Date: 02/11/11 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
holy crap!! when did you write this one!! i was just re-readin some of your stories and i didnt recognize this bad boy. This was like, borderline sad! " this money they’d paid him in order to really feel each other, to be inside each other and yet not at all. " I honestly would loooove to see a sequel, im kinda nosey and want to see what the twins have to say to him putting, 'no charge' on a piece of paper. super duper loved this one!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much and it's awesome to hear that you were re-reading some of my stories. That's always flattering to hear. Thank you again! :D
Date: 10/25/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing. I was expecting it to be some nicely written smut, and it started that way... and then you broke my heart (in a good way!). Very unexpected. I don't think I've ever seen the twins' relationship treated quite like this. All the twincest I've read so far ended with them having a sexual relationship, even if there was much angst and confusion along the way. I'd have never thought of them in love and choosing to be together but still being too - guilty? Ashamed? I don't know - to actually consumate their relationship. You can see that they're totally in love in this fic - and the one way they can be together is what breaks them, too - because it's obvious they hate the thought of anyone else touching each other, but they feel like they need it in order to be with each other, and they can't help but need to be with each other. Your writing is so good that even though it wasn't from their pov, I didn't need it in order to understand just what they feel. That was really powerful, and so original. One of the best fics I've read in this fandom.
Author's Response: Wow, what a wonderful review. I'm more than thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much. I love that it surprised you, but more than that, it means so much to me that you were able to understand what the twins were feeling in the story, without being explicitly told. I feel like that's a WIN for me and a job well done. And goodness, your words are high praise. Thank you again, so much! :)
Date: 10/01/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
That was one of the most intense, powerful onshots I have read so far on THF. Simply incredible. I won´t go into lengthy repetitive praises because I would have been saying all over what Estricnina had already said. I could sign under her review...exactly my thoughts.
This story was so incredibly masterfully crafted and orchestrated, there was absolutely nothing predictable in it. It had a soul, a heart, a purpose AND a brain. So cleverly thought through and so intelligently and delicately executed. You balanced it supremely well and it can be pretty difficult when handling such subject. I still can´t get over how great this thing is. By ending it the way you did, you brought it to a totally another level.
MAGNIFIQUE
(my little selfish me just hope you would consider a sequel because it definitely has a potential.... with Georg playing out a role of savior angel on their way to break down that thick wall they have to deal with.....but of course sometimes is better let such masterpieces to be instead of turning them into sequel clichés.....it is just you have a gift and this story HAS potential to develop it further.....just saying:-) )
Splendid work, girl!
Author's Response: I've kept this review open in a tab since I first saw it, and I've had to periodically come back to look at it because those are some of the most amazing, complimentary and appreciated words anyone has ever said to me about my writing. That you found all that in my story absolutely thrills me. Thank you so, so much.
I really like the idea of leaving the reader to decide how things go after this, though I am never one to say never. I will definitely consider it, though I have to make no promises. I'm really just happy that you'd like to see more. Again, thank you. :D
Date: 09/24/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that's not quite what I expected. But it's very interesting and kinda sad. It could be developed into a very twisted and yet amazing chaptered fic. Either way, fantastic job as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 09/20/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the entire thing! You painted the mood so well, used so much description. Georg was such a likable character and I loved the scene with him in his apartment contemplating whether or not to go back to the house. So well done, I wish it would never end!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! It is especially great to hear what you enjoyed most about the story, to know what's effective. It means a lot to me, so thank you again. :)
Date: 09/20/10 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Wowie, where do I begin! @____@ That was amazing, woman! The first half of this fic had me giggling so much, I found it so amusing, especially the way the twins, particularly Bill had Georgie so incredibly nervous. It just made my day. Georg was awesome with his insecurity and yet complete certainty. The whole Pizza Boy thing made this better, it's like, who doesn't want to do the Pizza Boy? (If the Pizza Boy looked like Georg, good grief.)
I wasn't all too sure which way this would go (being unable to predict is refreshing) because I've only read so many three-way fics, but as time went on and I saw where it was headed I have to say I began to expect it to be a little something like Georg > Tom > Bill - just because I didn't think Tom would let Georg's strange cock anywhere near his Bill. In a way it sucks I'm so twincest inclined and BotBill devoted, because I rarely get to see BotTom. I want to, but so long as he's with Bill, my mind will refuse it... haha, anyway, I then proceeded to think, ah, but this is like a twin sandwich, so I guess this is good! XF
Then, the final slice. Oh man, I puled aloud~ I was like 'OmgahwhyizzBillacryingsohnoes?' and then as it progressed, and Georg began to understand, my heart simultaneously burned and sank at once. So sweet, romantic, and yet so heartbreaking, and I understood why they needed Georg. Wow, so touching, it took this fic from great smut to amazing story. I love our Georg, but the times in which the twins had their fleeting moments lost in one another was just so wonderful and you couldn't have written it better.
If I had to read smut, I can only ever hope it's as crafty as shots like this one. Fabulous work, I enjoyed it! *pets Georg's shiny hair* Keep smiling! ^---^
Author's Response: Wow, you know, I've looked at this review every day for the last three days. Sometimes several times a day, just because it's so amazing.
I think that sequence of George>Tom>Bill is what most people would expect, for the reason you give, and I was banking on that a little, just to make people a little uncomfortable, a little itchy over why it is the way it is. But then they get to the end, and look back and it all makes sense, all the little touches and glances, and especially the configuration.
Bill crying almost didn't make it into the story but I'm really glad I left it in. It's much more emotional and really brings their situation home to the reader. I'm really glad that it moved you so much!
Thank you so, so much for taking the time to leave me this. I really appreciate it, and want you to know that it means an awful lot to me. ♥
Date: 09/19/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This probably the most beautifully written story of this sort I've read! I never wanted the story to end. :( It was a delicious read, thank you.
Author's Response: Goodness, thank you. That really is great to hear. :D
Date: 09/19/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow Mel, this must be one of the best thing you've ever written. After all that steaming hot sex I wasn't prepared to be heartbroken. This was beautiful, girl!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, honey! It means so much to me that you liked it! ♥
Date: 09/19/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God. I'm all teary eyed after reading that, such a tragically beautiful fic. Poor twins. Oh I think I need a moment to take a bteather. This fic had just so much to it! I loved reading it from Georg's POV, it made things so interesting so see the twins' relationship from an outsiders point of view. God it's just that end was SO powerful! I can envision Bill tucked in Tom's arms, God poor poor twins.
As well as being sad, this was amazingly sexy as well! Everything that built up with Georg just exploded when the three of them connected. Wow, I'm sorry this is a bit of a poitnless review, I'm not sure what to say that will convey just HOW brilliant this was. I am such a sucker for your writing xD Dude, I can't believe how emotive this fic is. Full of raw lust, love, a combination of the two I think :)
Ah wow, this was incredible. I was so excited to see you'd posted something new! Never a let down, always amazing. So thank you for the update! I'm looking forward to more from you ^____^
Author's Response: Wow. Just wow. This so isn't a pointless review. I love that the story moved you so much, I can't even respond properly. You're always so supportive and sweet and I have to tell you, that means a lot to me. Thank you so, so much for all your kindness and for giving me such great feedback. ♥ ♥
Date: 09/19/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my I really like This its such a different perspective on all of them. All nervous and awkward. Loving sweet and guilty. What an interesting take on it all. I'm sorry there's no more to it. It feels like there's so much that's unwritten.
Author's Response: I really did want to leave it very open, for the readers to fill in the blanks for themselves. I think it's more effective for us to not have everything spelled out in this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it, anyway. Thank you :)
Date: 09/19/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes I wonder if this is how it really is between the twins. The looks they give each other... but wow, beautiful story! I feel unexpectedly proud of Georg. The scene with Bill opening the door and Tom coming up behind him was hot! I love easy and comfortable relationship fic
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much for the lovely comment! I'm sorry I took such a ridiculously long time to reply. ♥
Date: 09/19/10 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my I really like This its such a different perspective on all of them. All nervous and awkward. Loving sweet and guilty. What an interesting take on it all.
Author's Response: I can't believe I didn't see your comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I had fun writing it in such a different way. Thank you for the comment! :D
Date: 09/19/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes I wonder if this is how it really is between the twins. The looks they give each other... but wow, beautiful story! I feel unexpectedly proud of Georg. The scene with Bill opening the door and Tom coming up behind him was hot! I love easy and comfortable relationship fic
Author's Response: You always have to wonder. ;) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Date: 09/19/10 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I am really interested in knowing what inspired you to write this mind blowing story. O_O
Fuck was that awesome!
Author's Response: This was Maria's prompt: Georg is a pizza delivery guy, and has difficulty getting better jobs to support himself. There is a couple living not far from the pizzeria and they're hot. Georg is not sure who is who when he delivers, because the two guys are practically identical. They give good tips, though, and one night they offer something else and Georg is not shy to take the money... and yes this is definitely a NC-17 request :)
The story started out as porn but the twins sort of have a mind of their own and this was just how it had to be. I've learned not to argue. I'm very happy you enjoyed it, and thank you for the kind word! :D
Date: 09/18/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
For most of this, I was like, OMG, HOT THREESOME PORN! And then I was like, AWWW, ROMANTIC TWINPORN! Awesome job :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 09/18/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Still absolutely haunting. Guh...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you again. ♥
Date: 09/18/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh. my. fucking. god!
and i mean that in a good way!
Author's Response: Then I will take it in a good way! I'm very happy the story moved you that much. Thank you!
Date: 09/18/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww poor twins, so obviously and deeply in love with each other. This was an amazing fic, I really loved it. Sweet and very hot, the best kind of story :P
I adore Georg's character, especially in the end when he realize that they are twins and need him to be able to be together... Really good story! :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. These twins really broke my heart to write, but bless Georg for being there for them. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. :)
Date: 09/18/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohhh man, that was hot and heartbreaking at the same time.....my chest still hurts. :(
poor boys. *sigh* just.....damn.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you had such a visceral reaction to the story. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 09/18/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is.. Incredible.
Really good and at the same time fucking heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad it affected you. :)