Date: 11/01/10 07:59 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
Oh I hope Bill stays with Tom. update soon please!!!!
Author's Response: That will all be revealed in later chapters hehe :D More will be up soon, thank you so much for your review x
Date: 11/01/10 07:58 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
*hugs*
this wasn't crap, it was brilliant...
i loved this chapter...it was really interesting to find out more about tom...
thanks for the update
i'm really looking forward to more X
Author's Response: You really think so? Thank you :D *Cuddles*rnI'm so happy that you loved this chapter and I'm so glad that you found Tom's past interesting :DrnrnThank you so much for reviewing xx
Date: 11/01/10 03:01 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
So what is Tom's gangs name?
Author's Response: I couldn't decide out of the four that it had been narrowed down too so I've decided to put up a vote again :D Thank you for your review x
Date: 11/01/10 01:46 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
i wud love for bill to be more dominate. He's like a damsel in distress i wud luv to see him get his own backbone. Btw do u think u cud update more. I usually don't read uncompleted stories bcuz i hate waiting but i couldn't resist this story. Just a simple request. Anyway love this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm definetly going to take up your request of Bill becoming more dominating :D I absolutely love Bill being a Diva and having a backbone so hopefully in the next chapter he'll be exactly like that :D rnrnI will try my absolute hardest to update every three days, thank you so much for loving this chapter and for reviewing, I can't thank you enough :) x
Date: 11/01/10 01:15 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and for loving it :D x
Date: 11/01/10 01:14 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
thanks for the update, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're looking forward to more :D Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 11/01/10 12:45 am Title: Four: When You Are Around.
hmmm..... andi's gonna try to win bill back and fail.... or sommat like that.....XD great job!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehe, you're very close with your guess :D But there's going to be a slight twist, which will be revealed in chapter six. I'm so happy you thought I done a great job :) Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/28/10 06:54 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Woo! Bi-polar. This'll be good...
Author's Response: Thank you for your review :D x
Date: 10/23/10 01:23 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
love it!
Author's Response: Thank you :D x
Date: 10/21/10 02:37 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Good chapter. I'm positively in favour of ho Tom is kinder to Bill - everything taken into consideration - than his usual toys. *Maria
Author's Response: I loved having Tom being kinder towards Bill :) I'm so happy you thought it was a good chapter :D Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/19/10 08:34 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
Oooooohhh!! Now Bill is Tom's bitch? nice... I hope you can update soon!!! wait.. what happened with Andreas? And that flashback from Tom... *coughs*tom's the kid that saw his dad get murdered and his heart turns cold after that*coughs* *grins*
Author's Response: Amazing guess! Your spot on! :D rnrnThank you so much for your review :D xxx
Date: 10/18/10 12:28 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
I look forward on reading the other chapters!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're excited :D Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/16/10 08:05 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Wow, I'm intrigued over who the 10 year old is and why Tom is being so lenient with Bill. Loved the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :D x
Date: 10/16/10 07:36 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
I look forward to more. Things are going to get interesting.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're excited for more :D Thank you so much for reviewing x
Date: 10/16/10 07:28 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Abso-fukin-lutely love it.
Author's Response: I love your new word for absolutely :D Thank you so much for your review and for loving it :D x
Date: 10/16/10 02:46 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
*takes tom cookie* this storys awsome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D x
Date: 10/16/10 07:29 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
Yay you updated ! =D
I loved how it turned out, I can't wait to read chapter 4 !
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved it :D Thank you so much for reviewing and for once again helping me with the plot :D xx
Date: 10/16/10 07:24 am Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
hey,
brilliant story..& a
much better chapter..i prefer this one
..so i'm guessing bill was the 10 year old?
thanks for the update & i'm looking forward 2 more xxx
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think it's brilliant :D And that will be revealed in the next chapter, it could be Bill but it could also be Tom :D Thank you so much for your review x
Date: 10/16/10 07:14 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
eeeps, this is so awesome, I LOVE bi-polar Tom! and diva!bill and I just completely adore this story. I have to say I like this chapter better, for the last one was a bit.. awkward?
The chapter was kinda short too, but that's okay, because there's going to be awesomeness (and horses!) next chapter!
I imagined bill much differently and older, like the bill you have in the banner.. he's so young in the picture!
Tom's appropriate though and holy hell that room is scary :S
Which makes me love it cause I'm a sucker for angsty things like that :D
so, more angst, please?
why do I ask, I KNOW it'll come!
I really hope Tom doesn't rape Bill or something, while at the same time I do, because that's really good for the story and the relationship and the tension and everything, but I still love Bill *huggles bill* so..
*covers imaginaryBill's ears* don't let tome go too hard on him, unless he enjoys it..
That's it, I loved the chapter and the fear the gang seems to have for Tom, though I believe you should put in some trust and reason for loyalty too, just fear isn't the best basis for a functioning gang.
LOVE!
~Dawn
Author's Response: I absolutely love Bi-polar Tom and Diva Bill too! I'm so excited when I get to write about them. I'm going to try my hardest to include horse racing in the next chapter but it not be in it until chapter six :(rnrnI love angst, so there's going to be alot more :D rnrnI don't want Tom to rape Bill either, I think I would cry the entire time through writing it :( I think it would make a good edge for the story but I don't think I'd be able to write it :( I feel sorry for Bill.rnrnI'm so happy that you loved this chapter and I hope you continue to love them, thank you so much for your absolutely amazing review, it's the longest one I have ever recieved! *Cuddles* Thank you so much for your time on writing this, I can't thank you enough xxxx
Date: 10/16/10 05:28 am Title: Three: How Things Are.
Just read this one and I must say I really like this plot; haven't read anything like it before. Very original. I feel abit sorry for Bill thought finding out that andi gambled him :/ even though he didnt mean to he still did and he broke his promise. I like Tom and his gang for some reason XD think they are cool! ;) I'm so looking forward to more and can't' wait to see how... things between bill and tom will be;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your absolutely amazing review, I can't thank you enough :D xxxx