Date: 01/13/11 11:01 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I just want to hug Bill. That is so sad what happened to his mom. I pick #s 1-6 & #s 8-12
Author's Response: I want to hug him too ^^ Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 10:51 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
uh you mean I have to choose? They all look so promising. I suppose I most want to see
1. More about Bill’s past.
2. More about Tom’s past
4. Tom to be more forceful and aggressive towards Bill.
5. Bill and Tom to open up to each other and become closer.
At least for the immediate future. But to be honest the only thiing I'm not too thrilled with the idea of seeing more of is the horse racing. Not that its bad, its just you got so many other good ideas going on that business can be left off scene for a bit you know?
Great work on this chapter too. I wouldn't really consider it filler seeing as we did get a bit of Bill's backstory, which is important to why Bill was where he was, which has everything to do with where he is now. Know what I mean?
One other thing thats not on your list I would be kind of interested in seeing would be something about how Andreas ended up in the gang, and how Bill and he got together. Just an idea I thought I would toss out there.
Once again great work. I look forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Don't worry there won't be any more horse racing for quite a while I think, because the gambling will probably change to gangs getting together and betting for money playing poker, ect. That's an absolutely amazing idea! I'll be sure to mark it down and include it somewhere, I suppose it would be rather interesting to write about how him and Andreas got together and the gang thing, I love it! Thank you so much for your amazing review xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 10:47 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
11.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 10:10 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
5,11,12
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Date: 01/13/11 09:42 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
YAY!!!! CARPE DIEM!!!!!! great chap!! poor bill :( i will chose 5,10,11,12 lol
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 09:33 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
Maybe it's against other's people's opinion but I want number 4, please XD sounds interesting *grin*
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Date: 01/13/11 09:03 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
Loved it!!! I can't wait for more! Now, suggestions... I'd say 2, 4, 6, 9, 10 and 12 :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 08:49 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
i'd like more of tom's past.... we've gotten a glimpse of bill's, so i think we should see some more of tom's.... i also think that at some point soon, they should have an emotional moment, then an argument..... am i making any sense???? i enjoyed this chapter, i wouldn't really call it boring, it was intersting.... more soon, please!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 08:46 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
This wasn't boring at all. Bill's past was so tragic. I would love it if Bill & Tom shared a serious moment as to where they could understand each other more. Fantastic chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you didn't think it was boring. Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 08:42 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
4. Tom to be more forceful and aggressive towards Bill.
5. Bill and Tom to open up to each other and become closer.
11. A scene where Andreas can’t contain it anymore and approaches Bill (A party maybe) and they have a slight moment of remembering old times and hug. A jealous Tom and a fight. (So that Bill realises that Tom likes him)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/13/11 08:37 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I vote for 5, 11, and 12. :D
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Date: 01/13/11 01:11 pm Title: Six: Never Meant.
Carpe Diem.
That's unusually sweet of Tom.
Author's Response: It was very unusually sweet of Tom, he's creepy haha. Thank you for the vote and review :) xx
Date: 01/13/11 11:52 am Title: Six: Never Meant.
OMG! I don't know what to say o_o'
But this fic is AWESOME... So beautifu!
Tom is in love to Bill (wooowo/) but why don't say it to him?
What are the Bill's feelings in relation to Tom???? O_o
Author's Response: Wow. I'm honestly speechless, I don't know what to say *Blushes* That means a lot that you think it's aweosome and beautiful :D That's so lovely of you. Tom doesn't want to admit it because he has an image to mantain and Bill's feelings towards Tom will be relieved slowly :) Thank you so much for your review xx
Date: 01/12/11 11:22 pm Title: Six: Never Meant.
I just started reading this, but oh my god I adore it so much! It's really fantastic, not gonna lie, and I truly cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much :D xx
Date: 01/12/11 10:58 pm Title: Six: Never Meant.
faceless assassions
Author's Response: Thank you :D xx
Date: 01/12/11 07:54 pm Title: Six: Never Meant.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Absolutely no problem, thank you so much for your review :) xx
Date: 01/12/11 07:13 pm Title: Six: Never Meant.
I vote Faceless Assassins.
Carpe Diem is a good thing. Gangs are supposed to be bad.
Author's Response: Is does mean a good thing, but at the same time it sounds so powerful, but I love both the gang names :D Thank you for your review xx
Date: 01/12/11 10:27 am Title: Six: Never Meant.
Poor Andreas Tom just had to rub it in his face. Bad Tom lol!!! I vote for Carpe Diem.
Author's Response: I agree - I feel bad for Andreas *Cuddles him* Tom is bad, but he's sexy hehe. Thank you for your vote and review :D xx
Date: 01/12/11 09:50 am Title: Six: Never Meant.
CARPE DIEM.
Author's Response: Thank you :D xx
Date: 01/12/11 09:00 am Title: Six: Never Meant.
Yes! Please update quicker next time and I vote for Carpe Diem! This chapter was really good:)
Author's Response: Hehe, you'll be pleased to know I've just updated as I'm answering this :D I'm going to try my absolute hardest to keep it up to speed, thank you so much :D Xx