Date: 09/28/10 11:03 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
cool :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 09/28/10 10:15 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
He'll get the 5 star treatment with me :)
Author's Response: Hehe, manicures, massages, you name it :D Diva!Bill is excited. I've now posted chapter two up, just waiting on it being validated x
Date: 09/26/10 04:45 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
i love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D *Cuddles*
Date: 09/22/10 10:37 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Oh, Bill. Not that I like anything about his character as of yet, but still. That's not cool to sell people. Andreas is an idiot.
Author's Response: It isn't cool to sell people >.< Georg is an ass for offering Bill *Cuddles Bill and hides him* And yes, Andreas is an idiot. It was his fault. Bill is a major Diva, but you learn to love him :D Thank you so much for you're amazing review :D x
Date: 09/21/10 10:49 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Really interesting plot! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Concrit: I would maybe suggest a beta? Just for smaller inconsistencies like the bet amount changing a few times, and some awkward wording. It's good, but it could be GREAT.
Also, I LOVE the banner. Looking forward to seeing how this continues!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you think it's an interesting plot. Credit goes to LuneBlue for allowing me to take it :DrnrnI really do need a beta, but I think most of the beta's are too busy just now :( But don't worry, I'll definetly find a beta before chapter three is out. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out, it really does help :DrnrnThank you so much for you're amazing review x
Date: 09/21/10 12:50 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
SHIT!!!
I want more! :)
Author's Response: Hehe, more will be coming soon. Thank you for you're review :D
Date: 09/20/10 07:23 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
I really love the plot and characters in this story, and I haven't been this excited to see how a fic will unfold in a bit. I just love this so far!
Author's Response: Wow. Seriously? I am absolutely honoured that you haven't been this excited about a story in a bit. You're review has made my entire day *Cuddles* I can't thank you enough for loving this story and for you're amazing review, thank you :D
Date: 09/20/10 06:21 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
You did a great job I'm so happy that you chose my prompt =D ! I can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you let me take the prompt. And thank you so much, it really means alot that you think I done a great job *Cuddles* Thank you for all you're inspiration and this lovely review :D
Date: 09/20/10 04:34 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
when you asked for a name for a gang, I immediately thought of the Jets and the Sharks, for some reason. Jk, from the west side story.
Anyhow. This is awesome! I saw the prompt and was intruiged, but this is just beyond what I expected, I love it when stories go completely AU and this is exactly what I mean with that. It's basically what fanfiction's all about, placing your favourite characters (bandmembers.. -waves hand dismissively-) in odd situations and you've done exactly that and better!
I love the feelings Andreas and Bill have for each other, it's a rare thing in a Bill/Tom story to find either of them has feelings for the other. It's very nice and realistic. Even if diva!Bill lives in a scrawny appartment.. XD
You've got a great writing style and I can't wait to see how this continues!
With love,
~Dawn
Author's Response: I'm going to put all the reviews that have mentioned gang names into a vote. Thank you so much for coming up with those three amazing possibilities. I love them all :)rnrnYou really think it's aweosome? I've not smiled so big in ages! rnrnIt is very rare now that you mention it, I've not read many stories where Bill and Andreas hav feelings for one another in a Tom/Bill genre. I'm so happy you think it's realistic, it's the feeling I was trying to get across and was absolutely worried that it wouldn't. rnrnWow. You think I have a great writing style? *Cuddles* That's the nicest thing I've ever heard from a reviewer. I actually cannot thank you enough for this amazing, wonderful, aweosome review. I absolutely loved reading this review :D Thank you! x
Date: 09/20/10 02:32 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Aww ): Poor Bill just getting sold like that. But I'm sure that Tomi will satisfy him ;) More please?
Author's Response: More will be soon :D *Daydreams* I have alot in store for Bill and Tom, I'm so excited to write the scenes I'm thinking off hehe. Thank you so much for your wonderful review :D
Date: 09/20/10 01:48 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
brilliant! i loved the first chapter and i love the story idea......i feel bad for poor andi though..i can't wait for more
*tracking story*
take care X
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're review is absolutely amazing. I can't believe you thought it was brilliant, and you love it already. *Cuddles* I feel so bad for Andreas too :( But things might look up :D rnrnrnThank you so much for you're lovely review x
Date: 09/20/10 11:17 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Looks good! ALready read the prompt now found the fic :D But, first G says they gambled 800,000, and then it is all of a sudden 2000? or 1000? (personally, I think 1000 is really low. If they really are such gangsters then 1000 is nothing.)
Love to see more!
Author's Response: I was half asleep when I went back to edit in the amount of money >.< I'm so sorry about that mistake, I've fixed it now though :D Thank you so much for pointing it out though. I'm so happy you'd love to see more, thank you for you're aweosome review :D x
Date: 09/20/10 09:04 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
I feel very sad for Andi, even if I can't wait to read about how Bill and Tom relationship will develop!
This is a very interesting first chapter, I can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response: I feel sad for Andreas too :( Especially in the next chapter. *Cuddles Andi* I'm excited about writing about Bill and Tom's relationship, as they're my absolute favourite pairing :D rnrnThank you so much for, and I hope you continue reading. Once again, thank you for you're lovely review x
Date: 09/20/10 06:35 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
please update!!!!
Author's Response: Update shall be soon :D
Date: 09/20/10 05:08 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Gang leader Tom is hot ~drool~
Author's Response: *Joins in with drooling* Agreed :D
Date: 09/20/10 05:05 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
ooh, I want Bill-cookies!! :D
Great beginning, I'm curious to see more of that! Don't let us wait too long ;-)
Author's Response: *Hands out Bill cookies* They're Bill flavoured too :D rnrnNew chapter shall be up very shortly, so hopefully it won't be to long a wait :) I'm so happy you thought it was a great beginning, that means alot. Thank you so much for you're amazing review x
Date: 09/20/10 03:47 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Since Georg's gang is The Pythons..
How about The Boas on Tom's side? Or The Anacondas?
LOL. I know. SILLY review. But hey, I like the story!
Author's Response: It's not a silly review ;P I absolutely loved the fact that you reviewed. I'm going to put the gang names thought off by reviewers into a vote, so thank you so much for you're suggestions, I love them both :D rnrnThank you so much for liking the story, and for reviewing :D
Date: 09/20/10 03:37 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
First i want to say i love your banner~ and yay~ for a race track fic! :D I live near a racetrack but never gambled there. (it's a waste of money.. and chances of winning BIG bucks is low, imo unless you're SUPER LUCKY or something) now my reaction to the fic~
*blinks* *blinks again* oh man.. that sucks.. I do feel bad for Andreas. :/ I am sure he could've gotten $1,000 in no time. Just sell some of Bill's stuff.. Problem solved! So sad that Andreas has a gambling addiction. good thing for that city/(gangs? i am not sure, it sounds like the race track is city owned and gangs just go and meet and bet there?)more money for the economy!! bad for him. (but the city thanks him) D: I dunno maybe this is me but I think it is kind of funny that Georg bet $800,000 on the race, (I am gonna assume some of that money is Tom's too. Why else would Andreas have to pay Tom) and only he only expects Andreas to compensate him $2,000 for the race? $1,000 for him and $1,000 for Tom. Georg sounds like he might be a really forgiving and generous gang leader! But Georg is not very bright cause he traded a person to settle a really small amount of debt. Bad trading skills! D: Tom got the better end of the bargain and poor Andreas has to suffer. Unless Georg already had an ongoing debt with Tom. (then that would make more sense to me on why he would be so eager to trade Bill) I wonder how they will convince Bill to go to Tom cause he does have his right to refuse. :/ No one can really be sold and brought (legally speaking in "developed countries" (i hate using that term) which sounds like this is where this is set). unless we are talking about the black market.. that makes me sad if they were to do that. I would think they would have more class than kidnapping to sell and trade. :[ I do not approve of human trafficking. Ah.. sorry i talk too much. If this came off as too um..picky about details..I do apologize. But other-wise i think this is a great idea~ :D I can't wait to see more :D I wonder if we'll see some white-collar crime from either gang or blue-collar~ Just some crime~ LOL.. ok i'll shut up now i do talk too much.. I blame my train of thoughts.. they never stop.
Author's Response: I feel absolutely awful for poor Andreas too :( He was only gambling so he can keep up with the expense of keeping Bill and because he has a gambling addiction :DrnrnI made a major mistake in the money, the actual amount Georg bet was $600,000. Which Andreas was supposed to pay half off, I mixed it up with $2,000. I'm so sorry if I confused you because of my mistakes. They've been fixed now though :D rnrnGeorg already has an ongoing debt with Tom already, and he's not got any money because he's in serious debt so the only thing he can think of is to sell Bill. All to save his own ass from being beat up. Selling humans isn't right :( but it's very fun to write about, especially when it's about Bill :D rnrnNo need to apologise, it didn't come of as picky at all. It actually helped in alot of senses. Thank you so much for thinking it's a great idea, all credit goes to LuneBlue for the prompt. New chapter will be up very soon, hopefully it won't be too long a wait. Oh, there will be plently of crime and violence :D I love it when people let their train of thoughts go on and go, I love reading long reviews. Thank you so much for you're lovely and amazing review, I really appreciate it :D *Cuddles*
Date: 09/20/10 12:28 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
O___O How the hell is Andi gonna explain this to Bill? I bet Bill is going to be one pissed off diva bitch!
More~soon~please!
Author's Response: Poor Andi having to explain >.< and yes, Bill is going to be one pissed off Diva, that is until Tom enters the scene :D Thank you so much for you're amazing review, and new chapter shall be up shortly :D
Date: 09/20/10 12:16 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Faceless Assassions, The Untouchables, Leben das Leben, or Carpe Diem thats all the gang names I can come up with at the moment. But yeah.. anyway love the story and the banner!!!! Or Bloodz since their color is red and gold??? If not than yeah whatever. :D
Author's Response: I love all you're suggestions for Tom's possible gang name, so I'm going to put everyones suggestions into a vote because I can't choose. They're all absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for loving the story, that means alot, thank you so much for you're review :D