Date: 01/17/11 02:04 am Title: Eight: Unintentional Reactions.
I hate andy, hes got nerve acting like this when this us all his fault. I really kinda feel for Tom but I'm biased, cause I love Tom;)
Author's Response: I agree, Andreas is just being selfish now :O Hehe, I love Tom as well so that's why I'm making Tom keep Bill for a lot longer yet. Thank you so much for your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/17/11 01:38 am Title: Eight: Unintentional Reactions.
Man o man---cannot wait for the next update...whats gonna happen between Bill and Tom...excited to find out!
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you're excited. Thank you so much for your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/17/11 01:33 am Title: Eight: Unintentional Reactions.
LOVE IT!! =) Can't wait to read what's next.
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Date: 01/17/11 12:21 am Title: Eight: Unintentional Reactions.
Ooo....jealous Tom is a hot Tom!! Great chap!!!
Author's Response: Hehe, I agree. I love Jelous Tom. Thank you so much for your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/15/11 08:57 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I am so glad you finally updated!:D I vote for number 11!:)
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Date: 01/15/11 07:25 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
first i have to say that i love this story! it is just really good :D but i would love that the story would continue with item 5!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love it, that means alot. Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/15/11 06:52 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
Pffft, number 12! Anything you do will be great, though. I have no idea where this is going, I like to be surprised. I think any of them will work in the story. I liked this chapter a lot. It gave some intersting insights into your characters.
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Date: 01/15/11 04:47 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I think Tom and Bill should open up to each other...and I think there should be a part where Tom's really sweet to Bill.
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Date: 01/15/11 12:17 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
Maybe Tom and Bill get into a fight and Bill screams at Tom about his past or something... I dont know. You're the amazing writer here! Hahha, I hope you saved some of those Bill cookies for me ;) But anyway, I'm Team!Tom, so I don't like Andreas (even though he's a sweety pie who cant get his life together and is a jerk for lying), which kind of should imply that I dont really want an Andreas/Bill flashback :/ Or horsey-racing.... But I do love me some Tom/Bill when Tom's not being abusive... But then again that just adds to the struggling Tom character... like I said, you're the writer! Haha:)
Author's Response: Wow, I'm actually speechless that you think I'm an amazing writer, that means alot :D I saved hundreds of Bill cookies for you hehe *Hands Bill cookies* Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/14/11 10:27 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
umm lets see... 2, 5, 9, 10, 12. but whatever, I really like you story thanks for the quick update.
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Date: 01/14/11 06:28 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
Yay for eleven!:D jealous Tomi
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Date: 01/14/11 01:29 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
5. Bill and Tom to open up to each other and become closer.
7. More horseracing
11. A scene where Andreas can’t contain it anymore and approaches Bill (A party maybe) and they have a slight moment of remembering old times and hug. A jealous Tom and a fight.
12. An emotional scene between Bill and Tom – after(the fightit-can-be-another-morningxD), Bill and Tom go to a super reservate place to have a conversation, talk about their past and this conversation they open their hearts completelly and hosnetly, in both side, Bill and Tom. (that's all -IthinkxD)
- I think these are good ^^
I didn't want Bill meeting Andreas, but if this is the olny way to Tom show his jealous for Bill, it's ok ^^'
ahhh o_O
I DO NEED IT MOREEE :D
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Date: 01/14/11 10:36 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
5, 9,10 and 11!
I'm afraid I can't help you with the trailers...
Author's Response: Hehe, no worries. I'm going to send you an e-mail soon to see if there's anything you want included in the following chapters as it's your prompt :D Thank you so much for your vote and your review :) xx b29;
Date: 01/14/11 05:27 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I'd like to see more opening up between Bill and Tom. I love angst, but I like my angst to be slowly heading towards a happy ending. =) Thanks for the update, keep up the great work!!
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Date: 01/14/11 03:47 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
ok im going to say maybe Tom cools it a bit with Bill and tells him something like I'm going to treat you better, and depending on how you act and how you respect me, is how i'll continue to treat you. and them they GO TO a party where Bill see Andreas and they get a minute or two to talk... ( about what i dont know ) and Tom see them, and pulls Bill away ( not aggresively tho ) and when they get back to Toms place, Tom says in plain words, I dont like the feeling i get when you talk to him. And that leaves Bill wondering what Tom means and what feeling he's talking about.
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Date: 01/14/11 03:47 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
1,2,5,11-where Bill would take Tom's side in the end, and 12- where they wuld realise how important they were to each other, and fluff!
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Date: 01/14/11 01:36 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I want 12, 10, and 9 to happen.
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Date: 01/14/11 01:26 am Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
11!! :)
Your story is amazing!
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Date: 01/13/11 11:01 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
5 or 12 xD I love this story update soon please!
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Date: 01/13/11 11:01 pm Title: Seven: Sometimes I Doubt.
I like 10 and 12.
There are a lot of things id like to see happen, but I am not good at all putting them into words. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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