Date: 05/14/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Let's put that girl in Georg's room so we can finish. Okay, why not :P
*What the fuck is this girl doing in my room?
I laughed my ass off and it was a hot fic too.
Good job!
(Sorry for my bad English, it's not my mother language)
Date: 11/22/07 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hehehehehehe;;
Made me giggle;
Giggle giggle;
More soon please;;;;;;
Date: 10/30/07 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
i liked the story, but there's alot of spelling and grammar mistakes in your fics, and you need to work on your sentence and paragraph structure. but the plots are nice =]
Date: 10/28/07 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
You guys, seems to have a little problem, about the different times.. ^^;;
But anyways, I like it. ^^;;
Date: 10/10/07 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice I think I like chocolate frosting so much more now.
Date: 09/21/07 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1
hahahhahah that was great!!! poor georg :P!!! great story!! ^_^
Date: 09/10/07 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good written;D Liked it!!
Date: 09/10/07 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good written;D Liked it!!
Date: 08/19/07 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG...THATS WAS WOW....WOW...OMG...very vived...omg...wow...extreamly creative writing...but if all that was true i wood be so fucking sad b/c i dont want them to be gay..but omg...that was...i liked it...LMAO!!!
Date: 08/06/07 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! so good... Made me wanna eat chocolate after I read it :P
Date: 08/05/07 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL. Mmm, not bad. Sweet, I enjoyed it :)
Date: 08/05/07 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! this is such a funny story ... continue XD
Date: 08/04/07 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just a suggestion, girls, you should try breaking this fanfiction into more paragraphs. It's sort of difficult to read as is. Plus, paragraph breaks after dialogue would be great, too. :) Good luck with it!
