: I'm going to begin to work on their relationship moving along a lot faster, because Bill is still in denial about his feelings but he'll slowly accept. And I took a long thought about it and I don't think I'll be introducing another character for quite some time yet. Thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 08/21/11 01:08 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
hi!
I just started reading your story today, but I totally love it! I think you're a really talented writer.
I would like to see that Tom goes after Bill and some more drama, I also like emotional scenes and if you want to bring a new character into this story I would like to see Kenneth Nixon.
Love
Author's Response: You really think so? That means so much to me, thank you so much. Chapter fourteen is going to be the most dramatic chapter yet I think, so I hope it really does work out, it'll be a bit of an emotional roller coaster in that chapter also tehe. Thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 08/20/11 09:54 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
Hmm. I think I would like Tom not to go after Bill but like the next day Bill's having a really bad day and with that an emotional scene requiring tissues. I don't think you need to add another character, everything is great so far. Your writing is amazing and I'm jealous. Hope to see another update soon!
Author's Response: I decided after a long thought not to bring another chapter in for a while because Bill and Tom's relationship development is more important for the meantime. Thank you so much for that compliment, it means a lot and it gave me a big smile ^^ I'm going to update super fast now. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 07/14/11 06:08 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
I would love to see Andy in it, just because I adore him. Then again, I adore Nixon too, although Andy would be my first choice. :)
I want Tom to go after Bill because I know that once they let themselves, particularly Bill, they will be able to fall for each other. :D I'd also love an emotional scene, but I know that whatever you write and which ever characters you bring in you will do a fantastic job. :)
Author's Response: I also adore Andy so I was really excited to bring another character into it, but I decided that I'll add one in when Bill and Tom's relationship has moved a long further.rnrnThat compliment was so lovely, that means so much to me. Thank you so much :)
Date: 07/14/11 05:59 pm Title: Eleven: Underneath The Evidence.
I simply adored this chapter. Seeing Tom defend Bill like that was perfect and then breaking down like that was just heartbreaking. You did a great job. :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you adored the chapter, I'm so happy you thought I done a great job, that means so much to me. Thank you so much for your amazing review :)
Date: 07/10/11 02:31 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
interesting developments. =)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 07/09/11 01:27 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
Choice 1 and Andy Sixx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and review :)
Date: 07/08/11 03:35 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
I really love this story, however, I find myself merely grazing over certain parts. While your descriptions are good, you use them too often and more than that they seem to be used in places where they aren't generally necessary. Things like this tend to annoy readers and encourages them to skim through the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing that out, I would never have noticed otherwise. I'm just so used to using description that I don't know how to tone it down, but I will honestly try my hardest, thank you :)
Date: 07/05/11 01:48 pm Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
another Amazing chapter:D
number 1 tom goes after bill
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot :)
Date: 07/05/11 06:28 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
ok so i think that tom shouldnt go after bill bill reads the letter and in doing so realises and begins the process of accepting and little by little acting on his feelings for tom. i really love this story but its going a little too slow in my opinion it needs to start up
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love the story and I myself have noticed it's beginning to go to slow, so I will begin to speed things up in the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 07/04/11 09:30 am Title: Twelve: Harder Than You Know.
i love this! i really do, it's so good! and i think that the band that made the song tom sang is framing hanley ;) i'd like to see more drama, i love drama, and an argument, that's always fun as well. and what the letter says. yeah, that would be nice. i just read 12 chapters and i'm longing for more already
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love it, that makes me smile. And indeed it was Framing Hanley. And wow, you read all twelve chapters in one go? And I will definitely try and include some of your votes in the next couple of chapters, thank you so much for your review :)