Date: 10/16/10 04:06 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
I don't have time to give you a good review but I love this. L.O.V.E!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/16/10 03:38 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
I think this chapter is better then the other, for starters.
It felt kinda weird(when i thought about it, back then i didn´t realize it^^) that Tom would be so... I dunno... nice? to Bill after he won him... Or I dunno, it felt weird... So the redo is welcome... Update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :D x
Date: 10/16/10 03:06 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
Does the newspaper article refer to Tom or Bill? I'm glad Tom hasn't treated Bill horribly yet, I don't want him to. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hehe it could be either :D Thank you so much for your review xx
Date: 10/16/10 01:23 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
*homer simpson impression* mmmugh Tom...I am very very VERY interested in this story and I cannot wait for the next update!...is Bill anorexiz in this?...you had him wanting to vomit at the food was that like a vegetarian thing or an anorexic thing or is it just because he hasnt eaten in a few days?...I know when I'm sick and havent eaten in a few days the thought of food makes me nauseous...just curious ya know...NOw I'm assuming the boy in the article was Tom but I'm not sure why that might stop him from going in there...unless Tom knows it was Bill in the article which I could see that causing him pause...I dunno buut hell you didnt even really say it gave him pause at all did you?...I dunno I am justso interested in this ...keep up the fantasmic work
Author's Response: Hehe I love your homer simpson impression! Bill is somewhat anorexic in the story, he doesn't like to eat that much and the reason he didn't want to eat the food is because he' trying to rebel against Tom and the food seems rather disgusting looking and smells really bad :D You had a perfect guess there, indeed it was Tom :D Thank you so much for your amazing review Xxx
Date: 10/16/10 01:03 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
aww, poor billa...... ^_^ keep up the good work!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/16/10 12:52 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
Aww poor Bill =(
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/15/10 11:55 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
More horse racing and a surprise?!?! I can hardly wiat! Bills situation sucks-can't believe that damn Andreas...and Georg for suggesting Bill for the debt. Bill better eat or he won't have a chance agaist Tom...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :D x
Date: 10/15/10 10:40 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Yay!~
Author's Response: Thank you :D x
Date: 10/15/10 10:28 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
So Bill was that 10 year old kid? :O
Ohhh Tom cookies :D yummy
Author's Response: He might have been :D Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/15/10 10:10 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Holy crap I almost choked on my tootsie pop while reading about Tom's low ridin' sweats & his undies & his abs &...yeah xD I need more as soon as possible. Plz? I love this!
Author's Response: Hehe, I was giggling the entire time while reading your review :D I love Tom's abs :D Thank you so much for reviewing xx
Date: 10/15/10 09:48 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Loving this so much! The characters are great and that little bit at the end...so mysterious! I'm really looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/11/10 06:50 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Awesome story so far! I think they should be called The Boas. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/04/10 08:23 pm Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Amazing plot :3 and Faceless Assassions is a good one for Toms gang , (: hopfully chapter3 comes soon :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/04/10 04:57 pm Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Well again I say Carpe Diem, basically what it means is "seize the day".
Author's Response: Thank you so much x
Date: 10/03/10 09:43 pm Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I like the sharks.
And I definetyly like this fic. Especially Tom. He's soo mean.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/02/10 10:47 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
i'm not feeling well but this update made me feel better...another brilliant chapter! seriously amazing! i love what a total prick tom is...but *sniffs* poor bill
i still vote carpe diem...
keep up the good work & thank you for the update
i can't wait for more xxx
Author's Response: *Cuddles* I'm so happy it made you feel better, and I hope you'll get better soon :) You really think so? Wow, I'm actually grinning like an idiot just now, I can't believe you thought it was brilliant, especially because I know I could've done so much better. I also love how much of a prick Tom is, he's very sexy :D But I do feel sorry for Bill :(rnrnThank you so much for your absolutely amazing review *Cuddles* x
Date: 10/02/10 04:32 pm Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Faceless assassins sounds pretty good. It's like saying ninja but in a cooler way.
Story is good! Keep it up man.
Author's Response: Hehe, it is like saying Ninja in a cooler way. rnrnThank you so much for thinking the story is good and for your review and vote :D
Date: 10/02/10 08:27 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
omg... Tom is idiot! :D i love him. :D
Author's Response: Hehe, he is an idiot :D I also love him *Hugs Tom* Thank you so much for your review.
Date: 10/02/10 06:32 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
D:
billa!!
you be nie to him tomi! or ima kiss your ass :P
The Jets and The Sharks are from Westside Story(just in case you didnt know)
I vote for Leben Das Leben and JK....Ohhhh Bill flavour is the BEST! yummeh!
Author's Response: Hehe, do you mean kick his ass? :P Oh, I've never watched Westside Story, that must've been where the person who suggested them came up with them :D Bill flavour is the BEST! I AGREE! Thank you so much for your review and vote :D
Date: 10/02/10 05:42 am Title: Two: Built For Sin.
I really love this story, please post the next chapter as soon as possible! :)
Author's Response: I can't believe you love already *Cuddles* The next chapter shall be up sometime tonight. Thank you so much for your review :D