Date: 11/15/10 02:11 pm Title: Three: How Things Are.
Now I'm really happy because I get a Tom cookie. This was a wonderful chapter sweetie and it sounds like we're going to find out soon about Bill's past. I am off to read some more.
Author's Response: Hehe, there's a suprise in the next chapter, it might actually be about Tom's past :P But there's going to be a chapter that focus's on Bill's background to give a better understanding of his character, thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 02:02 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Carpe Diem!:D
Author's Response: Thank you :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 01:56 pm Title: Two: Built For Sin.
Nummy, Bill flavoured cookies. Delicious! Excellent chapter sweetie and now I'm moving on to the next one before I pass out.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much :D xx
Date: 11/15/10 01:40 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Carpe Diem since it means "Seize the Day, trusting as little as possible in the future" or something like that :D
Author's Response: Spot on :D Thank you so much xx
Date: 11/15/10 01:40 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
Tom's a toughie that's for sure. I wonder what's going to happen to Bill now. On to the next chapter. Very good story so far sweetie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 12:12 pm Title: One: Never Had A Choice.
hey! how you been?
i'm so glad you're back..i was missing this story A LOT!
this was amazing and just pure brilliance..i loved it!
so much to love about this chapter, but i especially loved tom's attitude, and diva bill..
i'm looking forward to more
p.s.i vote carpe diem
Author's Response: I've been good thank you, you?rnrnAwh, that means so much to be that you're happy and I promise the chapters will stay on a roll now :DrnrnThank you so much for your lovely review xxx
Date: 11/15/10 09:40 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
This was sad. Now that Bills broken so to speak Tom can get to him now. I'm voting for the untouchables. Can't wait for the next update. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your amazing review, it means alot :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 08:41 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Aww... god... I feel so sorry for Andreas and Bill, but at the same time I like that Bill is with Tom... The same with Tom being mean, I want him to stop, but I like that he´s mean too... And, my favorite is Carpe Diem.
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so very undecisive about what I like because I also love that Bill is with Tom but I feel bad for him losing Andreas, but it's so fun to do it :D Thank you so much for your review xx
Date: 11/15/10 06:01 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Amazing chapter =D!
I love the interaction between Tom and Bill, and I feel so bad that Andi is ignoring him...
I vote for The Untouchables !
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 02:59 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Oo. Stop hurting Bill. It freaking sucks. But meh. Mmm my vote goes to Faceless Assassins.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 02:40 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
The Untouchables
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/15/10 12:44 am Title: Five: Will Never Show.
I like Faceless Assassins. I really liked this chapter, and Tom~~WTF?! I'm suprised that came out of his mouth. Now I can't wait to see if he means it or he's toying with Bill. And what was up with Andreas, he could have at least looked Bills way-cant wait to find out why he didn't.
Author's Response: Everything will be revealed over the next couple of chapters :D I'm so excited about giving some hints of information, Tom is very confusing at times hehe.rnrnThank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 10:29 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
CARPE DIEM~
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 10:15 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Chainsaws :D I love this bitchy diva-ish Bill :D It's soooo... him. lawl. I just wish Tom would pounce on him already. *grins* That would be interesting. This chapter doesn't talk about things that much but it's interesting. I can't wait to see more! :D *eats Bill cookies* yeah, I still have some left. Want some? *hands cookies*
Author's Response: *Accepts Cookies* Yum! Bill flavour! :D I love bitchy diva Bill to, I can just imagine real life Bill being like that behind closed doors hehe. I can't wait to make Tom pounce on him, but I have to take it slow :( Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 10:07 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
hmmm, I kinda like Carpe Diem, this was a good chapter. I accidentally reviewed chp4 w/o realizing there were 5 chapters, silly me. this was a good chapter. I really liked it. Bill's attitude shift was kinda weird, but it kinda worked. Tom is a very sick man, and he needs help...i'm very interested in seeing more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 09:41 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Poor Bill, I want him to not lose his hope. Tom better prove himself right and care for Bill.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 09:41 pm Title: Four: When You Are Around.
oh Bill cookie! My favorite! I'm glad we have some background on Tom. I'd love to see a little background on Bill now. How does he know and understand? This is a really good story so far. Tom seems a pretty extremely Bi-polar. I don't know how he hides the break-down parts from the guys though, because he would have too or no one would respect him no matter how violant he can potentially get...very intriguing so far. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: There will be a chapter very shortly about Bill's background and I'm so excited about writing it. I understand that most people will think Tom is very bi-polar, but it's somewhat like an attitude shift that he can't control most of the time. Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 08:42 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
omfg.....andi......COLD HEARTEN BASTARD!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 08:29 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
Yay! Diva Bill xD My heart aches for Bill there at the end for thinking that Andi doesn't care. It aches for Andi too :( I'm excited for the next update!
I'm still all for The Untouchables.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 11/14/10 08:25 pm Title: Five: Will Never Show.
OMG i love this. i hope u update again sooonn
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) xx