Date: 09/29/10 10:06 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
THE BOAS !! hhaaha. it's my first time to review . anyway... in my opinion.. your summary for this story is the best summary i have ever read . seriously . i'm looking forward for the next chapter. i think this story will be one of my top five favourites :)
Author's Response: Honestly? Wow. *Faints* I actually wasn't expecting that. It's the best summary you've ever read? *Squeals in excited* I'm still in absolute shock. *Cuddles* The next chapter will be up very soon, and honestly? One of your top five favourites? You've got me grinning like an idiot, your review was absolutely amazing, I love you for your response, I'm actually so happy. Thank you so much for your lovely review :D
Date: 09/29/10 10:04 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Only to chapthers and I love it! Im so in love with this fics! What ever you do don't rush it! Take the time you need to make the chapthers great!!!
Hmm a namne.... I think I like The Untochables!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so happy that you love it. And don't worry, I'll try my absolute hardest so I don't rush it, and don't feel hesitant to tell me if you think it's going to fast :) Thank you so much for your review and for your vote :D
Date: 09/29/10 09:34 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I vote Carpe Diem :)
This chapter was so sad! Even if I adore Tom/Bill, I felt so bad for Andi, even if it's all his fault... You wrote their emotions very well. I hope Tom will be good to Bill and not so mean :( Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: It is all Andreas fault *Tuts at Andreas* But I do feel sorry for him. You really think so? I'm so happy that you thought I wrote their emotions well. Tom will be mean now and again but there will be moments when he is very sweet to Bill :D The next chapter will be up very shortly. Thank you so much for your lovely review and for your vote :D
Date: 09/29/10 09:22 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
One word: WOW! Faceless Assassions souds good.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for your amazing response :D And thank you so much for your vote and review :D
Date: 09/29/10 08:08 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
*gasps* *grabs Bill* No!!! He's mine! lol. This is great! I can't wait for more! I feel bad for Andi for losing Bill. And I also love Tom's character here *so sexy... drools* But really, I want to know what happens next. btw, I like Chainsaws!
Author's Response: I can't believe you think it's great, that makes me so happy, thank you :D I also feel bad for Andreas, but he shouldn't have gambled *Shakes head at Andi* I'm so happy you love Tom's character, he is very sexy *Joins in drooling* The next chapter should be up very soon, thank you for your review and for your vote :D
Date: 09/29/10 07:41 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I almost cried when Bill found out Andi had sold him ): But I kinda like the way Tom got Bill outta there, almost raping him with the eyes and then dragging him outta there like that. Sexy. More please?
Author's Response: *Cuddles* I'm so sorry that you nearly cried. Hehe, he was very much raping him with his eyes, I wish I could've been in the story to actually see that play out *Thinks about sexy Tom* Next chapter should be up very soon :D Thank you for your review.
Date: 09/29/10 07:34 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
:O Poor Bill
But, lol, at least Tom isn't ugly XD
Chainsaws... I guess :D
Author's Response: Hehe, indeed, if Tom was ugly then I'm sure Bill would've been a MEGA diva :DrnrnThank you for your review and for your vote x
Date: 09/29/10 07:33 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Untouchables!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 07:31 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
What a tense scene! I loved the interplay of characters, as well as the very raw emotions we felt from Bill and Andreas. I especially liked the way you ended this chapter...it was short but conveyed so much meaning and was quite foreshadowing!
And my vote is for The Untouchables! It sounds very grown up and seems like a name that cocky Tom would come up with!
Author's Response: Oh wow, your review had me smiling like crazy. I'm so happy you loved the interplay of the characters and the way I ended it, it makes me feel absolutely amazing inside :DrnrnThe Untouchables does seem very grown up and a name Tom would choose, because he's well, Tom lol. Thank you so much for your lovely review and for your vote x
Date: 09/29/10 06:35 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
my vote is for the faceless assassions
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 06:09 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
hmmm i like this so far
i like Tom's attitude,rough gangsta,that suits him
The Sharks-is my vote
update soon
Author's Response: I'm so happy that your liking it so far, and hope you continue too like it :D I've always wanted to see Tom as a rough gangster, that's why I was so happy when I was able to adopt the prompt, he seems rather sexy like that :D Thank you so much for your review and for your vote x
Date: 09/29/10 05:31 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Thanks for updating!
Tom is a rough guy, so the name of his gang must also be strong.. I say The Sharks or The Anacondas.
Author's Response: It's my absolute honour to update for you lovely reviewes :DrnAnd yes, they are good choices for Tom's gang, especially because he's very rough. Thank you so much for your vote and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 04:03 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
*munches Bill cookies* Was a really exciting chapter. And poor Bill. Treated like a commodity in our modern age... I doubt Andi will be able to win Bill back, though.
Tom is great as the cruel and heartless gang leader. I trust someone will change that careless attitude :)
Author's Response: *Munches on Bill cookies also* Exciting? Really? Wow. That makes me feel a whole load better. I also feel sorry for Bill, he's being treated horribily :( You never know, Andreas might be able to win Bill back :D And as for Tom's cruel and heartless attitude, I'm asbolutely sure that someone will be able to change that. Thank you so much for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 04:00 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I think I'll go for Carpe Diem. I know it's not your ordinarily rough gang's name, but I like it because it sort of shows this different side of Tom that remains to be seen.
Anyway, I'm liking the story so far. I would love to read that second part you wrote about in the chapter notes.
Thanks for sharing!
See ya.
Author's Response: Carpe Diem was a suggestion from another reviewer and I still haven't translated it to see what it means, lol, but I really like the sound of it. rnI'm so happy that your liking the story so far, and I can't wait for you to read the next chapter, I'm just hoping it'll be up to everyones expectations. And it my absolute honour to share this story, especially for all you lovely readers :D Thank you for your review.
Date: 09/29/10 03:17 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
The Untouchables :)
Very good start, I like it!
xx
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you like it, and you think it's a good start? Thank you so much. Another big thank you for voting and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 03:04 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I love the story! I vote for the name Leben Das Leben, I think its an appropriate name for Tom's gang =)
Author's Response: You love it? Oh wow, I'm actually so honoured. It sounds very appropiate for Tom's gang, thank you so much for voting and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 02:31 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Gah I almost cried when Bill was taken away! As for the name "Carpe Diem"
Author's Response: Awhs *cuddles* It was rather sad, but Bill will have some luck in time :D Thank you for your vote and for your review x
Date: 09/29/10 02:13 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I vote for the 'The Untouchables'
Author's Response: Thank you for voting :D
Date: 09/29/10 02:04 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
great chapter!! i wanna read the next one :D hmm for the name i choose....the sharks!! xD
Author's Response: You think it's great? Thank you so much. I'll be posting up the next chapter hopefully in the next day or two. Thank you so much for your vote and for your review :D
Date: 09/29/10 01:34 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
The Untouchables is my favorite. Tom was so mean, I can't imagine the next interaction between him and Bill will be very plesaant.
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote. And yes, Tom is very mean :( the next encounter will not be very pleasant, but I'm sure Bill will be able to hold on :D Thank you so much for your review x